20 GraND and Lady Fiya in "In Da Club"
 

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In Da Club
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162657
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162017

aint workin, but ill peep it later.... i didnt know Lady Fiya did audio???? aw, im just not up on that ish

peep my Open Mic "Poloroid Picture"

it works lol
dont know what ur deal is lol j/p holla

word, i gotta add that to my soundclick page.. i want the other version too, when i get home from school.. :thumbup: i shoulda did mine on another take.. lol

lol its all hood, this ones BANG'N

damn that beat is craZy

lady fiya u sound well innocent and young lol its sweet and quite tight too

20 grand came correct too

we need to collab

both of ya get at me if your interested

aight thanx i take that as a huge compliment cuz kingz u sic... thanx, i'll collab with u sum time.. holla at me.. my AIM= AngelbkaHeavenly ... when i'm at home i got class in 3 minutes.. gtg............. pzz pzz

yeh thats word u came tight, ur the best femcee her jus keeping dropping and ur be an issue for this site cos u will be better than most of the guys

20 grand you emotion is dope... u definately in the top 10 heads here

fo sho, respect mayne, holla at my AIM and1rightherr, we can get something pop'N

This track was good,liked the beat a lot, club beats get you amped, anyway,
2o grand~ you got good mic presence, and your flow was consistent,liked the lyrics too
Fiya~your voice seemed low,and i couldnt decipher your words,you seemed rushed,try to slow down and clear your words up, high voice too..lol, but overall good track for a club song...
quality could be better, honest feed, you know,but good job

thnx for the feed, UPPN

ummm hmmm.......

it was ok...the phone at the end wasnt really necesary...in the beginnin Fiya didnt have good mic presence...like she sounded shy...lol i talked to u about that before...like Fluid said...slow down...flow was good just seemed like it was packed together..good one tho..

I'm not even gonna say nothin about the fact that this was up before our track 20...dats the kinda shit make peeps start beefin


I'm out.

Both had a nice drop...Lady Fiya you got some tight skillz...20 grand i like ya style....its catchy....well keep those tracks coming...pzz ~1~

Jae Millz, Kontro and Triple N jump out the back of the club and shoot 20 grand and lady Fiya for stealin our beat.

LMFAO BLAH nice shit. I hate you bitches. stealin our beat haha. Naww its koo. This shit was ok. 20 grand...................no emotion.. its aiight.........too boring..its like everything else.. u gotta throw something original. this sounds like the SAME OL club track. u gotta come CReATIVE thats why on my song on the hook i went WAT WE GOT HEREEEe then i sang in the background. cuz its original.

lady. ur voice pisses me off at times cuz it stays High through the whoel thing and it dont have no justice behind ur voice. but ur lyrics is koo. but wen u spit put EMOTION behind it. show these niggaz u mean it. chu know

THIS IS CRITIZED FEEDBACK

peep my track

20 Grand, wasn't feelin' your flow at all homie, felt like you came madd generic wit it dogg, no hate, you need to just come more original.

Fiya- Love your voice baby girl, rymes was on point, but you need to work on your emotion and maybe enunciatin, cause your voice and your fast style make some of the words hard to catch, but you was overall livin' up to your name.

Production was aight, liked the beat, even though it was kontros and shit or whateva, liked the way it was mixed. Overall, decent, fiya saved the track. Keep droppin' both of y'all.

-CJ-

its not ur beat if u just dl it from SC... lol
Anyways thnd for the feed, uppn!

Uppnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

I was half feelin it...

Mainly cos I wasnt feelin that beat... Dunno why... but yeah...

20: Ya shit was pretty good... basically just do what everyone else told ya and put some more emotion into it.. youre bound to elevate so keep at it..

fiya: :thumbup: nice... fast is good for you.. u need a little more emotion, but your voice and flow I thought were good.. we should collab sometime..

overall a decent track.. beat = blah to me..

aight.. thanx fa the props.. i have another link.. follow the sig.. i'd collab with you.. hit me up sum time.. ;)

fa sure... ill add ya aim

not bad


stay up

tight shit 20 grand what up? "Reloaded" up in thiz!!!

*listenin*
.... 20 u got good presence.... pretty simple flow tho.. and the lyrics were kinda blah... they were catchy and make a good commercial track but the lyrics werent workin for me wen u were like "wavin are pistols in the air"...... but the presence was enough to keep me listenin.... lady fiya.... High ass voice.. but ur flow is great.... doin it fast as hell and nice.... lost a few of the words, but it really worked well after 20s kinda slow verse..... lyrics were better than 20 no doubt... but u juss sound 12 on the mic.... but thats aight.... pretty good track....