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Oz™ 11-30-04 08:49 PM

?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿ vs Big Woody
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines(3-4 bars)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Crew Battle...

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 12-03-04 at 08:49 PM

Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in.

System 11-30-04 08:49 PM

?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 08:49 PM.

System 12-01-04 12:02 AM

Big Woody has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 12:02 AM.

Oz™ 12-02-04 07:03 PM

Try if you mite,ass-wipe,but u still unable ta Put-Up-A-Fight,
So watch as i have woody Finished In Less Than 2mins. like cookin Bagel Bites
skills of a newbie,but wait!i think ive heard about you Woody,
Heard you was good on tha site,nah,mustve been Disney Movies!,
Attemptin Ta Battle Me?Wody you History,
Cuz When You Bitin verses is tha only time u Tastin Victory

explanations-

bar 1:you shuld get it
bar 2:woody is a character in a disney movie called "toy story"
bar 3:when you bite on somethin,u taste it

uppin

Oz™ 12-02-04 07:09 PM

where ya at..........................................

YuNG TiLT 12-02-04 10:42 PM

im herr...school is taking up my time...but i'll drop...dont tripp

Oz™ 12-03-04 07:46 PM

chea.............................................. .......

YuNG TiLT 12-04-04 02:06 AM

My first crew battle so check

You claim to be "half spectacular" but ur rhymes seek no profection...
I think ur all talk and no action, ur daddy shoulda used protection...
And ur other side is supposed to be "*amazing*" too?...
Damn thats a dream, my punches must be phasing u...(ooooh)
To beat me, u'll need to call back-up from tha "VT Regime"...
Kuase my shit flows cleaner than antiseptic insect cream...
"Hex ya script", kause im a manifested "Polt-er-giest"...
U couldnt come "hard and to tha point" even if u "poked at ice"...

~1~

Oz™ 12-04-04 03:43 AM

str8.......now uppin votez people......................

Oz™ 12-04-04 02:30 PM

votez would be nice..................................

Oz™ 12-04-04 11:52 PM

uppin............................................. .....

Ike 12-05-04 12:55 AM

Voted For: ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

ok pretty nice battle

there were no multis used so that plays no factor in the vote....it could have if someone would have used some

spectac......your first bar came pretty hard and was very original....i loved the bagel bite idea...nice
2nd bar was original too with the woody from disney but i felt u could have came harder with it....could have made it a more hard hitting line.....still decent though
3rd bar was decent....the bitin and tastin victory was kind of original......prolly your worst bar

big woody.....1st bar was played bad....u cant use the "your dad should have used protection" line no more....its played
2nd bar was the nicest bar in the verse.....a little multi involved in it....hit pretty hard
3rd bar....it was ok but no diss involved in it....pointless bar because u talked about yourself
4th bar...little multi in there....it was decent....kind of original...pretty hard hitting...

overall i vote for spectac because his verse overall was more original than bigs....he had more personals in his verse and he played off of his name better......punches from both hit decent.....good battle no hate involved.....

50Cal. 12-05-04 01:07 AM

Voted For: ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

ok the guy with the crazy ass name first good flow nice opening punch too the disney movie line was dope but no you dick woody was from a pixar movie but i get the point ender was good also a 7/10
woody no punches at all good structure and vocab but you need to use punches and metaphores like your oppenant did and thats why i think you lost a 4/10

streetryda 12-05-04 09:56 AM

This was feedback posted for Big Woody
 
nice drop fam......did well.....jus hope we stay as a crew...

Oz™ 12-05-04 02:28 PM

uppin............................................. .........

Nynth Degree 12-05-04 04:10 PM

Voted For: ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

1/2Spectacular1/2Amazing:
Try if you mite,ass-wipe,but u still unable ta Put-Up-A-Fight,
So watch as i have woody Finished In Less Than 2mins. like cookin Bagel Bites
Ok attempt at multis, stretched 2nd line, decent overall
skills of a newbie,but wait!i think ive heard about you Woody,
Heard you was good on tha site,nah,mustve been Disney Movies!,
Alright personal play off his name
Attemptin Ta Battle Me?Wody you History,
Cuz When You Bitin verses is tha only time u Tastin Victory
decent

Big Woody:
You claim to be "half spectacular" but ur rhymes seek no profection...
I think ur all talk and no action, ur daddy shoulda used protection...
decent opener
And ur other side is supposed to be "*amazing*" too?...
Damn thats a dream, my punches must be phasing u...(ooooh)
playing up your own punches = wack, don't be your own audience
To beat me, u'll need to call back-up from tha "VT Regime"...
Kuase my shit flows cleaner than antiseptic insect cream...
Self-glorification, doo doo
"Hex ya script", kause im a manifested "Polt-er-giest"...
U couldnt come "hard and to tha point" even if u "poked at ice"
Decent closer, ok punch

Winner:1/2 and 1/2, for harder punches...

