King~~Dipset vs † Gødž Ångël †
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Linez
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
3-0 = KO

Accept ASAP..............

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 12-02-04 at 10:14 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 08:15 PM.

King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 08:17 PM.

"King Shit Head" Is not built, But hes prepared to get all his organs Spilt,
His one packs reduced to saddle bag, He runs around with it full of guilt,
He knows he has set up a battle to a kid who is 2 years younger than him,
He has no idea what colors are coming, But his future is getting real grim,
If he had a "Crown" it'd be on the ground, Where it was origanally found,
It tipped off of bushes head, his stuge, Was sure to snatch it accidentally
To get his spot in a place where it dont matter if you havent yet hit puberty,
Damn man, what are you now 14, Im 12 and You havent got as much as me,
Take all your clocks and set them back one hur, Dont you skip your shower,
Your date is ready, He Is waiting at your door with a handful of red flowers.
You mouth will clench at the end of this line, Cause to me your flow is sour.

Quick 20 Minute Shyt...
Good Luck King.....

Peace~

Aii here I Go

Prayin to God Aint gonna Help This Angel
Ill shove a flag Up ya Ass so you Can See The star Spangle
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I knock Yo ass wit A leftand make You fall right
I Knock you Wit da Crusha Then Youlll See all lights
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You get Votes of Sympathy Not skills Bcuz of Age
You Get hit Like a Timpiony* Wit Iron mallets N a Gage
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The way the flow Go U Know Im Illmatic
My Skills Sound Clear But Yours ........Hear the Static?
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I Bounce you Attics Of the Top of the Statistic Screen
Then Let You Hit The ground And Bust ya Oblistic Spleen
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I got Punches That hit harder than Holyfields hit To the Gut
U Hang on me Like I Got Bushwick Bill Hangin On my Nuts
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***********************************************If Yall Dont know
A Timpiony is a Drum (very Big Drum Wit very Big mallets)

Bushwick Bill- Is a Midget That Raps Wit Ghostface
if you didnt know that Then you Dont really no your rap History.

NIce verse.... It was kinda hard to follow... You had a pretty good Vocab... Ya structure wasnt real good tho.... And you didnt really have many good punches... but you had some..... Nice verse..

Peace.........

Uppin for some votes~

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

not too great of a battle....both need to elevate


godz.....your verse was too preschoolish to me......some of the lines made absolutely no sense at all....a couple of the bars didnt even rhyme all that well....no hate....just sayin you need to elevate

king.....in my opinion you won this...but no by a landslide......you had a couple multis in the verse which gave you a bit of an edge.....and you punches hit a lot harder.....some of your lines had some originality in them....but also some of them were a bit played.....you need to elevate too...no hate

overall i voted for king because his punches came harder...and he was more original....he didnt use a lot of multis....but certainly more than godz.......thats pretty much it.......keep gettin better both of u.....no hate at all in this vote

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Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

Gods:
Aiight Your Verse Was More Complex With Vocabulary...Structure Was Neat..Punches We're Well Though Of Creativity..It's A Good Flow Some Multis In There I Liked It...8/10


King:
Okay You Kind Of Fell Of Not To Decent But It Was Alright..Your Flow Was Simple Though Punches Was Not Really Hitting..Creativity Take It To A Next Level Your Vocabulary And Structure Was Just To Simple No Multis...5/10

Vote=Godz

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hey king your vote was dq'd in my battle......please explain it more thoroughly if u thought i won

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C'mon.. Dont sleep on this.....

Peace~

This was feedback posted for † Gødž Ångël †
 

checkin the pollz.................................

Wow The Poles Arent lookin Good .......its not suppose to be equal its suppose to B Me Two votes ahead of you LOL Jus kiddin the votes are lookin good and i hope they will look betta ........on My Behalf hahahahahahahahahahahahaha * Cough* Um excuse me
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Hey God...............Are you considered a vet ?

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Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

an okay battle...
dipsett-your lines seemed kinda unfinished(like u didnt have enough sylables in ur bars)...but ur punches were aight, they were just boring, and didnt hit me hard enough to wanna give u my vote...u had good wordplay, and nice creative in ur verse also...big ups to that, but i think u should work on being more consistent...u kinda fell off ur topic near tha end, and started writing some dumb shit(work on that)...but overall a nice verse

angel-u had a coo verse also, but u did tha opposite of dipset, yo lines were stretched(u should work on that), but i liked how u changed ur style up from tha otha battle i voted on(big ups on that), in this verse, u had some nice wordplay, and punches that u dropped. i wasnt feeling em all, but i liked enough of em to give u tha vote...but i think u should work on consistentcy also, cause u started off wack, but u did manage to pick it up afterwards, but if dipset came hard tha whole battle, that wouldve hurt u...but good shit overall

overall-i think yall should work on ur structure, and consistentcy...but a close battle..

plz return tha vote on my battle in sig ya'll...if ya'll dont, i wont vote on none of ur battles again...


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OH YEA, AND ONLY HONEST VOTES PLZ

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Cmon Yall Lets get some more votez in this peace

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This was feedback posted for King~~Dipset
 

i aint got enough posts 2 vote on dis battle .............BUT, soon as i do get 200 imma hit dis 1 up n vote on it i got like 30 some posts 2 do b4 i can tho

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-



"King Shit Head" Is not built, But hes prepared to get all his organs Spilt,
His one packs reduced to saddle bag, He runs around with it full of guilt,

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Prayin to God Aint gonna Help This Angel
Ill shove a flag Up ya Ass so you Can See The star Spangle

angel start was way better...

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I got Punches That hit harder than Holyfields hit To the Gut
U Hang on me Like I Got Bushwick Bill Hangin On my Nuts
//6

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Your date is ready, He Is waiting at your door with a handful of red flowers.
You mouth will clench at the end of this line, Cause to me your flow is sour

dip-set ending was better......

flow: angel
punch:angel:
opening: angel
ending: dip-set
creativeness: angel

vote: angel

Voted For: King~~Dipset

Gotta go with my man Dipset on this one...Felt his punches hit harder and were much more creative and thought thru than godz angel...to tell you the truth, godz angel's shit was pretty wack...his punches hit about as hard as my grama does...lmao...King Dips also wins in the flow and multies category...didnt really see too many personals from either side...So, my vote goes to King~~Dipset...1

BTW...can u guys return the favor and hit me up with some feedback on my new open mic? The link is in my sig...thanx...1