Im Back(bitch)
 

whooo hooo im bak only the real old cats will remeber me syntax no me, djx and ryuu do lil south do no me, some other kids mite but this is muh first post since i been bak kids watch and learn .......

its down rite remarkable the way that i spray //
clippin kids dignity when i enter the game///
my skills against yalls, fatality yah got none//
thats why when i step in yall scream the games done//
my blades swung , look at the name son//
the nicest.... decapitation..... leave yah mamed son//
im back u stoopit newbies move it im spittin full clips//
back up out my way or youll b face down on the floor next tah that pila a bullets//
why u shakin stop waitin i double dare u tah pull it//
niggas lay dead with they heat from me cause they hesitated tah kill me//
im back mutha fuckas im the best i forever will be....BITCH:mad:

it was aight....there was an okay use of vocab


2Versatile

upping the fuck outa this shit

solid piece, when will ppl realize vocab isn't everything..but solid piece, good flow...keep dropping, make it longer tho, i got more time than 4 minutes to read a piece...late

LOL that was my last text post EVER so i wont keep droppin lol uppin

TIGHT...BUT IF YOU WAS GONNA END TEXT OFF THAT YOU SHOULD'VE CAME HARDER AND WENT LONGER BUT THAT'S ME

nice shit work on ya vocab

maybe if i look at some it can get this up//....

solid flow.. kinda feelin this one.. keep writin dun..

// .01

^I agree wit that...Keep it up kid...~1~

PEOPLE FORGET WHAT RHYMING IS ABOUTE THESE STYLES WORDPLAYS AND SHIT AINT ANYTHING THE IDEA AND EXPRESSION IS WHAT COUNTS I THINK THE ONLY FLAW THIS HAS IS ITS SHORT OTHER THAN THAT I LIKED IT

i wish i could get mor etehn just o tight what ever can i get some qouutes and isho

sameold sameold here

your flow really didn't do anything for me

it was bit simple

but it did have it's moments

keep workin' on your skills

-1-

MASTER BLASTER IS A BITCH!!!

^^^^^^^^I agree i cant stand when niggaz say work on ya vocab half of the famous rhymers dont have vocab and most of them is pretty ill so stop lookin at the vocab and pay more attention to the meaning behind it

you should never take my name in vien

it's a big no no

THE MASTER MAN is nothin' to fuck with

callin' me a bitch

you better not post shit

i'll be there stalkin' your ass

your manhood is mine

NUGGA

-1-

This was decent. I thought that there were some tight lines, and some played lines. The flow started off kind of weak, but then picked up when you added some multis near the middle and the end. Overall, it was pretty good, but my main complaint is that all you did was state that you were the best and that all your opponents would lose to you. There was no creative twist on it that made it better than any other rhyme on that topic.

Quote of Note:
why u shakin stop waitin i double dare u tah pull it
That was nice.

Peace

master blaster when u learn to spit audios come back and knowck on my door till then get outa my thread

watch here we go woosh and its up

when did you get here the first time
 

haha...just kidding but, no one cares

Put it down to ya...
 

piece was nice. good flow and rhythm, it was a lil' short though... shoulda stretched it out. and if this is your last text post, you shoulda came harder like dude said. why you beefin' wit' master blaster? he'll rip you son... ha ha...

this was nice
short though
but nice

thanx for the feed back but to due up top master blaster cant rip me cause he dont spit audios when he can he can try and rip me but this was my last texxt ryme battle what ever ...pzzz

cool piece i liked it but i dont think you should quit text
keep elevating

check some of my work

Re: Im Back(bitch)
 

hahahaha,
dawg, this was straight ill... no lie either, i ain't front words if i can't back 'em, like Armaggeddansaid, its down to you kid, illest, fuck vocab, fuck wordplay, just fucking rhyme what you have, only pussies hide behind threats and all that shit spitting grit your teeth and fight ish is weak... props dawg

peace 'n' keep... rhyming


signed,
~madd

"dawg, this was straight ill"

lol thanx man elevating this isho to the fullest

uppn

upping

u aint shit...

uppin

I personally was'nt feelin this shit at all dog u sound a lil cocky and u really ain't that nice. I ain't haten i jus thought i'd let u kno aight

C.F.C

chan featuring chris...

cfc dumbass u posted twice

garbage...thaats what it is in my opinion

yall are some fukcin bitch ass muh fuckas i dont even care cause i t looks like at least people are readin my isho

ay little nice...battle me

LoL no

07-08-2002

today is 07-16-2002

this shit is pointless

you have one open mic
entry

it's all good though

keep talkin' trash

holla

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lol sorry did u forget i dont do text ne more and im sorry u cant get 39 hits for your stiz but u suck so get out muh thread and i stopped talkin trash my god your ignorant

uppn, hey im at 40 replys now