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Mark Greyson vs Elusiv G
Battle Rules:
10linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No unexplained votes gluck ...........Peace........... Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 12-02-04 at 03:06 PM Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in. |
Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 02:07 PM.
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Mark Greyson has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 02:17 PM.
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RV knows you’re a clown, just some fuckin british punk
dopeness speaks for itself… n' told you to shut the fuck up… ya structures shitty… and I’ll show you what worse is, shoot holes in ya body, like the ones you have in ya verses… in less than 10 lines sure ‘nough Mark’ll beat a chick down, since Elusive eluded himself to girl faster than Spanish nouns… leave you soaked in piss n’ blood.. don’t move or budge, Elusive… can’t hold his water so how can he hold a grudge..? right now is the time in which we call you a homeless bitch, and ask about your kitchen… ..........................How'd you ever make a studio out of shit? 10 lines... good luck. |
Mark Greyson, man what the fuck is up wit ur rap name
Sounds like a pop singa, not a rappa, a pawn strivin 4 fame If dats ur actual name, ur parents had a laugh naming ur ass They were sittin dere jokin, he gonna get bullied in class It aint like ur rhymes make up 4 ur current "namely" position Ur punches hit but they're weak, like ur firing blank ammunition U aint got skills, u aint neva ate an Mc, ur dieing of malnutrition Even wit RV international elevation aid, ull b needin physicianz Ma rhymez are elevated, university level, i shud write a dissertation ur rhymes r wack, we all know u didnt come close to graduation |
^^^^^^^ma verse is under all da shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wat tha fuk happened dere^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^oh well ma 10linez is dere ...............uppin 4 honest votes
(ill get strobe 2 remove shit) peace homie |
RV knows you’re a clown, just some fuckin british punk
dopeness speaks for itself… n' told you to shut the fuck up… ya structures shitty… and I’ll show you what worse is, shoot holes in ya body, like the ones you have in ya verses… in less than 10 lines sure ‘nough Mark’ll beat a chick down, since Elusive eluded himself to girl faster than Spanish nouns… leave you soaked in piss n’ blood.. don’t move or budge, Elusive… can’t hold his water so how can he hold a grudge..? right now is the time in which we call you a homeless bitch, and ask about your kitchen… ..........................How'd you ever make a studio out of shit? 10 lines... good luck. |
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Voted For: Mark Greyson
RV knows you’re a clown, just some fuckin british punk dopeness speaks for itself… n' told you to shut the fuck up… ^^okay punch but the end of the lines don rhyme.... ya structures shitty… and I’ll show you what worse is, shoot holes in ya body, like the ones you have in ya verses… ^^decent coulda been a lil better in less than 10 lines sure ‘nough Mark’ll beat a chick down, since Elusive eluded himself to girl faster than Spanish nouns… ^^haha this was good..... leave you soaked in piss n’ blood.. don’t move or budge, Elusive… can’t hold his water so how can he hold a grudge..? ^^nice multi's okay punch right now is the time in which we call you a homeless bitch, and ask about your kitchen… ..........................How'd you ever make a studio out of shit? ^^okay punch coulda been a lil better okay punches..some were kinda weak...nice multi's...okay vocab....good structure....some humor....good 6/10 Mark Greyson, man what the fuck is up wit ur rap name Sounds like a pop singa, not a rappa, a pawn strivin 4 fame ^^okay punch woulda been better if it was worded dif.. If dats ur actual name, ur parents had a laugh naming ur ass They were sittin dere jokin, he gonna get bullied in class ^^weak punch....basic It aint like ur rhymes make up 4 ur current "namely" position Ur punches hit but they're weak, like ur firing blank ammunition ^^good punch.... U aint got skills, u aint neva ate an Mc, ur dieing of malnutrition Even wit RV international elevation aid, ull b needin physicianz ^^weak...coulda been worded a lil better Ma rhymez are elevated, university level, i shud write a dissertation ur rhymes r wack, we all know u didnt come close to graduation ^^weak.had self glorifyin which made it weaker.. ya had some basic but some good vocab towards the end..........ya structure was good....punches were weaker than Mark........no multi's so ya flow was kinda off......shoulda came a lil harder and ya prolly woulda got my vote..... Return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163144 v/mark greyson peace~1 |
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This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
this is Mark Greyson and until I reply I can't see what's going on...
