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Lil C vs Bizzy
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UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-05-04 at 01:05 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Bizzy has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 01:07 PM.
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Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 01:12 PM.
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uppin for ya verse.....................................
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Bizzy... are you retarded? Don't you know you provokin tha hardest?/
You tryna diss but you still on Quentins Dick, you known as the Choke Artist// get bitch smacked on tracks regardless if you spittin on bars/ fuckin with Lil C will, leave ya mug wrapped in plastic like piston guards// splittin ya jaw, ya pride's meant to be broken like laws/ You a fake detroit thug rapper thinkin' he raw?// Nahh, you outta place like D-cup bras on flat-chested broads/ let's go... Skee-Lo retired, why ya disses comin Too Short?// Bizzy tha fag type to mistake Daisy Dukes for dude's shorts/ Get smoked and hooked and thrown off a New-Port// Your chances of bein hard are the same as seein a Muslim chew-pork/ it aint happenin... clappin'em, smackin'em, literally Blowin his mind// Your act need work, you thinkin comebacks from the unemployed line/ alone and confined, trap you behind bars, arrange lines and puts Bizzy on death row// dig in ya chest slow... Why you insistin you ill but only sick with a cold/ another CD that flopped, you need to stick to crip walkin in Wreckage’s basement// you know im sick with it, every time i spit you hope it's contagious/ face-it, dis BLOOD will turn you from bad-boy to altar boy, so you'll be seen in the same way that Mase is// I aint stoppin you callin me a fake Game/ But your crew is what Jay-z would call LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAME . I'm a class act, ya soft as flap jacks that's about to catch a back slap/ so face facts jack, only time ya smooth is when u get ya back waxed// U poppin shit like ya got the skillz for stoppin Quentin, when it's obvious/ I've concocted spits that'll have u loosin ya head like Iraqi hostages// I rhyme wit violence, try me and I'll cause destruction like massive-riots/ rap-wit-niceness, while ya shits harder to stay on than the atkins-diet// so sit back, I spit syntax so quick fast it'll give ya bitch ass whip lash/ Your disses are soiled stuff, so just get that shit outta here like a toilet flush// vicious as a savage rot, think u beatin me u smokin that magic rock/ cuz my fists equipped to smash this jock like a battlebot, hatchin plots// ...have ya ass get robbed then roll past ya block, wearing YOUR hat n watch/ have smooth smacked sliced slashed n shot, broken like a Magnavox// n laugh at dude's pain, beat his ass just for being black on a Tuesday/ when I spit it's doomsday, my punchlines get the job done like a Nextel 2-way// |
posted my verse in da wrong place but oooo well.....uppin 4 urs
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Lil C assumes he's HEAVEN-SENT, now dats' a TRUE-EMBELISH-MENT
The Resuwrek-tion never happened cuz my scripts TEACH and re-write the NEW-TESTAMENT/ Start CONFESSIN-IT, I'll step in Lil C's face and start CURSIN'-IN-IT THe "Violent Type fanclub" don't exist unless your da' only PERSON-IN-IT!/ (ADMIT IT); You guys are like a HEATHEN LEGION givin' PERVERTED-VERSIONS-OF-SERMONS/ I'll STAPLE-these-unSTABLE-TRICKZ to a CRUCI-FIX and disABLE-this-STUPID-KLICK Ya'll get STRANGLED wit' CABLES-n-MANGLED till' I see PUKE-n-SPIT/ Until Lil C's DICK is SHOOTIN'-PISS stops gettin rhymes from "SPITS-FOR(fer)-RENT" beat change Kyd's voice sounds like he needs a BETTER-SINUS-PILL RESIGN-AT-WILL; Youre the missing MEMBER of CYPRESS-HILL!/ Kyd + SiMpLE StEEZ = bizz (-) MINUS-SKILL I'LL-DESIGN-A-KILL to destroy this Kyd's (kid's) SPINE-n-GRILL/ And if StEEZ REPORTS us to COURT da' jury would only FIND-me-*ILL*/ My MIND-IS-FILLED with vexin' text so whos da NEXT-TA'-BURY? Kyd claims hes audio, but types more than a SEC-RETARY/ Fukk metas and multi's; I don't care what this SONG-IS-SCORING So Change your crew name to "Airport" cuz your "lines" are LONG-n-BORING/ lil c'S VITALS PLUMMIT when "he ." COME-WIT' THROTTLES-ROARIN' I'm SNORIN while STUTTER's POURIN' more shots than ALONZO-MOURNING/ What comes off my tounge is "SICKER" COMPARED TO THESE-ROOKIES Even if they prePARED-to-EAT HAIRY-MEAT from DECEASED-OBESE-PUSSIES/ PLEASE! I RIP-GUYZ dat' SPIT-LIES (besides) dis' B*TCH-CRIES for DICK-RIDES What comes off my tongue is "da SH*T" so I when I part my LIPS I SPIT-FLIES/ I SLIT-EYES WIDE (4.U.2.see): yo' STLYE IS COMPILED-OF-NOTHIN So when you lose you better just say that you KEYSTLYED-OR-SOMETHIN... |
Bizzy... are you retarded? Don't you know you provokin tha hardest?/
You tryna diss but you still on Quentins Dick, you known as the Choke Artist// get bitch smacked on tracks regardless if you spittin on bars/ fuckin with Lil C will, leave ya mug wrapped in plastic like piston guards// splittin ya jaw, ya pride's meant to be broken like laws/ You a fake detroit thug rapper thinkin' he raw?// Nahh, you outta place like D-cup bras on flat-chested broads/ let's go... Skee-Lo retired, why ya disses comin Too Short?