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Bizzy vs mistah_tate
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-03-04 at 11:01 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
mistah_tate has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 11:03 AM.
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Bizzy has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 11:03 AM.
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ILL Vocalists? You must be deep-throaterz with SCABIES-n-CRABS (get it?)
With RABIES-n-SCABS from LICKIN'-DICKS of "FAKE"-LADIES-IN-CABS/ mistah's-A-FAG that CLICKS-n-DRAGS and SPITS-n-BRAGS bout DICKS-HE-GRABS I'll RIP-n-GNASH these B*TCHES-GASHED (dag!) Your verse stinks like PITTS-&-ASS/ My FIST-IS-FAST when I HIT-n-BASH, so you're "History" like HITLER'S-PAST I'll EQUIP-THIS-MASK and BLAST LYRIC-GAS till' you're dissolved into LIQUID-ASH/ I'll WHIP-n-LASH ya'll like us Blacks wuz when whites said,"YER-SHIP-IS-CRASHED!" I'm SPLITTIN'-CASH WIT'-STUTTER, while you STUFF-BUTTS IN-GUTTERS WIT'-EACHOTHER LICKIN'-ASS/ LISTEN-FAGS, My vocals are clear-n-SHARP so when I TAWK; Im SPITTIN'-GLASS Thats SLITTIN' ya' neck till' you SPIT-n-GASP; STRIP-n-SLASH ya'll till I see blood DRIP-n-SPLASH/ I DISMISS WRITTEN-TRASH; when mistah, "Drops His", bizzy FLUSHes-HIS-"SH*T"-n-LAUGHS We're text Heavy-weights and mistah's "circus crew" is in the FUKKEN-MIDGET-CLASS/ Think TWICE cause bizz's KNIFE will SLICE-n-DICE you DYKES till' you CHICKENS-"PASS" "MoBb BarZs" suffers from "PaRaNoia" cuz da news shows how "mistah" be STICKIN'-ASS/ Yo' DICK-IS-RASHED so now you're ILL? STILL-I-KILL cuz you-&-yo' WHITE-FRIEND-BITE No "Vocals" last when ya' RIPPED-TWICE by THICK-SPIKES that SLICE-WIND-PIPES/ its over |
uppin for verse...................................
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i'll lyrically spin this bitch bizzy until his composure is dizzy you should call me celibent, cuz you cant really fuck wit me this battle is just wieght on your shoulders like that block on yo neck you no kin to kanye so you wont be survivin through this wreck it seems you started your menstral cycle, judging from your bad mood i'm devourin this cat early on like he just a plate of breakfast food you really a 'busy' bodied whore just tryin to even out the score but after this, i guarantee your wins will still only amount to four the only way you could ever see me is if i stepped 10 levels down and even then you'd have to push your tip toes to the ground you equivalent to crack on the streets, cuz i'm pushin you hard i'm slappin the skin off ya face, so say goodbye to your 'black card'* and no it's not ova yet, man you aint even seen the credits you aint been beat like this since you ordered a gay porn through fedex but lets cut the bullshit, you weak like a first time smoka after a bong hit you soft and now you moanin, like your mother after i massage her clit yea i just went there, travelled by air, and already came back i hurt your heart and and your pride now you hangin low like my nut sack |
Voted For: mistah_tate
Aii Mayne Look I Wasnt Hatin On Neither verse but Bizzy Ya Verse Wasnt Convincing Enough to Get My vote I mean I Like The way You Held That flow N rythm n Same Ryme Throughout The Verse But You only Had A few punchez n Perosonals Mayne It was A Close battle but to me Mistah_tate got this One Mayne Sorry ********************************************** Plz Vote In My Battles Atleast Two Plz I Dont Have N e Votes At All Plz Do Me The Favor ********************************************** Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Bizzy
aiyo this was a hott battloe for thr both of you\both had nice punches...ill linez...personals were good..this waz a close battle but my decideing factor iz bizzys multiz they were off the hook and gave him the edge in this batlle vote=bizzy Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: mistah_tate
Pretty Close Bizzy had a ok opener...Punches Where ok connecting sum of the time...Vocab was pretty bad seen better from you...Structure not bad but not good...Flow was good...need just a lil more elavating and you got it goin for ya.. Mistah ok opener..Punches where lil better...Vocab alrite...Structure started gettin boring for me...Flow was tite so that means it was good.... v/Mistah but just by a microscopic bit...both are almost to the top of there game...so keep workin this was a good battle Reutrn da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164776 thats the battle!!!vote |
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This was feedback posted for mistah_tate
just check check checkin them polls................... not a bad battle...
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Voted For: Bizzy
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to M_TATE flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, BIZZY had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: mistah_tate
I'd definately go for mistah_tate on this one. It seemed more complex all the way through, relying on wordplay and personals. While Bizzys relied on fake personals, and pretty much wack punches. yea i just went there, travelled by air, and already came back i hurt your heart and and your pride now you hangin low like my nut sack*thats definately one of the best verses... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
oh ya, return tha favor plz
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up[in this old ass battle lets get this shit closed
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Voted For: mistah_tate
yo vote hands dwn goes 2 Tate here.......had good punches and good flow.........overall good shit harder hittin punches ......and good vocab here............... mistah_tate IP: i'll lyrically spin this bitch bizzy until his composure is dizzy you should call me celibent, cuz you cant really fuck wit me this battle is just wieght on your shoulders like that block on yo neck you no kin to kanye so you wont be survivin through this wreck it seems you started your menstral cycle, judging from your bad mood i'm devourin this cat early on like he just a plate of breakfast food you really a 'busy' bodied whore just tryin to even out the score but after this, i guarantee your wins will still only amount to four the only way you could ever see me is if i stepped 10 levels down and even then you'd have to push your tip toes to the ground you equivalent to crack on the streets, cuz i'm pushin you hard i'm slappin the skin off ya face, so say goodbye to your 'black card'* and no it's not ova yet, man you aint even seen the credits you aint been beat like this since you ordered a gay porn through fedex ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ good shit but simple rhyme schemes......y obizzy elevate.......rest my case her e holla bak wit a vote in my battles below......aiight ...return the favour |
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Voted For: mistah_tate
Damn... one sided battle rite here, to me... Casper- you're verse really wasn't bad, but you just had too many multie's... multies aint bad, but you based your verse on them, which took away from your punches and personals, because you focused more on completing a multi than comin wit a hard diss... first line had the potential to be dope, but you didn't finish it... a couple nice lines, like the bizzy line, but overall you just had a lack of good personals and punches, and too many multies.. work on improving your content and rhyming struc... Tate you really had a nice verse here... you had a lot of hard hittin punches, but not many personals, but ya punches made up for it.... opener was nice, didn't understand the 2nd line tho...the breakfast line and period line was played, but they were good lines...ya nicest lines was ya last 6 lines, and they really gave you the win... fedex line was dope, and so was the mom diss.. nice punches... So tate takes this with more creative punches, and better content... Casper you flowed nice and had nice multies, but lacked content and hard disses, so Tate's punches knocked you out V/ Tate... nice battle ya'll |
Voted For: mistah_tate
i like your battle better cuz the hits you had hit harder dawg ya know what i mean but your opponent had some crazy shit too but i would call this a tie but i guess i have to vote so ill give it to you homie |
Voted For: mistah_tate
Checking poll's, ain't got enough post's but i think Mistah_Tate got this. |
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