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LMFAO@you changin your sig because I dissed it...
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Voted For: Mark Greyson
this battle is basically one sided. elsuiv u had a decent structure but that was pretty much it. not many punches that stood at to me. pretty basic shit. elevate and work on creativity in ya verse. ya vocab needs brushin up on too. mark, or should i say avalon? structure was nice...u had some ok punches nad then some prett dope ones too. the water one made me chuckle...and the opener was pretty dope too. v/mark |
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lol...yea, he did. it's alright though.. i already seen it ;) ..plus he couldn't use it anymore coz he aint in that crew no more. |
Voted For: Elusiv G
Mark: RV knows you’re a clown, just some fuckin british punk dopeness speaks for itself… n' told you to shut the fuck up… 3/10 ya structures shitty… and I’ll show you what worse is, shoot holes in ya body, like the ones you have in ya verses… 4/10 in less than 10 lines sure ‘nough Mark’ll beat a chick down, since Elusive eluded himself to girl faster than Spanish nouns… 2/10? leave you soaked in piss n’ blood.. don’t move or budge, Elusive… can’t hold his water so how can he hold a grudge..? 2/10? right now is the time in which we call you a homeless bitch, and ask about your kitchen… ..........................How'd you ever make a studio out of shit? 5/10 elusiv G: Mark Greyson, man what the fuck is up wit ur rap name Sounds like a pop singa, not a rappa, a pawn strivin 4 fame 6/10 If dats ur actual name, ur parents had a laugh naming ur ass They were sittin dere jokin, he gonna get bullied in class 7/10 It aint like ur rhymes make up 4 ur current "namely" position Ur punches hit but they're weak, like ur firing blank ammunition 8/10 U aint got skills, u aint neva ate an Mc, ur dieing of malnutrition Even wit RV international elevation aid, ull b needin physicianz 5/10 Ma rhymez are elevated, university level, i shud write a dissertation ur rhymes r wack, we all know u didnt come close to graduation 6/10 return the favour here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162456 |
Voted For: Mark Greyson
O MY GOD!!! this wasnt even close....lol av you took this by far with punches personals, wordplay, fuck it in ever cat......Elusive your opener was weak and so was the rest of your verse man wtf was this If dats ur actual name, ur parents had a laugh naming ur ass They were sittin dere jokin, he gonna get bullied in class ^^ummm thats a wack attempt at a punch Mark Greyson gets this with ease |
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Voted For: Mark Greyson
Basically, this was over quite quickly. I read elusiv's whole verse in complete daze at his whackness and i read mark's first bar and knew who had the win. Elusiv, focus on PUNCHES rather than flow, structure, vocab or w/e the fuck you were trying to pull in that verse. Mark, just ill yo. Seems like you didnt try at all ( ;) ) but your first bar killed anything he brought.Also the spanish nouns line was nice. V/Mark |
1 to close it...
and Soc... I read your reply... and didn't even know what my first line was lol... *goes to reread verse* |
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Somebody close this battle so I can battle Elusiv G
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Voted For: Mark Greyson
Elusiv G: eh....not liking much...... 1st bar was pretty whack... non-effective and played aswell BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! like a ghost....ummm 2nd bar was exactly like the first one same thing....3rd bar was too^. 4th bar was unoriginal seen it done many times....final bar was half self-glorified and plllaaaayed. anyways too much worthless plays on his name....overall: 4/10 Mark Greyson:......eh decent.... 1st bar was atleast a personal....and pretty odd and played bar, not very effective....2nd bar was okay, liked the [ersonal a bit. 3rd bar was played. 4th bar was really irritating....and you spelled his name wrong:thumbup:. 5th bar was......... a decent closer to end this ish.....overall: 6.5/10 vote: Mark Greyson |
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