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KiTTie 12-04-04 02:18 PM

mY vERSE
 
THIS IS GONNA B PART OF A TEXT SONG ME N STREETRYDA IS WORKIN ON.... PEEP IT AND TELL ME WUT U THINK

ive been called a fraud and a coward, they think im scared to do shit/ but when the time feels right, im a nasty tru bitch/ they ask me how i do it, how do i just produce shit?/ but when u live thru it, it just turns to music/ my skool aint no ghetto, just sum white trashy wannabes/ they think its wrong that i rap, its sick, just the thought of me/ but it gives me the strength and the power just 2 pull shit outta me/ they treat me like a lepper, but thats who i am, then im proud 2 b/ ive tried fitting in, but with every day id just slip out/ no use im pissed now, regret everytime i tripped out/ well, maybe i did it 4 my own personal satisfaction/ crazy like a maniac in action, just 2 eye sum reaction/ all the stares and laughs, whispers behind my back/ rumors that im an addict to crack, but they dont know it they're facts/ they call me a slut and a ho, they dont think im a virgin/ i havent had sex, but theres still sexual urges/ but i just pull myself together, dont grief on it much/ i just stay brief on the such, even though they treat me like fuck/ and ill keep giving up, but i gotta stay strong/ thru word of mouth, every spit, every song/ every rhyme, every vere, every secret i blurt/ every instance of hurt, disrespecting my worth/ im ready 2 do this, git past the pain/ and when i make my first million, they can all rot in vein/ but til then, i gotta stick with my truce/ cause this gift god gave me, is 2 precious 2 lose/ so ill use it in the way that makes me feel most alive/ im here 2 set my revenge, from the name, from the lies

Wreckk 12-04-04 03:36 PM

ill flow ill multis...

KiTTie 12-08-04 04:10 PM

thanx a bunch........ ill have streetryda post it in O.M when hes done

KiTTie 12-08-04 04:21 PM

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Blunt Rapper 12-09-04 12:58 PM

yo man.it was alright but try to up your vocab

KiTTie 12-10-04 04:03 PM

Chea, Im Workin On It..................

KiTTie 12-10-04 04:13 PM

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KiTTie 12-11-04 02:12 PM

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Shibby' [".]<-- 12-11-04 02:13 PM

Good, But Fucking Do Something About Yo Structure.

KiTTie 12-11-04 02:24 PM

Ya, Im Workin On It..........................................

Shibby' [".]<-- 12-11-04 02:29 PM

Better........And You Are Drastic's Bitch? That 'Boy' Need's a Pimp Slap By a Frozen Salmon. I've Told Him He's Not Allowed a Gf. :nono:

KiTTie 12-11-04 02:30 PM

Y??????????

Ur A Newb... And Im Not His Gf, Im His Wife......

KiTTie 12-15-04 03:49 PM

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KiTTie 12-19-04 02:52 PM

Uppin This Thread Now...

Zeke 12-19-04 03:02 PM

Nice Ma Just Your Structure And Vocabulary Needs Work Other Then That The Multis And The Flow Was Tight.....7.5/10 Keep It Up You'll Be Better

Werdddd

KiTTie 12-19-04 03:05 PM

Thanx Papi..... Uppin

NewKid 12-19-04 03:12 PM

It Wass Iight Up Ya Vokab Fix Ya Strukture And Don't Use Cuss Words Ta Rhyme Like Shit And Bitch That Dont Seem Right.............Kapeesh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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