Parallel vs 50Cent_MurderInc
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
10 minutes to spit
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good luck you two....

Minimum posts to vote: 500

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

50Cent_MurderInc has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 04:02 PM.

Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back
Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie

Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 04:12 PM.

if you dont understand wordplay and punches dont VOTE!!!
Here:

50cent_murderinc who do you think ur “pullin”, Michel Jackson
Only posers do shit to “grab” little baby boys dicks to win One
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay
You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer
Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter


...good luck

uppin............................................. .

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This was feedback posted for 50Cent_MurderInc
 

wat a wack battle wf watta wack name fukin change it dawg its wack gud shit frm parrell aight

This was feedback posted for 50Cent_MurderInc
 

this battle was hella short...

multies: no1
wordplay: 50
punches: 50
flow: 50
structure: 50
metas: 50

parallels punches were hella played...*MICHAEL JACKSON*...
his flow was off a little...but u can never get flow exactly how its meant to be when u read it...n e way...both good structure...
both need elavation...but i think yall both got potential...

best line: Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
^^^only because i hate mike hawk

worst line: Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie
^^^wtf...


ne way...hay 50...thx for sayin i need elavation when i even said it was gonna b basic...obviously the guy has a reading problem...lmfao...

but u took this 1 honestly...


~1~

*werd*...^^^...

Voted For: 50Cent_MurderInc

vote/50cent_murderinc..

he actually had personals and punches.. just make it a lil longer...

paralell.. mJ = played, no real personals.. punches didnt hit at all.. elevate...

good battle. pz 1

Voted For: Parallel

you you had hardder punches and personals even though there were only 6 lines but still it cool. good flow and style.

murder sucked... nuff said

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lol@ the unexplained vote....people explain them...

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you both suck.....................................

no but look both of your verses need to have more punches and personals....

in cant make a vote.............................................. ..............................

and too tell the truth both of those votes were unexplained so dont say just

his was because yours was unexplained too.......................................

Voted For: Parallel

Parallel - good spit man, you had a good flow.. and punches were strong like always.

Best Line - Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay

Worst Line - 50cent_murderinc who do you think ur “pullin”, Michel Jackson
Only posers do shit to “grab” little baby boys dicks to win One

50Cent_MurderInc - good spit too, your flow was on.. and your punches wernt to bad either.

Best Line - Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back

Worst Line - Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie

OVERALL - good battle here, both had some good punches and personals, but I gotta vote for Parallel. He had the better flow and his punches hit hard. 50Cent your shit was good, but you just didnt have as hard of punches as Parallel did.

Vote - Parallel

ok listen up...your wack...learn wordplay and similies before you say shit you dumb newbie...i would merk you...how can we do personals when we know shit about each other..HERB

Voted For: Parallel

ok i got to go with parallel on this both were good but PARALLEL had better punches that hit harder

so V/Parallel

return the fav linkz in sigg

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ok nice...............................uppinizzle..... ..crunkizzle..

two of your votes are unexplained.......abnd damn no one gets punches...

uppin............................................. ..........

This was feedback posted for 50Cent_MurderInc
 

umm first off, i'm with 50cent murderinc, your punches were really force in my case....

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50cent_murderinc who do you think ur “pullin”, Michel Jackson
Only posers do shit to “grab” little baby boys dicks to win One
That didn't even rhyme, wack opener
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay
Gay lines are played, this bar was wack
You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer
Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter
Wack ass closer

Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back
Good opener, Bruce Lee's dope
Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
Good personal, that quote makes him look like such a loser
Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie
Another good personal

How the fuck is Parallel winning this 3-1? His verse fuckin' sucked donkey balls. 50Cent you murdered his ass like the "Murder" in your name. Parallel probaby just has d/r's, 'cuz his drop was horrible. No hate though, there's a lot of cats who suck just like you:thumbup:

why are newbies leaving feed and not voting w/e but man get votes o and firetruck boy jackson and one rhyme go to back to your rhyme book and learn shit you herb..

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for Parallel
 

Since i can't vote... Ill just check the polls i guess. Why set a 500 post vote limit when u only have 200 votes? Thats just dumb...

This was feedback posted for 50Cent_MurderInc
 

lol checkin polls............................................

Voted For: Parallel

parallel. man mad punches multis. shit. i liked your lines.

50cent nice verse but still need work with your punches.
vote parallel.

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Voted For: Parallel

50CMI:

Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back
^^ decent 5/10
Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
^^wack 2/10
Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie
^^ehh decent personal 6/10

overall : 13/30 (43%)

parallel:

50cent_murderinc who do you think ur “pullin”, Michel Jackson
Only posers do shit to “grab” little baby boys dicks to win One
^^wack 4/10
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay
^^decent 5/10
You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer
Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter
^^ wtf lol decent better than the rest 5/10

overall : 14/30 (47%)

vote: parallel

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Voted For: Parallel

Nice battle by both felt that 50 could have come better
with more complexity but didn't. P come nice vocab and
wordplay killed it, he droped an all round better verse.

50 come nice but you need to up your game man..

P's best bar,.
You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer
Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter
^Nice personal, flow, vocab and punch.

50,,..
Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back
^Nice personal, and wordplay...

Both come alright but I felt that P droped an alround better
verse then 50.

Vote ~ Parallel

i cant believe this little kid....haha gets beat and has to do this o well uppin

What should've rhymed was:
Jackson
Win one

And it didn't...cockmuncher

Voted For: Parallel

Para took this one
punches were harder..better structure
and tha flow was good too...

50..u need to elevate more...those punches
were weak..

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lol....................................uppin......

uppin............................................. .......

This was feedback posted for Parallel
 

sup man....since i cant vote i will give you feedback...pretty nice structure and all...still got alot of imagination huh...atleas you aint saying rimes like ''me'' and '' me '' lol anyway i didnt really like the opening...didnt rime but that line about:
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay

it was my favorite one..

Voted For: Parallel

vote para heres my reason
flow para
punches tie
opener-closer para
vocab para
imagry para
multi para
over all para
and plz hit up on my links peace.

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chekin pollz
 

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