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TitoBronsky 12-01-04 02:48 AM

Quick diss to J-poll and Tha Q
 
:laugh2:


juss a quick diss track , i aint seen a response yet to "hey i" ..... so i juss put together a lil something ........



:gfy:


dont get it twisted i know all about the quality........ no time for mixing when your recording at 2:30 in the morning..... :thumbup:


"EZ"

TitoBronsky 12-01-04 12:52 PM

links in the siggy to the diss track


first song on the top..........


"ez"

fluidmoon 12-01-04 01:12 PM

Tito man, your lyrics were fire...your flow was thorough and i love this beat, good track overall,i dont have to tell you about quality cus you know already,but dope track otherwise fam....1

Tha Q 12-01-04 02:37 PM

^^^Actually, I'd like to hear you explain to him about his "quality".


:)

Enygma 12-01-04 02:42 PM

Why do you constantly say that you know the quality sucks...why don't you just fix it. Read a fucking tutorial and fix your fucking quality.

Now....on to the song. Vocals were too loud. I honestly think you could have made this track ten times better if you just lowered the vocals a little and put a little emotion into what you were spitting. Lyrics were ok.....nothing too special. Flow wasn't bad, but you have an unusual way of not rhyming your words at the end of every bar.....I guess some people like that, but to me it just sounds kinda lame. You'll probably just take this as me hating on you, but if I don't tell you what you need to fix, who will? Anyway, you have potential, but it just seems like you're being lazy. Step up to the plate and show us what you really got :thumbup:

Tha Q 12-01-04 02:50 PM

^^Word...good advice...but they voted this nigga "best flow" on RV...crazy...

Tito's flow is awful...he's not on beat and he just seems to not care...

Delivery, on the other hand, is a different story...I love Tito's breath control and pauses...those are tyte...and his voice is tyte...he also has good punches...

But, my flow is DEF. better than titos.PERIOD.

Ca'lam 12-01-04 03:34 PM

na his flwo is in multis.. so every phrase stands alone.. not like a sentence that rhyme na ' mean ?.. his flow is nice i admit.. its not ya average.. ^ enygma the pygma :).. his flow is complex.. its not xxxxxxxxxa,xxxxxxxxxa

its liek xxxxBxxxxa
xxxxxaxxxxb
so it flows cause u remember the rhyme from a while ago na mean ? thats hard to do.. but if he thats the natural way his brain look at it, then its easy for him.. his flow is nice..

tha q, your on beat more than him, but ur flow is almost kinda boring =/.. you have a nice flow, but the same as everyone else.... xxxxxxxxxxxxxC,xxxxxxxxxxC,xxxxxxxxxxxC,,,, na mean ?.. so hes like a breathe of fresh air on this site, cause all in all the audio is garbage.. you got vertain ones, but u got alot of unelevated audio heads here also.... so the people on here jsut dont here ill audio all the time.. like rapmusic.com... they have emcees there that would eat every single one of us aline here.... dzk is on there sometimes also.. but im feelin his flow... but he doesent have the best flow, cause how can you compare all the diff flows on here ?.. lyrically i think he was pretty solid.. he had some nice metaphores.. alot of filler tho.. but safe dro man.. keep up the good work -1

JPoll 12-01-04 03:51 PM

because he has so many multi's it makes all his punches oh so simple...

i like when deaded me...then if want beef just thread it...

I already did...wtf...

