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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt vs Wickedclown
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UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Dickriding No hate votes If Introspect, Valor, Nos Or Indpeh vote for me i will leave this site permanetly First to 3 votes is K.O since no one votes I will watch out for any dickriders :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 12-06-04 at 01:16 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 01:25 AM.
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FUCK THIS BITCH! TALK SHIT YA GET OWNED BITCH! Fuck your inteligent flowz imma rip ya a new ass hole since ya daddy sodomized the first one and stole ya innocent soul so much hate in you, when you talked down to me like i was a freak you aint seen hate til youve steped inside my world and find to seak i piss on you bitch takin a leak, imma prove to all of RV ya ass rhymes reek flowz ya talk a good game ova the net, protcted at home since we never met best home we neva meet out on tha set, all this shit you gonna regret set you 6 feet and 3 inches deep into the turf so they neva find ya body rip ya like snoop with tha lodi doddy, price is wrong bitch ya dead like rod roddy i leave ya body cold face down in tha grownd, no ones gonna hear tha sound of ya mellon as it drops.... rolls on... into the body mound tons of ya fags dissed on Wicked ova a chat room on tha net well fuck all of you from flow inteligent down to introspect ya all can suck a fuckin dick, give these hairy balls a lick ya played shit makin me sick, step back while i give the tirgger a click lyricaly ya all fall when wicked steps to the stage yall cant know what lives inside this mind of rage act bad with ya net egos, comparin records that mean nothin get a life bitches and make it actualy mean somethin flow inteligent, if u so good, why you still on the net son? shouldnt you be makin CDs and hittin tha stages son? thats what i thought, ya just a bitch made nigga who neva made it neva will either and just gonna spend ya days on here talkin shit i hope your net ego keeps you filled with actual bliss cause in real life bitch, you just anotha poser who missed out on the rap game, it passed you right the fuck by now all you got is the net and thats why you cry at night cause you never amounted to shit in the biz you love youll never be more than a bitch not even if push comes to shove |
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 01:44 AM.
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Aiight Also Empire Cannot Vote I Repeat If He Votes You Lose Matter Of Fact Im Gonna Black list Him
Check it..... Im a sinner but i like it...... The winner by a hike bitch I'll slice ya inner thigh and let this quitter die in crisis Im phat when writing ...... You'll get clapped for biting You wont be on here for long cuz you'll get banned for riding Im gonna be droppin this dumb geek cuz im hot like a sun beam And i'll put a end to your green streak like i was washin ya undies You askin for ya life.... but ya games weak its done and simple You'll be on ya knees talking to God like nuns in temples Bigpappa76 or wickedclown ill kill you with ease cuz it dont matter Leave ya alias feelin this beatin like a conjoined twin with a full bladder Everyone documents my verse's becuase im the greatest topic You couldnt be the center of attention if you was the latest gossip So you Claim youre doing damage, but your just leaving some minimal flesh wounds Plus you've been handed more 'beatings' than 'george michaels dick in restrooms' I bless goons... You spit cuz its too hard to swallow this When i get you confused & nauseated like RuPaul's Gynecologist I lean to pummle fools... break ya spleen and stomach too Like the first letter in ya name i succeed and 'double you' Im shitting this son you really dont wanna be lifting a gun Cuz i'll bitch smack you in the mouth and injure ya tongue :thumbup: |
uppin for HONEST VOTES... hot battle homie, and to introspect, valor and Nos... suck my dick
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
Flows Verse Punches: Were aight but only a couple were eye catching in my opinion which was dissapointing also the fact that you were using self-glory really to me seemed like you were wasting lines whereas a lil re-wording could've reinforced the verse Personals: Not many to be honest 1 or 2 but woulda been helpful seeing as your opponent put a few on you. Vocab: Some nice wording good vocab indeed i had no arguments with that it was quite good Structure: Could be improved didn't help the flow in parts but i'm guessing this was rushed so not much time to add finishing touches. Flow: Nice flow but like i said slipped a lil in parts where it went real long in certain places work on that for future references. Rhyming: real good rhyming in there was quite enjoyable if only the self-g bits and punches were harder though. WICKED's Verse Punches: Seemed like you tried but not really effective i think Flow pipped you there i'm afraid try and work on them again for future references. Personals: Personals Dayum that was mainly your content of the verse jus throwing personals in there but parts of your verse were damaged by the self-glory again like Flows but you def took it here. Vocab: Grr angry style you did seem angry and the personals and the dissing made up for punches which actually is unique coz get punches and you got a dope mix to do even better up in RV. But try and avoid the constant swearing though lol. Structure: Stretched...work on it like i said lose some swear words...you'll probably find thats your solution. Flow: However flow i had no real problems wit prolly coz the beat i read it too but i felt the flow to this so thumbs up there. Rhyming: Basic but effective with the personals used i think try and up your wordplay and your rhyming wil develop naturally. V/WickedClown because it really boiled down to 3 main things punches, personals & the level of dissing...and WC took 2 outta 3 because the weight of the personals added to the level of dissing and really thats what wins battles. |
LOL@YOU ^^^^^^ haha aiight ill let that shit stay
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This was feedback posted for FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
thought i was gonna vote huh.....:D...............