// Bizzy tha fag type to mistake Daisy Dukes for dude's shorts/ Get smoked and hooked and thrown off a New-Port// Your chances of bein hard are the same as seein a Muslim chew-pork/ it aint happenin... clappin'em, smackin'em, literally Blowin his mind// Your act need work, you thinkin comebacks from the unemployed line/ alone and confined, trap you behind bars, arrange lines and puts Bizzy on death row// dig in ya chest slow... Why you insistin you ill but only sick with a cold/ another CD that flopped, you need to stick to crip walkin in Wreckage’s basement// you know im sick with it, every time i spit you hope it's contagious/ face-it, dis BLOOD will turn you from bad-boy to altar boy, so you'll be seen in the same way that Mase is// I aint stoppin you callin me a fake Game/ But your crew is what Jay-z would call LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAME . I'm a class act, ya soft as flap jacks that's about to catch a back slap/ so face facts jack, only time ya smooth is when u get ya back waxed// U poppin shit like ya got the skillz for stoppin Quentin, when it's obvious/ I've concocted spits that'll have u loosin ya head like Iraqi hostages// I rhyme wit violence, try me and I'll cause destruction like massive-riots/ rap-wit-niceness, while ya shits harder to stay on than the atkins-diet// so sit back, I spit syntax so quick fast it'll give ya bitch ass whip lash/ Your disses are soiled stuff, so just get that shit outta here like a toilet flush// vicious as a savage rot, think u beatin me u smokin that magic rock/ cuz my fists equipped to smash this jock like a battlebot, hatchin plots// ...have ya ass get robbed then roll past ya block, wearing YOUR hat n watch/ have smooth smacked sliced slashed n shot, broken like a Magnavox// n laugh at dude's pain, beat his ass just for being black on a Tuesday/ when I spit it's doomsday, my punchlines get the job done like a Nextel 2-way// |
omg i dunno i hate dis shit, dont have to do dis shit on my otha sites...SOMEONE fuckin delete ONE of 'em 4 me
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This was feedback posted for Bizzy
lol.........Close Battle But Bizz Dayum Them Punch's!...*Hot*...Think You Clinched This.
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ok 4 ur info im a fuckin girl!!!!!..........................
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so do that mean you suck dick.....................
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Voted For: Lil C
lilc danm ya verse was sick i felt each line and thought u tryed alot harder and was more direct and had better punches with a smother flow bizzy verse was good but at some parts was less effective and come more weak then the other was good but need it more of it to win good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Lil C
cot damn this was a long mothafuckin battle . Yall need to calm down with this shit lol but i think lil C came harder with the punches so ima give it to him bcuz both had good multies and good structure good battle tho 1 holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164176 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lol thanx 4 da feed guyz...n ok STOP callin me a guy im a girl lol damn yo...uppin
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This was feedback posted for Lil C
just check'in poll......
nice drop lilc....... nice drop bizzey..... close one...... |
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This was feedback posted for Lil C
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Voted For: Lil C
Lil C assumes he's HEAVEN-SENT, now dats' a TRUE-EMBELISH-MENT The Resuwrek-tion never happened cuz my scripts TEACH and re-write the NEW-TESTAMENT/ WEAK man Nice hitter here By LILC you know im sick with it, every time i spit you hope it's contagious/ face-it, dis BLOOD will turn you from bad-boy to altar boy, so you'll be seen in the same way that Mase is// Multies, flow, concept, v/C Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
wow didnt expect WRECKAGE to leave a positive feed...damn man...VERY appreciated tho....thanx 4 da feed it will be returned
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Voted For: Bizzy
open: Bizzy, nice punch I like those 2 lines a lot.. close: Bizzy, Lil C rapped about himself, and Bizzy's was actually a diss and it flowed nicely flow: Bizzy, Lil C's lines were a lil stretched personals: Lil C, the detriot rapper line.. metas: Ehh, didn't see that many but closer to Bizzy punches: Bizzy by a lot, nice punches there multis: Bizzy by a lot, had a multie in like almost every line win: Bizzy, good battle.. |
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Voted For: Bizzy
CLOSE BATTLE AND IT WAS DECENT.I WAS FEELIN THE MULTIS THAT U BOTH PRESENTED AND U BOTH HAD GOOD PUNCHES BUT I FEEL THAT BIZZY CAME HARDER WITH IT AND HE WAS WITTIER WITH IT.BOTH HAD BAD STRUCTURES AND FLOWS.YA WAS COMEN STRETCHED AND IT WAS HARD TO FLOW WITH THAT.BIZZY USED SOME WORDPLAY WHICH WAS GOOD AND I LIKED HOW HE USED HIS PERSONALS.GOOD BATTLE TO THE BOTH OF U.MY VOTE GOES TO BIZZY RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY SIG PLZ |
bizzy why dont u ever just leave voters alone why u always gotta delet every single vote agenist u????
DANM dogs u gonna make EVERYONE see what u do and make them not wanna battle u ever cuz all u will do is delet votes till u get the vote and try t get a cheap ass win but i wont let it go down here..... i will have lilc pm strobe to delet those votes bitch......... on a serious note V.T take no bitch niggas..... on another note u shouldnt keep deleting votes cuz it makes battling u wack N corney as hell...... |
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yea i kinda was wonderin who deleted them votes......no doubt ill get on da pmin in a minute....dis is BS!!!...uppin tho
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Voted For: Bizzy
Bizzy took this one obviously... Good cultural references and stuff. Good punches as well. |
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Voted For: Bizzy
V/bizzy.....close battle but biz got my vote he came wit nice vocab ,multi's an punchs that were creative....lil c u had a good verse u had sum good lines but ur weren't consistent in ur diss's or being creaative wit them.....but good battle to both..... punchs=bizzy multi's=tie vocab=tie structure=bizzy overall=bizzy *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
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