Big-Scoot vs distilled
 

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Check in by: 12-04-04 at 08:58 PM

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Big-Scoot has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 08:59 PM.

distilled has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 09:00 PM.

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Who the hell are you man??????

SEriously.......

Detroit's King Nigga, Dream Team General, and yo worse Nightmare


Nuff Said


Realest Niggaz On The Scen Known as The Dream Team/

Gat Ready For What We Buildin

When u set a battle wit Big Scoot u don't even wanna show up/
Cuz my rhymes is sickenin when I get the spittin it like throw up/
Fuck baby cuz I'm tha birdman on this block/
Cuz I'm holdin mo birds than a nigga wit chicken pox/
And I know MC's that's glad they blind cuz they don't really wanna see me/
And I bet u wish u was blind cuz u don't really wanna see me/
Cuz u a sweet Nigga like a fag wit diabetes/
And I don't like to repeat myself but u don't really wanna see me/
Cuz to me u nobody like a fuckin John Doe/
Das why you get no respect like a pimp without a hoe/


Dream Team Bitch

Get Ready for What we Buildin

This Kid's Delirious, he thinks he's representin The Dream Team,
The Chances of you gettin on there are roughly 1 to infinity,
Why you set-up this battle, honestly I'll never know,
You wouldn't even snag a win if I went and no-showed,
The System would just read and reject your wack verse,
Don't gotta go home, but you gotta get the hell off RapVerse,
Killed you in 6 lines, now I'm runnin a post mortem on ya,
Only way I'd get wack lines, Is if I bought 'em from ya

Noun.........

Fucka Big Scoot

Dont try vote for yourself either hoe...


Uppin for votes

This was feedback posted for distilled
 

Look This was Silly Bcuz Big Scoot Your gonna loose this for sure mayne i mean dang u Used the same line 3-4 times your not gonna win mayne im sorry to say but wacth the outcome and oh yeah im not gonna vote bcuz i wouldve voted for distilled and Big-Scoot wouldve said i was votin out of the beef we got so i decided not to vote but watch the outcome of this battle now im tellin Ya.....

Ok man, I see your point.

Someone vote, just so people know we'v posted the verses.

Fucka MAB :thumbup:

Voted For: distilled

yo u was hot your rhymes really make sense keep it up. HOLLA

Can you explain that a bit more man???

I don't think it will be allowed to just say that

Voted For: distilled

Dis:
Oh This Was One Sided Flow Was All On DisTilled Structure Was Decent Neat Clean Vocabulary SHort And Sweet Punches Was Hitting Hard I See You Played Of Some Words That's Tight Good Shit Kid...9/10

Big:
Dam Kid Your Structure Was Whacked...Honestly Elivation Is Needed Wasnt Feeling Punches It's Weack Personals Wasnt There Not Very Decen Vocabulary And Flow Just Wasnt Right....6/10

Vote=DisTilled His Verse Came Much Better I Was Feeling THe Flow Vocabulary Was Decent And Structure...Nuff Said...

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Voted For: distilled


Fuck baby cuz I'm tha birdman on this block/
Cuz I'm holdin mo birds than a nigga wit chicken pox/
niggaz with chicken pox hold birds?

And I know MC's that's glad they blind cuz they don't really wanna see me/
And I bet u wish u was blind cuz u don't really wanna see me/
why the hell do you repeat the line twice??

Cuz u a sweet Nigga like a fag wit diabetes/
fags with diabetes are sweet?

This verse confused me.. Don't rhyme a word with itself, it sounds herbish. And only use wordplay if it makes sense. I really can't understand your punches.

distilled
i guess you dissed him more and you had much better flow. Also your punches made sense to me and you didn't keep repeating yourself

BTW can you drop a vote on my battle plz?

I know i'm not supposed to put this in a spereate post but i forgot to put it in the other one.
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Man I guess niggaz really gotta explain what the hell they are talkin bout huh??? Well, if that's what u need ok.

Chicken pox dawg.....chicken, bird.......chicken, bird What's not to get???

Diabetes is a sugar related disease, and fag's are often referred to as sweet....you couldn't get that???

But it's cool, I definitely respect ya vote

Dream Team General

Get Ready 4 What We Buildin

Bumpin dat ish hshshsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Upping this.............................................. ......

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This was feedback posted for Big-Scoot
 

ok.........ummmmm........y wuz like half ya verse self-glorification

I am dead.


Look at My Open Mic.

D Di Die

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The Fuck

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Voted For: distilled

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to distilled flow but it still could have been a little better with the punchlines, Nice sructure to both verses, Big Scott had some ok line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible
nice battle

Please return the favor on my battle
I know its a lil weak but its ok

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Uppin.

Good vote, I guess all newbs arebnt fools.

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Voted For: distilled

okok it was all right both need to elevate and here the break down:
opener: big
punches: no one
personnals distilled
mults distilled
flow distilled
style both
closer no one