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Elusiv G vs REALISTIK
Battle Rules:
15-unlimited line's No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No dickriding bitche's No hater's No empire's,caliph's.lil california's voting on this battle. topical-death.. very broad topic.can be used in many way's so voter's keep your mind's open. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-06-04 at 08:03 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 08:05 PM.
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REALISTIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 08:33 PM.
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check....check.....
dropping mine early, got other shit to do. |
...the situation...
thought's of discomfort running thru my soul.. felling outta place,only the devil knew my goal.. no looking back,I continue to strive forward never to return.. no fear of the road ahead,I relise no matter what im gonna burn.. I try to hide my current state of mind,closing my eye's.. the allmighty god's aware of my truth,exposing my lie's.. am I destined for heaven,or just be frozen in time.. is it god that i see,or satan that arose in a line... Im feelling outta reach,As if there will never be a return... thought I seen a bright light,but now i relise it burn's... my mind is so empty,body gone weak and dull... Still a sprit lost in the maze,yet it allready feel's like a week in hell... no communication,word's are distort,im not thinking well.. I feel like i am searching for a place,but have no clue what ill find.. My vision's gone blank,All I see is blue in my mind.. this sort of situation isnt new to my kind.. im unsure what to expect,unaware of the outcome... love isnt present,it's been year's since I felt some.. im wanting to see heaven,but im'a just let my doubt run. ...how i got in the situation... i get teased,bully'd,kicked and beat.. i hate my life,every day I am forced to admit defeat.. coming home with black eye's,just to end up reciving more.. no one I can trust,even my mum's a deicving hore.. I start to think of death,no one will miss me,im not worth grieving for.. tear's start to run from my eye's and down on my face... is my life so worthless,that Im'a die without even a trase.. im sure no one will even notice if i just disapear.. I smile thinking of heaven,"damn it must be bliss in there".. the knife is now sharp and my wrist is bare.. a quick clean cut,now my mission is clear.. I dont want anyone to walk in,I listen in fear.. not one person has love for me,Im sick of wishing they care.. ~~Real~~ |
Yo i decided to come at death from the angel of Euthanasia - where sum1 asks u 2 kill em 2 end ere suffering: EUTHANASIA
Ma homie given by god, 6months left on dis plain with his squad
Diagnosed wit Terminal Cancer, deres no cure - its an evasive answer He was the best of us, undeserving to become one wit tha dust Lord was takin him 2 soon, 6months was only 12 cycles of the moon Spent his life as a creater, purer heart then Mother Teresa I was his homeboy, to help any means i eventually employed Couldn't bare to see him whrithing in pain, his face emphasised the strain His face becoming emaciated, he was restless even when sedated Then 3months in b, he came to me, emplored me as his G: "I can't take dis homie, I cant be askin ma mama 2 wipe ma shit 4 me I'm so weak dats how its gettin and I'm loosing ma pride I need you to help me man, so I don't go undignified Da Kemo,its makin ma health depreciate, to graphic ends u cant relate The pain is relentless, tha analgesics are simply powerless All you gotta do yo,is switch dis I.V right here for simple h2o" "I luv u 2 much 2 be tha end to yo existence Man you gotta fight dis, wit yo every ounce of resistance" "I dun fought, it aint worked and now im distraught I'm askin you on the real, do it 4 me,or i'll do it maself wit tha steel Ma death will be passive, painless and hardly even long It'll be a mystery, ma death surrounded by thick white fog" "Its yo the simple fact, I cant see maself even doin dat I dnt wanna c u go, r u feelin me yo?!?" "I'm tired of being ppls burden, dis is ma time, dats 4 certain" "Homie I'll Think it over, cos right now all i can do is cry...." "4sho dog rememba, I need u, just 4 dis 1 last time" I went home and deliberated, I couldnt believe what had been stated Sit dere and imagine dis stories composition, from ma position Cud u take yo boy's life, to end his pain n strife So many thoughts created, evryone was hated and coldly rated I cud c how he wanted me 2 do it, that werent da shit I didnt think i cud liv wit dat, so i thought i'll jus giv him a gat Fuk dat, dats cold, I decided to help ma boy ease his soul So I went bak 2 him, and told him id help, god 4giv ma sin He told me what to do, i was in pieces, i didnt hav a clue I switched them bags, Wit evry movement, ma heart felt a crash As soon as i was dun, we embraced, the windows flooded by sun His eyes lit up, like a youthful joyous cub I left, I shut the door, got a phonecall bout half-past four I knew the impending message, so I let it ring on da dressage i layed down, closed ma eyes and visualised Ma homie in heaven, smilin down with grateful eyes And with a tired sigh, I heard a voice from up high "Thanks homie, u ma man, dogs 4 life" FDBAK YO EVEN IF NEGATIVE - AND DONT JUS SAY IT WAS SHIT 5/10 TELL ME WHAT 2 DO 2 MAKE IT BETTA...PEACE ( I ALWAYS RETURN DA FAVOUR) |
Gluck homie, 1.....................................
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This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
damn checkin polls but i say you got this fam.........good verse thanks for reppin and dealin with it....i was out for the last two days........so thats why i was inactive.........sooy man.........come back to the crew........
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Voted For: Elusiv G
V/Elusiv G.....this was a good topical battle ...but G gets my Vote for the topic of death he was very good in explainin about how death affects in a family an friends .....Realistik...u had a good verse also but i didn't feel the story cause it lacked in vocab an it could have been more creative........but good battle to both.... G=7.5/10 R=7/10 |
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let's get some more real vote's in this. acctually read the verse's.
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This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
yo man Elusiv i think you got him on this one wish i could vote damn i wish i could vote that was hot as hell and it took forever and a day to read it to ive been readin for the last half an hour off and on
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Voted For: Elusiv G
you both had some nice verses it was a hard decision! i kinda felt Elusiv's more cause i've been thru the shit with one of my friends and its jus not cool to watch yur friend die and know you can't do shit about it!!! |
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Voted For: Elusiv G
wow it was a long one man easy win 2 Elusiv G he had all the good stuff he was on topic all the tiem never went off stuckture was ok not too good but i liked his vers eloads it was coo REALISTIK was alright was tight also but he went a bit off topic a little bit stuckture was also ok but wasnt good enuf i like how he put it how it happend and shit but wasnt good enuf overall: EG took it eays he stay on topic all the time i liked his 10 times more 1 sided he wins Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: REALISTIK
i am going to go with realistik on this...but man...elusiv g...that was tight...i felt every word of it...both of these are awsome...and i wouldnt change shit about any of them, because then they woulndt be yours...nah mean...realistiks just seemed to affect me more...mind and heart...his had true emotion in it...you can tell time was spent in writing that...as well as yours elusiv g...both of the drops had great use of vocab...word play...true meaning...and you could flow them...realistiks more that elusivs tho...but other than that man...this was so hard...but it goes to realistik... return vote on my battle posted in my sig...payday killin lil chubbs...thanks...~1~ |
This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
checking tha pollz.......................................
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