G-Ride Bouncer vs ..::Climax::..
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-06-04 at 05:10 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

aight its up.... lets go......

G-Ride Bouncer has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 05:11 AM.

..::Climax::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 05:14 AM.

climaz ill knock ya head of with a axe
shit ill burn ur rhymes they mad of wax

shits so weak water cud break um
fake um time to break shake um

ill wont stop until u black n blue
i murked this newb hes weak i dont give a poo

aight im dropping now.... you drop whenever

*Ahem* ........ quick key

He's a sure success....... at failure, and he aint never gonna be ill
I here coments that he flows well....only cuase his career aims down hill
This dick ride bouncer.... its on his was to the hall of shame
mate you couldnt elevate, If you were on an escalater playing you game
He cant be straight spiting...... cause he's sucked cocks in many caces
only ill shit that cums from his mouth is the sperm traces...

4 :gfy: 3 :gfy: 2 :gfy: 1 :gfy: 0 :gfy: ..... GAME OVER...

ive dropped........................................... ....

ok......... you abit wack man........ nuff said... uppin for some votes!

at the min it im just given wins away i dont give a shit i have been 100% better but i got ip banned then got new ip and havnt won since then

well lol at you.... uppin for some votes...... what you get ip banned for...?

Voted For: ..::Climax::..

climax won with no contest....better flow, MADE SENSE, better wordplay, better vocab, better punches, i think u get tha picture...

climax: good ender, okay opener...and came alot harder
g-ride bouncer: bad vocab, bad punches, bad wordplay, bad structure, and made no sense

v/..::climax::..

yay im losing............................................ ..............

Voted For: ..::Climax::..

Climax won this easy

Man G-Ride you really didn't bring it in this one.

Climax, your punches were tight, lacked a bit of structure but overall it was a tight verse 7/10

G-ride, you need to step up ya vocab and punche. you made a decent attempt at some multi's, but the verse was just to whack.

i no i didnt try ......................

lmfao i gave himda iwn on prpus my rap times over

lol......... oi i dropped weak as here..... i peeped your old battles.... even if you tried i still would have won uppin for some votes!

Voted For: ..::Climax::..

alias vs. alias

punches- Climax harder hittin and more of em
personals- neither
multis- neither
metas- Climax cuz u had em
word play- Climax u had it
humor- Climax
flow- Climax lot smoother
structure- Climax easier to read

aight Climax ok drop. try some better personals, and multis.

Bouncer work on everythin, cuz im not gonna bother typin it out.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/..::Climax::..

px

uppin for some votes!

uppin for some votes!.............

hey if u seen the real side of me be4 i got ip banned u would have been day like that but i got ip anned then got a new ip and im crap even since not won 1 sice

Voted For: ..::Climax::..

climax verse was preety good a couple of punches above decent flow and creativeness was decent all around not a bad verse and actully preety good for a noob....

g bouncer u'r verse was WAY to basic, no effort in it no punches no good diss flow was simple and easy all around WAY TO BASIC AND SIMPLE elevate dogs...

vote: climaxeasy......

i no i gave him da win....................that y the call out was called who wanna merk me

Voted For: ..::Climax::..

G-Ride Bouncer

climaz ill knock ya head of with a axe
shit ill burn ur rhymes they mad of wax
(WEAK OPENER...SO SIMPLE..5/10)

shits so weak water cud break um
fake um time to break shake um
(URE JUST RHYMIN...NO PUNCHES OR MULTIES...4/10)

ill wont stop until u black n blue
i murked this newb hes weak i dont give a poo
(WEAK WEAK CLOSER...NOT EVEN FUNNY...4/10)

THIS WAS A WEAK VERSE MAN...NO HATE...BUT ALL YOU DID WAS FLOW...YOU HAD NO PUNCHES, META, MULTIES, DISSES...NOTHING...ELEVATE MAN...ELEVEATE


CLIMAX

He's a sure success....... at failure, and he aint never gonna be ill
I here coments that he flows well....only cuase his career aims down hill
(DECENT OPENER...FLOW OKAY...NO REAL GOOD PUNCH...6/10)

This dick ride bouncer.... its on his was to the hall of shame
mate you couldnt elevate, If you were on an escalater playing you game
(DECENT FLOW, OKAY DISS...USE BETTER WORDPLAY...6/10)

He cant be straight spiting...... cause he's sucked cocks in many caces
only ill shit that cums from his mouth is the sperm traces...
(OKAY CLOSER...YOUR BEST BAR...KIND OF PLAYED AND STRUCTURE IS OFF...7/10)

YO...YOUR VERSE WASNT BAD, BUT IT WASNT GREAT...IT IS AN AVERAGE BATTLE VERSE...YOU NEED TO BE MORE CREATIVE WITH YOUR WORDS AND STR8 UP DISS THAT DUDE...YOUR FLOW WAS AIGHT...STRUCUTRE WAS KINDA OFF....ELEVATE SOME, AND ULE B GOOD