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Psyco vs intensify effect
Battle Rules:
60,000 on the line....... 20 lines...... due mid-night...... no crew vote dick ryders no ryrcling no bitting no feeding no pm for votes no hate votes....... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-09-04 at 09:00 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Psyco has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 09:03 AM.
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**50 cents Many Men Beat Drops**
Lets work!!! **GunShots hit Mr.Effect** HAHA..I'm hearin you Bitch, Your more Holy than a spiritual Lift,You should put my verse "between Bread" and "Bite",Its the only way you'll have a "Miracle Whip":: No one likes what you writ, even your Avy is gay cause its michel Jackson,I'm tellin you this...No one feels your "Presents in Threads", even if I gave you a "Wearable Gift":: Your about as Hot, as Sented-Preciuos-Candles..This dude would not be able to say "IM Hot", if HOT was his Instant-Message-Handle:: His Real name is CRANDLE...lol...what a 50-reppin-scandal, He has asthma & Bifococals, and the only time he goes toe to toe, is in his Precription-Leather-Sandals::lmfao Fucking Nerd **Beat switches to 50cents "Your Not Like ME"** I dont see him or Lable him 'threat', and I'm able to Bet...He'll have atleast one "DiCk RiSe" or "ForHead" Joke, but His Only Connection..is his Cable InterNet:: He'll need protection..As my Punches intersect, His silly Rep, But he cant defeat my "Minds Theories" even if he battled "BILLY BLANKS NEXT":: Fuck Spit or Swallow!!Both..You Suck with Spits...you could Install Toilets on ceiling, and Peeps still dont would not ^UP^ your Shit:: You DumAss Prick....I see your on the right "Track", but you Still getting Fucked up like a Slut-Subway-chick:: Your Like Forensic Detectives with those dusty-prints, your not 50 "GANGTAS DONT BUMP YO SHIT":: The only time you got shot was for Antibiotics, The Only time you Hold heat was with OVEN MITS!!!!!!!!:: G-G-G-G-G-G-GET YO WACK AS OUTA HERE **Beat Fades** done and out just like butter |
done i.e. SO COME ON AND DROP WHEN YOU GET ON
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 12:19 PM.
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come on I.E. drop today its your last day to drop so just fucking do it
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shit i forgot thanks for the PM....
so i gotta key some shit together.... i've peep ya stuff N notice ya Never won a legit battle, all u'r cheaters take apart-in-wins... Cause Psyco stay shook in battles, like park-in-sins....1 Psyco, You must have an addiction to Skripted Konflictionz A lil bit mad cuz nobody is listening? Consider yourself Jesus, cuz this is your crucifixtion....2 i'll snatch da mic cuz you don’t need those... I was expecting a challenge but I got a toddler in speedos...3 That posted a verse with weak blows... cuz His punches are so dangerously cheesy, you would think they were cheetos....4 All the gun talk, been played man, quit actin like you been shot... Braggin about bein surrounded by chrome, onlly cua ya paps own a rim shop...5 You been hot, past tense, ya skills remind me of retarts who dumb-out... Got written punches like ya sexuality, it's all still waiting to come out....6 Ill Pound on ya chest and watch as it swells into breasts... No need for silicone tities..Naturals best..Confusing ya family's crests...7 I’m mirror hitting Psyco, hes own punches get reflected... N I'll break u'r mind into thousands of pieces, sweep em' up and keep u'r thoughts collected...8 i wanted something like a night-fight but look at this-hoe-u-send... cuz apparently, you couldn't come off strong with steroids in your deodorant....9 You aint even on the charts, you just passed last..... so now R.V can see how u'r "X' rated" when related to ass..10 *X-RATED=PRONS=ASS* |
ok coo good drop anywayz uppin this uppin
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yea good battle.........
up up up and away she blows............. |
ya up up up and away for votes
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Voted For: Psyco
IE..... ok first of all im not gonna vote the way i usually do but damn thats because of your stucture...its so fucked up...work on that...your punches are hella weak it sounds like your greeting them for christmas thats how there not punches...wordplay as i said work on punchlines....3/10 No Hate.. Psyco: hmmm your stucture was also so fucked up....but you had some hot punches in there and a lil twist almost wordplay good attemts....vocab was on the weake end for both of you guys.....hmm...what else is there...hmm.....o ya metaphores hmm they were used well in the punches for you...nice...6/10...No Hate |
^^^ what dont u get....... dont vote in none of my battles since that R.I.P vs V.T beef and i supa ko'ed u, u've been voting agenist me in every battle chill N be easy fuck outta here i dont want u voting in none of my battles fuck outta here....
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This was feedback posted for Psyco
checkin polls............................................
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This was feedback posted for Psyco
.............................just Checking The Polls
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Voted For: Psyco
checkin polls homie........................................ Removed |
^^^^fuk sake i cliked fukin fbak - ill get strobe 2 fukin remove it
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Voted For: intensify effect
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to PHSYCO flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, I.E. had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Psyco
checking score........
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upp'in this battle.......
enough witht he feed back lets get some votes..................... |
up up up and away for votes lets get ride of the feedback bitches
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Voted For: intensify effect
Intensify definately took this one. