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Forrest Gump 07-08-02 11:33 AM

Sk!llz vs. Devine Visionary
 
16 bar max.
first to 5 3-0 k.o. no funny stuff either partner.
IF it's a beef/hate vote must show proof.




due before 4:00p.m today if he signs in.

g'luck

sK!LLz 07-08-02 11:35 AM

if i check in??<<<<<<<hahahahahahahaha
 
where im at its 11:28

Forrest Gump 07-08-02 11:44 AM

close enough i got 11:35 a.m.

sK!LLz 07-08-02 11:55 AM

umm ok but thats to much time

lets make it that we both have to post before 1:30 or 1 aight

unless you need extra time

Forrest Gump 07-08-02 12:49 PM

on command I'll ~dismantle ya' legs~ single-handed* this verse is mentally demandin', no wonder you ~can't stand it~//
plans to staple your hands 2 your ~pant pockets~* i'll beat you, ~hands down,~ your only option is to watch it//
you're virgin rhymes gettin' raped, i corrupt rookies* as long as you keep ~cummin~ just know that ~i fuck pussies~//
i'll morph into a catapult and see who i'll banish*skip you across 5 planets just to test your aerodynamics //
leave you tongue twisted like fagets speakin' in spanish* you provide the beef, i'll provide bread to complete the sandwich//
i'm the sun rays, that'll shrivel faces to raisins* i gave an abrasion to your skin that had you torn in 4 places//
convulsions go pulsin' through dead emotions* death approached as smooth as application of lotion//
your chances of winning is the same as you having a heterosexual relationship* IT'LL NEVER HAPPEN, like havin' "just one" lays potato chip//(lmao!)

switch up:

Dream of winnin? Its hard to dream when a coma is what sk!llz receives//
My punches hit hard, turning this fruit into more of a vegetable then christopher reeves//
hoe please, weapon of choice is a scale, I could murder this kid in so many weighs//
Amazed ya assholes more stretched out than ya lines from railin so many gays//
Saw how I ruined The first 2...Don't cry now that ya know what it feels like//
Kids a dyke, yeah you sick well take out the C and add an E on...SIKE//



editted to putt (//) these behind like

sK!LLz 07-08-02 12:58 PM

you ask for it now you gonna have it lmao


lets go cocky ass nigga lol


You cant consider yourself confident,... only with 2 winz//
and your the type to shoot at me and miss like ball players taking shots on loose rimz//
my rhymes are sicker than lil kimz,.. pussy lips and throat//
and dont act like you work for the television when you ask for "different strocks"//lol
fagget ass nigga wit no talent, tell me how iz you "devine"?//
when the closes you'll eva be to GOD is if you suddenly die and burried in the same grave as jesus christ//
my shine will leave you blind, fucking up your whole "vision"//
and your rhymes are like dirty rivers, "NO FLOW" and mine is more like many shitting pigeons//

flip flow

time to stop playin

you aint nice at nuttin, so learn something you can perfect//
and you the type to keep asking GOD "why~when~I~see~pussy, my dick!! it never erects?"//lmao!!
when we talk,.. you sweat, cuz im revealling your true i~den~ti~ty//
and they prolly been kickin your ass so much in school, you would swear you got jumped by centipedes//
come on NIGGA PLEASE,.. your trash and your flow stink//
and its impossible for you to flow more than water cuz your more like glucked up waste,,. in broken sinks//no flow at all lol

there you have it 14 bars out of 16 that you had as a limite


oh and this verse wasnt only for you it is for those that said that i prolly cant battle

hahahaha

sK!LLz 07-08-02 01:01 PM

g'luck

lmao

i told you my verse was gonna be posted right ater yours

Forrest Gump 07-08-02 01:11 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by sK!LLz
g'luck

lmao

i told you my verse was gonna be posted right ater yours



you do know you just admitted to recycling a verse

Direkt-Threat 07-08-02 01:13 PM

Very nice battle, good competition, but I think Devine edged the battle by n inch, he just had better vocab and his punches flowed in better. A comment I have sto stress on Devine....the CUM line, are used alot man, and naturally, those lose battles, but you had more punches and vocab to back you up so...

My vote=Devine Visionary

sK!LLz 07-08-02 01:15 PM

ummm nope

all i said was that i was gonna post after you do

due to the fact that i started keystylin as soon as you posted the battle


that verse basically took me like 15 minutes i think

i was gonna post first but since you called me out then i let you post first

sK!LLz 07-08-02 01:18 PM

why you think i said

lets cut the time back to 1 atleast becuz 4 was too much time to right a verse

and dont you see i talk about you

devine, god, shine ect duhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lmao

Forrest Gump 07-08-02 01:21 PM

alright dawg, all in all ya shit was on point how you feel about taggin up?


1-0 me

sK!LLz 07-08-02 01:24 PM

you mean tag teaming up to battle 2 other cats or makin a crew us 2

Forrest Gump 07-08-02 01:31 PM

tag team, i don't seem to work well with crews, beside your new and i'm still relatively new so nobody ill would join.

Forrest Gump 07-08-02 02:42 PM

uppin

PHiLoSoPHiC 07-08-02 03:21 PM

overall, an aight battle, punches were evident. vocab was there

However I feel Divine Visionary took this one from more fluid rhyme scheme to better vocab, however to both of ya'll, as formentioned above, the cum and gay lines are played to a massive extent, elevate heads...

and please, oh please!! stop with the interlude style switches, hahaha, half the time all heads do is add bold letters, and more little symbol quirks....peace

VOTE= Divine Visionary

Forrest Gump 07-08-02 04:59 PM

2-0 me

UN-XPECTED 07-08-02 05:03 PM

NICE BATTLE NIGGAS,SHIT WAS TIGHT BUT IMA GIVE THIS SHIT TA DEVINE,BOTH OF YALL CAME HARD,DEVINE HAD BETTER PUNCHES,VOCAB AND HIS SHIT JUST FLOWED BETTER TO ME..

VOTE=DEVINE

Intrin Sic 07-08-02 05:04 PM

Devine Visionary

- on command I'll ~dismantle ya' legs~ single-handed* this verse is mentally demandin', no wonder you ~can't stand it~//
- plans to staple your hands 2 your ~pant pockets~* i'll beat you, ~hands down,~ your only option is to watch it//
- you're virgin rhymes gettin' raped, i corrupt rookies* as long as you keep ~cummin~ just know that ~i fuck pussies~//

Flow was on point for these opening lines.

- My punches hit hard, turning this fruit into more of a vegetable then christopher reeves//

Mad me laugh.

sK!LLz

- You cant consider yourself confident,... only with 2 winz//
- and your the type to shoot at me and miss like ball players taking shots on loose rimz//

Nice personal there.

I wasn't really feeling much else from sK!LLz's verse. I'm giving this battle to Devine Visionary for a more solid verse. The opening took it.

Forrest Gump 07-08-02 05:04 PM

^^^ damn look at the pic.Kk.k.k.k.k.k.k.k.k.o.

sK!LLz 07-08-02 08:35 PM

my bad i didnt reaspond dawg i had to do something so i got off line

but yeah lets do that tag shit

p.s nice battle


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