Tha Q 12-01-04 03:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phoenix
na his flwo is in multis.. so every phrase stands alone.. not like a sentence that rhyme na ' mean ?.. his flow is nice i admit.. its not ya average.. ^ enygma the pygma :).. his flow is complex.. its not xxxxxxxxxa,xxxxxxxxxa

its liek xxxxBxxxxa
xxxxxaxxxxb
so it flows cause u remember the rhyme from a while ago na mean ? thats hard to do.. but if he thats the natural way his brain look at it, then its easy for him.. his flow is nice..

tha q, your on beat more than him, but ur flow is almost kinda boring =/.. you have a nice flow, but the same as everyone else.... xxxxxxxxxxxxxC,xxxxxxxxxxC,xxxxxxxxxxxC,,,, na mean ?.. so hes like a breathe of fresh air on this site, cause all in all the audio is garbage.. you got vertain ones, but u got alot of unelevated audio heads here also.... so the people on here jsut dont here ill audio all the time.. like rapmusic.com... they have emcees there that would eat every single one of us aline here.... dzk is on there sometimes also.. but im feelin his flow... but he doesent have the best flow, cause how can you compare all the diff flows on here ?.. lyrically i think he was pretty solid.. he had some nice metaphores.. alot of filler tho.. but safe dro man.. keep up the good work -1



i adpat my flow to the beat...so my latest track im using multi syllables like a mufucka...I got more than one style...however, my bread and butter flow is better than Titos...don't confuse flow with delivery...my flow is better than his

Please, if its not feedback to the song, save it for PM or Take it to another forum, The forum in general is getting swamped with Freeposts and Conversations back and forth in threads, I've been guilty of it too- but please lets kill the freepostin everywhere from everyone, its useless and it aint helpin anyone.

Ca'lam 12-01-04 04:13 PM

eh, ihear whatr you sayin.. but flow and delivery are int he same catagory.. one without the other is like cereal no milk.. u can stand to eat it, but its always better with milk.. honestly, his flow is more complex and more intriguing.. he does get off sometimes, but in time he wont... flow wise at this point.. i guess yes, yours is more experienced.. but not better.. i wont compare styles like that..we all have our strong and weak points -1

Tha Q 12-01-04 04:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phoenix
eh, ihear whatr you sayin.. but flow and delivery are int he same catagory.. one without the other is like cereal no milk.. u can stand to eat it, but its always better with milk.. honestly, his flow is more complex and more intriguing.. he does get off sometimes, but in time he wont... flow wise at this point.. i guess yes, yours is more experienced.. but not better.. i wont compare styles like that..we all have our strong and weak points -1




nah...u said my rhyme scheme was basic and that's ridiculous...I ain't even talkin flow now or how I flow It...my flow is better because I flow on beat...why u think some people can flow and others can't...break down those lyrics and see who has the more complex "flow"...I think you'll find my rhyme schemes are quite interesting...don't listen to one fuckin song and pass a judgment kid

Ca'lam 12-01-04 04:20 PM

lol.. first off dont call me "kid".. second off.. iv dropped feed back in at least 3 of your joints... im droppin opinions... yes, your flow doesent get of beat, but its a generic flow.. everyone has that kind of flow.. there nothing that says tha q on your flow.. titos is orginal.. that is what makes a flow good.. not the technicalaties of it.. his flow is a breathe of fresh air, because you dont see it all the time.. thats why i would prefer to listen to that kind of flow put up against yours.. but i aint sayin ones better than the other.. get your panties out of a bunch lol..

EastCoast 12-01-04 04:36 PM

i liked tha shit for one reason.....................
...............i hate jpoll too.................
...............i aint got neo beef wit tha q though..............
but oh well......Good drop homie..................................

Key... 12-01-04 04:58 PM

Quality can be fixed.

Nice drop i have to say.....some punches..made me laugh...

Vocals were little loud...Flow could be lil smooth but hey is a diss so it doesnt really matter....nice drop

Tony Rove 12-01-04 06:07 PM

To the homey who mentioned dzk... he lives in the same town as me... dope for real... jus finished a track with him and k nice... be on the look out for that... enough of my self promotion... lol

the track... like the beat....i think ive told u before.. i like your style.. shit is distinctive...can tell its u.. i fux with it.. but ima buy u a mic or somethin.. cuz ur vocals are killin the monitors... flow isnt that bad actually..i feel you should show a bit more emotion when its a diss track.. but all and all this shit was pretty good..

Pz.