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an wicked keep talkin that shit an i swear to fuckin god i will own you lil fuckin twit am only about 6 hours from maine so dont push your luck...
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Introspect u waste of space come fine me bitch lmao i live in bangor maine dawg bring tha shit. lmao you internet goof. lmao................................. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA FAGGOT |
Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
i think flow intelligent got this one. he had better wordplay, and some nice punches in there... wickedclown had a nice verse, but kinda fell off near tha end to me, and his punches werent that strong.he took personals tho wickedclown-yo verse was structured aight, but u kinda had stretched ur lines a couple of times. that took points away. ur punches were somewhat nice, but didnt hard hard each time, but u had some nice personals. ur wordplay was nice, and most of ur bars had good rhyming. not too simple...i see ur kinda advanced, thats coo...but ur all around verse lacked sumthing i think.usually i would state what, but i dont know..HONESTLY i wasnt feeling ur verse. flow intelligent-u had a killer verse. ur punches were on point. u started out kinda slow in ur first 2 barz, but yo all around flow took my vote. ur personals were coo, but that was tha one category i think u lost in...they werent that hot if u ask me...i liked ur wordplay and creativitie in ur verse...keep doing yo shit homie...u gunna be sick soon both yall gunna be sick soon....overall-yall both had a nice verse, i told yall what yall lacked in, so yall should take that and better urself, and i told yall what yall did good, so better urselves with that also...wickedclown, its no hate dawg, i just wasnt feeling ur verse too much...its coo, its just one vote...but yall nice with tha flow, and punches and metaphores and shit...just try and stay creative and elevate urselves... oh,and plz return tha vote...http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162907 ....too many battles gettn slept on on RV...i just radomnly picked this battle to vote on...plz return tha vote...1...if that doesnt work, its also down in sig...pz...NO HATE WICKED... |
....uppin this shit.... ............................. close battle homie.... 1-1....
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
lmao, k fuck a breaKDOWN.... PAPPA we koo, but man you had no real hard hitting punches in ya whole verse really...ya lines were stretched n ya pretty much fell off in alot of areas...i see you were tryin ta get personal but nothin was layed out in a punch form.. shorten ya lines n reword ya verse, cuz this aint workin... FLOW INTELL, k, i wasnt feeling alot of ya ish either, your 1st half was simple, or played, i was really watchin for personals.. then ya verse picked up a bit, 1 ok personal(w line).. was dissappointed overall from both.pc.... |
This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN
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This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN
ain't voting jus checkin around im bored you see..
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uppin for votes drop a link ill return the favor....
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
iight here go my explanation Wicked - NICE multiz decent vocab really long but itz kool sum shit iz basic but itz over shadowed by tha punchez nice structure sum linez r forced an stretched but i still felt this shit more then intellegent but hez nice 2 barely had any forced linez but ur elevatin again work on tha forced linez unless u start bein audio but yeah overall niceness couple linez i wuzn't feelin but most of 'em were pretty good so u got it at least in my eyes a couple linez i thought were dope where "Fuck your inteligent flowz imma rip ya a new ass hole since ya daddy sodomized the first one and stole ya innocent soul" that had me crackin up but u went a little whack wen u said "out on the rap game, it passed you right the fuck by now all you got is the net and thats why you cry" come on man u done WAAAAY better then that step that up homie i kno u can do better Flow - shitz pretty nice 2 okay punchez personalz were mediocre...very blah structure needz work a couple linez were stretched an a lotta forced linez work on that but if u look past that itz pretty nice overall u had an okay vocab but wuz feelin wickedz verse more but better luck next time cuz i seen better from u an wicked but this wuz an overall even battle u only lost cuz tha forced linez an structure work on that an u'll be sum mad dopeness homie u didn't have any linez i felt were fantastically dope so i can't give an xample but herez were u went whack "I bless goons... You spit cuz its too hard to swallow this When i get you confused & nauseated like RuPaul's Gynecologist" come on i seen better from u as it iz...i thought u would had this cuz i seen sum hott shit from u b4 but this battle jus wuzn't good 4 u big upz ta both flow did nice but i think wicked came better so my vote = Wicked Clown |
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