RTF at one of the TAGS in my sig...do it honestly

Oz™ 12-05-04 07:07 PM

uppin.................................3-0..................

Oz™ 12-07-04 07:54 PM

uppin peeple........................................

Oz™ 12-08-04 08:14 PM

upp upp uppin......................................

Oz™ 12-10-04 11:02 PM

uppin............................................. ..

Oz™ 12-15-04 09:57 PM

uppin folkz............................................. ...

Oz™ 12-16-04 03:46 PM

all i need are votes......is that so much to ask for?????????????

Oz™ 12-17-04 10:23 PM

Uppin.......................................

Oz™ 12-19-04 07:12 PM

upppin............................................ ..

Oz™ 12-20-04 09:14 PM

uppin............................................. .

Oz™ 12-26-04 02:01 PM

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TAKENOTICE 12-26-04 06:48 PM

Voted For: ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

Try if you mite,ass-wipe,but u still unable ta Put-Up-A-Fight,
So watch as i have woody Finished In Less Than 2mins. like cookin Bagel Bites

aight wordplay seemed stretched got the point though

skills of a newbie,but wait!i think ive heard about you Woody,
Heard you was good on tha site,nah,mustve been Disney Movies!

i liked this the wordplay was original to me

Attemptin Ta Battle Me?Wody you History,
Cuz When You Bitin verses is tha only time u Tastin Victory

okay
i liked his wordplay and how he worked on his opponents name a lil bit...



You claim to be "half spectacular" but ur rhymes seek no profection...
I think ur all talk and no action, ur daddy shoulda used protection...

ok attempt at vocab but second line played so it weakens the bar

And ur other side is supposed to be "*amazing*" too?...
Damn thats a dream, my punches must be phasing u...(ooooh)

i liked it but sortah a self glory line with a slight attempt at a punch

To beat me, u'll need to call back-up from tha "VT Regime"...
Kuase my shit flows cleaner than antiseptic insect cream...

okay nice attempt

"Hex ya script", kause im a manifested "Polt-er-giest"...
U couldnt come "hard and to tha point" even if u "poked at ice"...

aight closer prolly the best hit of your verse

ill logic gets this i was just fellin that he tried harder to attack his opponent..

TAKENOTICE 12-26-04 06:50 PM

i meant to say 1/2 and 1/2 got this my bad link in sig for votes

Oz™ 12-26-04 06:51 PM

^______________________^

Oz™ 12-27-04 05:04 PM

uppin.............................................

Dex 12-27-04 06:02 PM

Voted For: ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

Ill.Logic:
Try if you mite,ass-wipe,but u still unable ta Put-Up-A-Fight,
So watch as i have woody Finished In Less Than 2mins. like cookin Bagel Bites
^^This is heavy opener. Beat the other open. Good use of metas, structure changed but worked. Punch landed well 7/10

skills of a newbie,but wait!i think ive heard about you Woody,
Heard you was good on tha site,nah,mustve been Disney Movies!,
^^Worked well, good meta with good punch that landed 8/10

Attemptin Ta Battle Me?Wody you History,
Cuz When You Bitin verses is tha only time u Tastin Victory
^^Ok, not bad. Alrite punch. Could have been a heavier closing 6/10
21/30: 70%


Big Woody
You claim to be "half spectacular" but ur rhymes seek no profection...
I think ur all talk and no action, ur daddy shoulda used protection...
^^Nice one with this bro landed the punch. 6/10

And ur other side is supposed to be "*amazing*" too?...
Damn thats a dream, my punches must be phasing u...(ooooh)
^^OK here, still no real metas, bit of wordplay 6/10

To beat me, u'll need to call back-up from tha "VT Regime"...
Kuase my shit flows cleaner than antiseptic insect cream...
^^I liked this punch, quite clever well done 7/10

"Hex ya script", kause im a manifested "Polt-er-giest"...
U couldnt come "hard and to tha point" even if u "poked at ice"...
^^Ok. Havent really felt the punches. 6/10
25/40: 63%

I wasnt a big fan of Big Woody's punches, no good complicated wordplay and metas but still good. Got outclassed in this battle i think by Ill.logic


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