Untraceable vs King~~Dipset
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

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King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 12:29 AM.

Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 09:30 AM.

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Ayo I Never Stop Risin Like Im An Elevator
N escalata'z ,When U Get 2 hell Satan'll Say "I Missed you hataz"

Ill leave you Witout A Trace So you can Really B Untraceable
put A "Cape" on Yo Bac and you Still Wouldnt Be Capable

U The King of Dick Rydas so You Love Masturbations
Let Yall Niggas N da Church so Yall Can CUM to your revelation

I snap on mo Niggas than A Polariod Camera
U New to RV thats Why Your verse Is So ameteur

U Cant Hang wit My Flow if we Were Salmons on A waterfall
Call yo Wack Ass Vrew So I Can Slaughter Yall

Battle me? Why waiste my Gat When U Can Face the Bat
U Wack......Ill Put a Mirror on Ya verse So U Can face The Facts

Good Luck

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Voted For: Untraceable

aiyo u get mu vote cuz u had nice structure....har hitting personals a few kew multi's but u closed MAD soft kid work on
that as for dipset only had one goodline decent structure but
waz very poorly written not hard ur more personal as untacable.....vote-untracable

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Voted For: Untraceable

i voted for him because he came more creative and had abetter flow and structure.he used concepts that arent used much which is a plus. king dipset had a good flow but i wasnt feelin the structure and how u space it out like that,and u came played in some lines but other lines u had some decent shit.what king lacked was direct punches and personals.he was selfglorifying a couple times which isnt good to do cuz why would u talk about how good u are or what u will do when that wouldnt really effect untracable or have those punches stuck to his head or anything.well no hate but thats my vote.....

Voted For: King~~Dipset

This battle goes to King Dipset for a sik verse. You had a whole rack of tight punches. And a lot of elevation. you came harder than the other Untraceable so you deserve this one. Untraceable you came ok. you needed to get on Kings name more. Ad your punches needed to be harder. This was agood battle. Great job both MC's



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yeh wow tha was a wonderful job of dickriding king~dipset......if you read my verse you woulda seen al the personals and this line....

retarted? na u just mistaken cuz my minds just sofa-king departed
darted down the hall cuz this 14 year old freshman gets bullied on

the sofa-king was play on his name idiot and a king has a throne.....do dethroning....mayb you should think before you dickride next time.......

w/e uppin this shit....

Voted For: King~~Dipset

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to UNTRACABLE flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, K~~D had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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Voted For: King~~Dipset

Opener - Trace, Kings was self-glorified/weak punch attempt
Closer - King, I thought both were wack but Kings was more creative
Punches - King, He was throwin harder punches
Personals - Trace, Personal in like every line
Metas - Trace, had more so I'll give him this one
Multies - Trace, King you tried to hard near the end, Trace's were dope tho
Flow - King, Trace some of your lines were too long with threw off flow (5th lines especially)
Vocab - Trace, This was easy to see
Creativity - Trace, I always enjoy links to understand punches more

This wasn't too bad of a battle ya'll, props to both...
Buy my vote is goin to Trace, well done.

P.S. King, you can always count on me to return favours by voting on battles like you did for me...just doesn't mean your always gunna get my vote, ya know? No hard feelings, I am 100% hounest with my votes. Payce.

Vote switched

Sorry, I will get strobe to fix this ^^^

I accidently voted for the wrong person, give it a day or 2 and it wil be fixed, payce.

so you meant to vote for me??...........im taking it....cuz i have more catagories won in your exp.........will be returned hoestly as you did :thumbup:

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

Trace
King~~Dipset thinks its kewl to be reppin a record of four-seven
lettin ya verse fall off just like the crew ya still reppin, rezerektion
Weak ..
expectin ya to not come hard cuz you keep plastic in the holsta
just do yourself a favor and not show against me like lyricalsoulja
Weak ..
bout to be KO'd like mictorious, katastophikal, and new method won
tenderin his cock all day, cuz he's afraid of everyone in Henderson
Weak ..
treason brings hatred so watch out while the dethronings started
retarted? na u just mistaken cuz my minds just sofa-king departed
Weak ..
darted down the hall cuz this 14 year old freshman gets bullied on
kids gona need morphene cuz im spicein this kid up with a bullion
Meh ..

Weak .. Weak And Weak .. Coo Structure Though .

King Dipset
Ayo I Never Stop Risin Like Im An Elevator
N escalata'z ,When U Get 2 hell Satan'll Say "I Missed you hataz"
Weak ..
Ill leave you Witout A Trace So you can Really B Untraceable
put A "Cape" on Yo Bac and you Still Wouldnt Be Capable
Meh ..
U The King of Dick Rydas so You Love Masturbations
Let Yall Niggas N da Church so Yall Can CUM to your revelation
Weak ..
I snap on mo Niggas than A Polariod Camera
U New to RV thats Why Your verse Is So ameteur
Lol .. Weak ..
U Cant Hang wit My Flow if we Were Salmons on A waterfall
Call yo Wack Ass Vrew So I Can Slaughter Yall
Weak ..
Battle me? Why waiste my Gat When U Can Face the Bat
U Wack......Ill Put a Mirror on Ya verse So U Can face The Facts
Aiiiight ..
Good Luck

Vote - King

More Of His Lines Stood Out To Me .. ..Battle Was Weak Though ..

