Big-Scoot vs Tha End
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 1

Check in by: 12-05-04 at 09:19 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Tha End has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 09:19 PM.

Big-Scoot has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 09:22 PM.

He sucks as bad as SUVS suck gases
hes as touchy as michael on lil boys asses
lackin mobilty in his free form rap beat
come fag come see tha ends ability
to bury u 10 feet with 10 bar beats when i spit streets
pour to look for me but they pour to bore u anotha asshole
when they hear u freestyle...quick get out tha backdoe (backdoor)
hell no not talkin bout butt fuck sex recelect what ya
learned in ur kindergarton gaynesss isnt respectfully regaurded
damn hardly u hard so pardon me mam he ran
when i brought out tha big guns said boo hes still stunned
hour and half...drops still not done yet check it bet
vanilla ice wouldnt approve of your pillow tight rap play
about to chop him..gave him birthcontrol and he popped em
his alotted time he went over....wack as fat chinese asses
and speaches given by al broker and pissed off catholics
hes a faggit..boyfriend named felix since just won heres ya a klenox... THA END

Nigga THA END is near get ready for Judgement Day/
Get sentenced to death battle Big-Scoot and u pay/
Apocolypse is here and even I don't know Proffesor X/
Rip half ya rhymes to shreads and then feed beast the rest/
Tha bullshit u spit is funny like a clown regurgitatin/
Don't got a track to explode on so I'm impatiently waitin/
Times up thought about and your tha unlucky victim/
Control all my opponents tell K-9 to sick em'/



**Regurgitatin=throwing up**
**Control all my opponents tell K-9 to sick em'/- recently battled K-9**

uppin fo some votes....................................

Voted For: Big-Scoot

close battle and ya both did decent,tha end had a better flow but his flow came off towards the middle of it and his punches were decent at first but then just started getting boring and weak.big stoop came more creative and had an ok flow,he attempted punchlines and seemed to be more consistent,both should elevate to a different rhyming style,u two have to be more witty and less played.for example...that micheal jackson punch made by tha end is a played concept,use something that will catch the eye and be more complex....close battle but my vote goes to.....

alright uppin for votes ........

This was feedback posted for Big-Scoot
 

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Voted For: Tha End

Aii This was A Hard Battle to Judge very zclose But I gotta Give my vote The End but To me He came Harder Wit The punches And his Verse Had nice multis And Meta'z
so he gets My vote
***********************************************plz Return the Favor I Need the battle credits I Have Battle up to my Neck so plz try to vote in Atleast Two of my Battles

Ay u ^^^^ I think u just a lil upset cuz I posted this shit in ya thread,

Big Scoot talikn about King Dipset: A lil Bitch (No EXPERTISE i have enough loses On my record ) You as lil bitch beggin not to get that ass whooped U a Hoe.


It's cool though,

Uppin 4 votes......

quit yo bitchin.................uppin fo some votes

uppin fo some votes 4x............................

uppin 4 votes.....................................

uppin for some votez last time.....................

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Uppin 4 votes man.........................................

Voted For: Big-Scoot

Big Scoot was overall better.. Better vocab, just one personal, maybe one punch. K-9 part was good.... Good flow thoe hoe. The End had more personals, few good punches but shit was hard to figure out. If you were more clear you could of beat him. Good finsher thoe. Hit me up if you ever see my battle

uppin 4 votes............................................

Man damn....can we get sombody to vote??? uppin again

Voted For: Tha End

Alright here's how its gonna go down

Tha End-Some good lines, some i didnt really understand, kidna got a weird rhyme scheme, but its something different...vocab was alright, some ok punches, didnt notice any multis...some decent wordplay, overall nice drop

Big Scoot-Dont use the /'s...makes you look like a noob...your drop was really basic, nothing special...nothing jumpin out and grabbin my attention...basic rhyme scheme....no good wordplay...basic vocab...everything's basic

V/Justify

Voted For: Tha End

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to Big scott flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, Tha End had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle

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I know its a lil weak but its ok

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Voted For: Tha End

I voted for you because other youngin need to elevate alot more and i like your punchlines.HOLLA

uppin for some votes

uppin for votes

uppin for votes please dont sleep on this ..............

uppin .please people dont sleep on this

This was feedback posted for Tha End
 

ok tha end had this hand downs becuz his punchliens were creative

how the fuck did i loose a vote.....i had three then i would have had 4 but the guy fuck his vote up but i lost 2 votes cuz of it thats bullshit

This was feedback posted for Big-Scoot
 

Um Tha End Went Over 10 Lines

You Should Pm Strobe And Tell Him He Broke The Rulez....

fuck u faggit lil snitch fuckin faggit go check the battles noob gonna go bust on everybody........fuck u
to-MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Voted For: Tha End

i read the first three lines of this verse and already had more disses and better punches keep up the good!!

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i forgot to put *work*!!

Voted For: Tha End

my man here got it by a long shot uh... Big Scoot you need to elevate I mean foreal.... even ya name soounds lame i'm out lol

Voted For: Big-Scoot

i seriously think bigscoot took this one...he had harder punches and some nice/creative wordplay...he came consistent through-out his whole flow, and never fell off, and his verse wasnt boring
best line"dont got a track to explode on so I'm impatiently waiting"

tha end came nice too, but his structure was a lil, a LOT fucked up...but u did manage to get some hot punches and shit in there...but i dont think that u came hard enough to get my vote...

overall-this was an ok battle...kinda close, but scoot took it...

plz return tha vote, and if u dont, i wont vote on none of ya'lls battles again...link in sig...1

^^i hate that shit...i would get that shit DQ'D....learn how to explain shit...

oh, and return my vote HONESTLY plz

Voted For: Tha End

flow the end
imagry the end
vocab the end
multi the end
opener-closure the end
hits the end
over all the end hit up on my links peace.

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Voted For: Tha End

Lmfao
Openor=Tha End Shit Wass Funni
Strukture=Tie
Punches-Tha End Punches Wass Ok
Personals=None
Vokab=None
Closer=Both Sucked So None

Funni Ass Verse 4rm This Kid,Up Ya Vokab Have Decent Punches Up Ya Personals And Make Sence In Ya Bars........

/V Tha End.........