nice battle propz to both personals-iight it was hard hittin on both....flow intellegent you had some crazy personals....talkin bout him d/r and shit...and WIcked you had some nice ones too....kept it close it was nice...but overall Wicked's fit a lil bit more better into his dropp.....kept it on topic.... Structure-Ok......Flow had this one by a long shot.....i wasn't really feelin the way you had ya stuff typed out WICKED..i mean it made it harder to read ya dropp......soooo Flow you get structure... Punches-Ok....Flow ya punches were pretty much played....they was "AIGHT" and Wicked you had some nice punches...they hit harder....you didn't reallly have multies to get ya back on it...so the punches weren't all the way there.....flow you had decent ones....but they a lil bit too much played ya feel me..... Vocab-vocab....was ok in this battle with both ya'll you all be sayin stuff i'd be hearing Really Good Freestylers using....so they were a lil bit played.......i did enjoy readin it but if the Vocab was better this would be a real nice battle.....but yea ya both need to use more complex VOCAB...i mean Love and Shove(WICKED) are basic vocab.....so up there.... Multis-Neither of you really had these so neither of you guys get this one...you guys know ya'll coulda dun betta here....i mean...i've seen ya'll battle before and i just wasn't feelin the fact you aint using too many multies..i mean thats what makes it tighter too read....ya get me... Enjoyment-Overall i enjoyed Wickeds drop more.it was more hard hittin and it attracted my attention more..it was on point....it kept me coming back for more....... Overall-Overalll i'd have to Say Wicked gets this one.....he came harder which is what you need to do...and thats what he did...so he gets the vote......so keep it up..and keep droppin..... Notes-both of ya'll need to add some more multies and some more vocab...but otha than that this was nice....positve dropss.....keep thesse coming...and i'm expecting to come back for more...pzz ~1~ |
are you fucking serious 2 dickride votes in a row this is hilarious get the fuck outta my thread im gonna look for a dickride circle too... bitches wanna play lmao fucking noobs
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Lmao... Whack battle.... No offense... Sounded like me out there... Only good line was george micheals line... Wicked... Wtf? So whack... Flow... *cough* Umm... At least you had mulites:thumbup: But since you had the only good punch, you win... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
alright...being completely honest...this wasn't a close battle...wickedclown...i had to force myself to read your whole verse...i really did't want to..but i felt it would be unfair to not allow you the chance to salvage any chance you had left..... flow....your verse was ok..some parts were a bit off...and the multis were ok....and other parts were pretty good...this wasn't up to your standards...but it was more than good enough to be that fuckin clown.......vote goes to flow...and to everyone who voted for clown...see me on rb you fuckin herbs Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
.....................uppin this shit for some real votes...............
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what he said^^ and WC would you mind hitting up my open mics in my sig if you have one ill hit up too
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^Werd Dawg, ill hit up ya open mics no doubt.......oh yeah and UPPIN
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
A'ight this battle was one-sided but both came pretty good. Flow...whoa, dawg you astound me every time I read one of your drops...holy shit, punches are off the wall...flow is damn near perfect...holy shit. Wicked Clown...you got a ways to go before you can step up to Flow. Your punches was a;ight...flow was good, structure was decent...just ya punches was lacking more than Flow's and punches make battles. No hate, just elevate. Return the favor honestly please. Battle: 9th Degree Topical: Metaskriptz Wack Battle aka Waste of Time: stg Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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aight yo.... you vote against me in EVERY battle.... wtf... "a ways to go before i step to flow?" your a goddamn joke LE.... your 19-16, you fucken suck not to mention your 0-3 audio so your one to goddamn talk faggot. fuck outt here, and you have a nasty habit of leaving unexplained votes that are just gonna be removed, ya vote against me in the Sdizzle battle was removed and this one probably will be too.... no hate to flow but that was a wackass vote from a wackass wannabe hoe....nuff said :thumbup: oh yeah..........UPPIN |
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A'ight you want beef you got it...You Insane Clown Possy faggot. I'll fuck your ass up in text or audio...bring it on bitch. And that 0-3 audio record? those were no-show battles, and SDizzle cheated on one. So, whenever you want it bitch...'cause fuck...you have a ways to go before you step up to ME. |
kid shut the fuck up... goddamn your a faggot.... your a fuckin dickryder and a lil homo.... u want a battle set up a text...... make it in regular front lines cause EFL dont get votes.... unlimited lines, 2 days to check, 30 mins to drop after check..... set it up faggot.... Limited edition = faggot, nuff said
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A'ight den...text it is...prepared to get merk'd bitch...30 Min to Check 30 Min to drop...no pre-writin' bitch.
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Im gonna be droppin this dumb geek cuz im hot like a sun beam And i'll put a end to your green streak like i was washin ya undies So you Claim youre doing damage, but your just leaving some minimal flesh wounds Plus you've been handed more 'beatings' than 'george michaels dick in restrooms' vs nothing You guys both sucked horifically and then lines I quoted from Flow was being nice. Wickedclown didnt even throough punches, he just kept.....talking. seriously yall needa elevate ya game and find out whats played and whats not. Wicked needs to find out what a punch is period because he SERIOULSY didnt throw any. Flow stop focusing on flow, do the punch then try to fit some multis and flow in there. :thumbup: V-F.I. |
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