-K'Nuck- vs Tha End
 

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Check in by: 12-03-04 at 04:16 PM

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Tha End has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 04:16 PM.

-K'Nuck- has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 04:19 PM.

heres my drop
Dumb numb nutted cut up what a fuck up mother fucker//
Eaves dropped on his conversation and heres what the convo related//
it went somethin like "my belated friend just came over sucked my dick came on my// chin jumped on it and sat and spinned" see this faggit egotistic fucks gay twins also hes a male hoe but doesnt like the female hole hes a dapple marked in spots carpet munchin mother caught her suckin cunts in the parking lot they must not care if its dark or not they'll get it on in the shopping karts//
so whats it like havin a lesbo mom and bein gay yourself//
you need a shrink dog you need some help//
some self revelation you need some self change and new relations//

Kid by Tha Name of Tha End tryin' to step to me
He the one bout to get finished, like blue testees
Shit off the top of my head, bout to lay this kid in his coffin
His prewritten shit already Dunn, like an Atlanta Falcon
I know it don't take much, but I never half-ass it
This battle's a test, he cheated but still couldnt pass it!
Better listen to my words, it might improve ya game
Cuz you verses me is like poverty battlin' fame
Now pick ya self up, don't quit battlin' cuz 'a me
Just from now on, dont fuck wit K'Nuck, easily known, just look for weezy-wee

(Dunn - Warrick Dunn, RB for the Altlanta Falcons)
(weezy-wee: my sig)

1 -- he's through

Ignore the "//'' between my // chin .................................................. ..

uppin.. come on dont sit on this people.. tons of views but no votes.. VOTE!! please....

uppin'..... come on people vote...................

u didnt drop ur shit dumbass..........................

haha umm... dont u feel stupid when u call someone a dumbass then find out ur wrong..... scroll up.... and watch it before you jump on somebody callin em a dumbass.. that aint how u get respect fam... uppin.....

then its not showin up on my screen cuz i cant see it..............

heres my drop
Dumb numb nutted cut up what a fuck up mother fucker//
Eaves dropped on his conversation and heres what the convo related//
it went somethin like "my belated friend just came over sucked my dick came on my// chin jumped on it and sat and spinned" see this faggit egotistic fucks gay twins also hes a male hoe but doesnt like the female hole hes a dapple marked in spots carpet munchin mother caught her suckin cunts in the parking lot they must not care if its dark or not they'll get it on in the shopping karts//
so whats it like havin a lesbo mom and bein gay yourself//
you need a shrink dog you need some help//
some self revelation you need some self change and new relations//

uppin fo some votes







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Voted For: -K'Nuck-

ok overall this was a horrible battle....i coulda seen better from both...

Punches-Overall knuck gottum....his weren't that good but either were Tha End's.....You need better vocab to boost ya punches too..

Personals-No personals....i aint really see none...i see shit talkin...i didnt even see either of each others names in there....whats up wit that....lol...

Vocab-Well Knuck got this one....he had more complex vocab...tha end you need to start reading a dictionary or suttin .lol so you can boost it....Knuck if your just starting your doing hella good...

enjoyment-Overall I enjoyed Knucks drop a lil more in this one...it wass an iight battle...nothing to spectacular....it wasn't LIKE DAMN THAT WAS nice it was like damn i coulda heard this on the street from a drunk white kid .lol....

Notes:well keep uppin...thats what i gotta say there was a tiem when i was bout as good as ya'll too...so i cant hate too much....well keep coming and practicing...thats all i gotta say...

aight man preciate the vote, uppin....................

uppin............................................. ......

uppin for some votes...............................

Voted For: -K'Nuck-

v/ K'Nuck
this battle was aight...
K'Nuck in my opinion easily took dis, his flow was way better and his punches were as well...
the end really you need a much better structure, i had trouble reading your battle which doesnt help...
Nuck you had some good punches in here, the test one was nice...
the end your verse didnt make too much sense to me either, and like i said it was hard to read...
Nuck you had a good finish as well...
givin dis to Nuck...

Voted For: -K'Nuck-

My vote goes to knuck good drop guy
Tha End juss had a fucked up structure I could hardly read and knuck had better punches too
this was pretty much one sided
hey knuck return tha favor plz

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Voted For: -K'Nuck-

it was an iight bat
flow k
hits k
imagry k
multi k
opener-closure k
vocab k
and imagry k keep uppin it tho homes

hit up on my links peace.

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Voted For: -K'Nuck-

You got this... not becuz ya shit was ill... it was IIGHT... you attempted to use punchlines.. but ya personals did the job in this battle... ya structure was iight... try to use dominant punches iight.... THIS nigga Tha End was fuccin' garbage... ya first two lines didn't rhyme together... and on top of that ya damn structures was horrific.... everything was jammed to gether... why would u strart usin' bars and then quit 4 lines into ya verse... jus fuccin' retarded K'Nuck got this shit...

Voted For: -K'Nuck-

lmao...this was already a weak battle, then tha end comes in with even a weaker verse...lmao
tha end-that verse was wack, nuthin going for u in that...u got merked...ur structure was bad, ur rhyming, u cant even count bars correctly...stick to ur dayjob...for real
k'nucck..-ur verse needs a lil more elevating. ur never gunna better urself battling these wack people. ur rhyming was a lil simple, but better in this battle. ur punches were kinda simple too...that DUNN/ATLANTA FALCON line was ur best, and even that was simple...so i think u should work on that. u had better structure, and u easily put this one away with ur first 2 bars...
overall-this was a weak battle to me...but clearly one-sided. yall should practice a lil more, then elevate...


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