BLACK~MAGIK vs microcker
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate

All votes must be explained!!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-07-04 at 11:13 AM

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BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-04 11:13 AM.

microcker has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-04 06:47 PM.

blak magic is a faggit/if he had a bitch I would smack it/going against me is like getting stuck in some traffik/im gangsta you just a wanksta/Im gonna shank ya and rob your money from the banker/this battle for you was a mistake/Im taking it like it was a piece of cake/its microcker and I'll tell u like this/You cant fuck with this you little bitch/

Somethin quick...

..Ima rock-this-kid, sock-this-bitch, he's not-the-shit..
..Pop-him-quick, and fill his lungs with more than oxygen..
..The glock-just-rips, there's no stopping-this, I'll bomb-this-cat..
..Understand-this, like Atlantis, I'ma blow you off-the-map..
..You're soft-and-wack, get shot-in-the-dome, you're not-in-the-zone..
..And like 'cold periods', you're never 'hot-with-your-flow'..
..I'm the God-with-the-chrome, and there aint no argue-I'm-killin'..
..Shit, I got more 'hot sauce' in my rhymes, than on my 'barbequed-chicken'..

uppin for votes in this mother fucker!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

damn...magik killed this kat...

multies: magik
wordplay: magik
multies: magik
flow: magik
structure: magik

mic wrecker seriosly needs to elavate...

Understand-this, like Atlantis, I'ma blow you off-the-map..
You're soft-and-wack, get shot-in-the-dome, you're not-in-the-zone..
^^^1 word...DAMN...


blak magic is a faggit/if he had a bitch I would smack it/going against me is like getting stuck in some traffik/im gangsta you just a wanksta/Im gonna shank ya and rob your money from the banker/this battle for you was a mistake/Im taking it like it was a piece of cake/its microcker and I'll tell u like this/You cant fuck with this you little bitch/
^^^...1 word...GAY...

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haha...thanx for the vote man...uppin to knock this fag out...1

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

DDDAAAMMMNNN!!!!!! u whooped that fools a$$! there is no nay dat u can lose this battle...by the looks of it ,,it should be a K.O.

HEAVY HITTAZ!

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This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

checking polls.

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

.Ima rock-this-kid, sock-this-bitch, he's not-the-shit..
..Pop-him-quick, and fill his lungs with more than oxygen..
(NICE USE OF MULTIES, BUT WEAK OPENER, AND DIDNT END CORECTLY...7/10)

..The glock-just-rips, there's no stopping-this, I'll bomb-this-cat..
..Understand-this, like Atlantis, I'ma blow you off-the-map..
(AGAIN NICE MULTIES, WORD PLAY GOOD 7/10)

..You're soft-and-wack, get shot-in-the-dome, you're not-in-the-zone..
..And like 'cold periods', you're never 'hot-with-your-flow'..
(FLOW WASNT THERE, NICE PUNCHES THO, 6/10)

..I'm the God-with-the-chrome, and there aint no argue-I'm-killin'..
..Shit, I got more 'hot sauce' in my rhymes, than on my 'barbequed-chicken'..
(FUNNY ENDER, DECENT HITS, AND MULTIES, 7/10)

MAGIK...YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT, KINDA WEAK FROM YOUR PREVIOUS, BUT ITS COOL STILL...YOUR USE OF MULTIES KILLED THAT DUDE FOR SURE, THE VOCAB WAS DECENT, THE WORDPLAY WAS AIGHT...JUST WORK ON EVERYTHING FLOWIN TOGETHER WITHOUT HAVIN TO STOP AND THINK ABOU TI...


IP:


blak magic is a faggit/if he had a bitch I would smack it/going against me is like getting stuck in some traffik/im gangsta you just a wanksta/Im gonna shank ya and rob your money from the banker/this battle for you was a mistake/Im taking it like it was a piece of cake/its microcker and I'll tell u like this/You cant fuck with this you little bitch/

AIGHT YOUR VERSE I WACK MAN...TO PLAIN, NO GOOD PUNCHES, AND YOUR STRUCTURE IS WAY OFF...SO IT IN BARS...EXAMPLE

BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BITCH
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH SNITCH....U C WAT I MEAN...

aight magik takes this battle easily...he had better punches, multies, structure, vocab, creativity, and flow...so vote goes to magic

Thanx for the honesty man...I agree this wasn't my best...but I really dont think this fag has a chance...lol...Thanx dawg I appreciate it...uppin for votes yall...1

This was feedback posted for microcker
 

checking polls...... ELEVATE!

uppin...uppin...uppin...uppin...uppin this motha fucka...

uppin this battle...looking for votes yall come on...dont sleep on me...1

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

black magic had a dope verse multis were crazy nice flow rhymin was tight pnches hit hard metas were good
best line-You're soft-and-wack, get shot-in-the-dome, you're not-in-the-zone..
..And like 'cold periods', you're never 'hot-with-your-flow'..
mic-ya verse want that well put together rhymes were ultra basic but it had a aight flow metas were bad and punches didnt hit
best line-couldnt find 1

lmao...this dude microcker sux man...lmao...that was too fucking easy...well, uppin for votes to ko this fag...uppin...1

uppin dis battle...honest votes returned bitches...1

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

K-o Easily Bm Had Tha Strukture,Vokab,Multiz,Punches And His Shit Wass Hot Overall Juss Don't Use A Lot Of Punctuation Marks..

Micro Ya Need Serious Work Hommie Don't Make Ya Verse Like That N e More Have Punches,Vokab And Some Personals Elivate!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you...uppin for one more vote...looking to get this closed...1

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Haha...there is no need to even really break this battle down...Black Magik came harder...simple as that. Punches were better, flow, structure, personals...everythin. Microcker...elevate. On everything. Your verse had no quality whatsoever...very wack battle. Easy win for Black Magik.

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