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Voted For: Untraceable

yo i give dis to Untraceable hands down he won heres y......


King~~Dipset thinks its kewl to be reppin a record of four-seven
lettin ya verse fall off just like the crew ya still reppin, rezerektion
Nice liked dat opener.........

expectin ya to not come hard cuz you keep plastic in the holsta
just do yourself a favor and not show against me like lyricalsoulja
nice...................

bout to be KO'd like mictorious, katastophikal, and new method won
tenderin his cock all day, cuz he's afraid of everyone in Henderson
to original but it was iight........didnt hit hard

treason brings hatred so watch out while the dethronings started
retarted? na u just mistaken cuz my minds just sofa-king departed
good line......didnt hit dat hard either

darted down the hall cuz this 14 year old freshman gets bullied on
kids gona need morphene cuz im spicein this kid up with a bullion
haha i liked da closer nice...........


Ayo I Never Stop Risin Like Im An Elevator
N escalata'z ,When U Get 2 hell Satan'll Say "I Missed you hataz"
iight opener.......

Ill leave you Witout A Trace So you can Really B Untraceable
put A "Cape" on Yo Bac and you Still Wouldnt Be Capable
i liked da first line but it fell off on da 2nd.........

U The King of Dick Rydas so You Love Masturbations
Let Yall Niggas N da Church so Yall Can CUM to your revelation
dis one wasnt very good didnt hit hard

I snap on mo Niggas than A Polariod Camera
U New to RV thats Why Your verse Is So ameteur
played but it was iight.........

U Cant Hang wit My Flow if we Were Salmons on A waterfall
Call yo Wack Ass Vrew So I Can Slaughter Yall
dat one was wack........

Battle me? Why waiste my Gat When U Can Face the Bat
U Wack......Ill Put a Mirror on Ya verse So U Can face The Facts
......i like da closer good shit......keep elevating homie.......No hate

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

i wasnt really feelin either.......but i liked kings punches a lil better

Voted For: Untraceable

Ayo I Never Stop Risin Like Im An Elevator
N escalata'z ,When U Get 2 hell Satan'll Say "I Missed you hataz"
OK PLAYED AS FUCK AND STOLE FROM FAB AND REWORDED
Ill leave you Witout A Trace So you can Really B Untraceable
put A "Cape" on Yo Bac and you Still Wouldnt Be Capable
WACK NO REAL PUNCH PERSONAL WAS CORNY
U The King of Dick Rydas so You Love Masturbations
Let Yall Niggas N da Church so Yall Can CUM to your revelation
MADDDDDDD PLAYED
I snap on mo Niggas than A Polariod Camera
U New to RV thats Why Your verse Is So ameteur
THIS WANT A PUNCH JUST SHIT TALKING
U Cant Hang wit My Flow if we Were Salmons on A waterfall
Call yo Wack Ass Vrew So I Can Slaughter Yall
AGAIN NO PUNCH JUST SHIT TALKING
Battle me? Why waiste my Gat When U Can Face the Bat
U Wack......Ill Put a Mirror on Ya verse So U Can face The Facts
OK NO PUNCH AND AGAIN GUN LINES ARE PLAYED AS FUCK
BASICALLY YOUR PUNCHES WERE EITHER NOT THERE ARE MADD PLAYED PERSONAL AINT HIT EITHER:NONO:

King~~Dipset thinks its kewl to be reppin a record of four-seven
lettin ya verse fall off just like the crew ya still reppin, rezerektion
LOL DOPE PERSONAL HE STILL GOT THAT I HIS SIG TILL LIKE A FEW HOURS AGO LOL
expectin ya to not come hard cuz you keep plastic in the holsta
just do yourself a favor and not show against me like lyricalsoulja
WACK YOU KNOW GUN LINES ARE PLAYED
bout to be KO'd like mictorious, katastophikal, and new method won
tenderin his cock all day, cuz he's afraid of everyone in Henderson
ALSO NO PUNCH
treason brings hatred so watch out while the dethronings started
retarted? na u just mistaken cuz my minds just sofa-king departed
OK PUNCH NOT GREAT
darted down the hall cuz this 14 year old freshman gets bullied on
kids gona need morphene cuz im spicein this kid up with a bullion
WACK ENDER
OK GOOD FLOW BETTER VOCAB THEN YOUR OPPENANT HERE AS WELL AS SLIGHTLY BETTER PUNCHES AND MORE CREATIVITY SINCE YOUR OPPENANT USED ALMOST ALL PLAYED PUNCHES.

Voted For: Untraceable

Untraceable took this one..
tha punches were harder, structure was
in place, tha flow was pretty decent...
vocab was blah, but overall Untrace had
a decent drop...King~~Dipeset u had a
decent drop..tha punches i wasnt feelin
tho, but elevate more tho on those punches