JRoy 12-01-04 06:15 PM

Overall its not the best the i ever heard you did....i've heard you do better....what program are you using? because if your using cool edit...then well it should be really easy to mix...check the audio assitance page for that it explains how to mix better....well i'd give it overall bouta 7.5/10

Tha Q 12-01-04 06:55 PM

^^^I could help him...but he's so "dope" he should figure that shit out for himself

TitoBronsky 12-01-04 09:57 PM

hahahahahahaha


yea....... qualitys a real "F" bomb aint it?

i promise i'll try to mix my next joint before droping it.... and i realy did lower my vocals...... any more and i would probly mute them...... im working on it though..... aint realy been messing wit cool edit except for inserting a beat and recording my vocals and saving the track as an MP3..........

i'll work on my sound quality though for real......

good looking yall....... thanks for the feed back........


"ez"

50Cal. 12-02-04 12:22 AM

your flow is amazing and anyone who says not his mothers a bitch now to the song.you got a eminem flow which is both good and bad flow was dope as fuck nice lyrics good shit overall i can honestly say your the dopest on rv now by that track and theyve been owned check my audio ill post on saturday:)

TitoBronsky 12-02-04 06:24 PM

good looks FAMO.........


respect the feed back........

Tha Q 12-02-04 10:55 PM

Here's some more feed yo...i asked my man Loco to check u out..Loco is my online rap mentor...lol...ne way...I'm socrates3442...he's obviously Locetic...

Socrates3442 [10:48 PM]: yea well...the argument started when someone said this kid named TITO had a better flow than I did...BULLSHIT...this kid's flow is awful...his Delivery is perhaps better than mine...so they were like "His shit is complex and urs is basic:
Socrates3442 [10:48 PM]: so dat pissed me off
Socrates3442 [10:48 PM]: actually...would u listen to one of his tracks and u lemme know what u think?
Locetic Prophet [10:48 PM]: k
Socrates3442 [10:50 PM]: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/titobronskymusic.htm
Locetic Prophet [10:50 PM]: 404- not found
Socrates3442 [10:50 PM]: Tito Bronsky - free MP3 music downloads on SoundClick
Locetic Prophet [10:50 PM]: awh u forgot htm on link lol
Socrates3442 [10:52 PM]: word
Locetic Prophet [10:53 PM]: he actually got not bad flow he need some work n that but hes rhymes arent all that complex lol
Socrates3442 [10:53 PM]: right...i think his delivery is better than his flow...
Socrates3442 [10:53 PM]: but Im on beat way more than he is
Socrates3442 [10:53 PM]: that Q diss is his best track
Socrates3442 [10:53 PM]: it gets worse from there
Locetic Prophet [10:53 PM]: yeah
Locetic Prophet [10:53 PM]: im noticing that lol
Locetic Prophet [10:54 PM]: if he practised a lot he could be pretty good, sound like he got something in his throat tho lol
Socrates3442 [10:54 PM]: lol
Socrates3442 [10:54 PM]: imma post this convo on there
Socrates3442 [10:54 PM]: lol

Ca'lam 12-02-04 11:26 PM

lol emp.. kid is good.. but i aint gon let his head get to big.. he aint the best.. lol..... he good.. lol -1

TitoBronsky 12-03-04 12:53 AM

i dont and never will claim to be the best......

all i do is me....... and what yall think..... good , bad what eva.... is coo wit me.....

i appreciate the feed back from all ....... but dont get it twisted.... i never Claimed to be the best... or the illest or the .... whatever word you wanna use to clasify greatness....

all i do is me....... and if you cant respect that..... then FAAAAAA QQQQQQ

nah mean?


Q stop hating cuz "NIGGAS" think im better than you....... thats they opinion..... last time i checked people were allowed to have those....

ps.... posting your little aim convo is GAY

:gfy:

50Cal. 12-03-04 02:04 AM

i like his shit i think hes good ill finish tha q tommorow


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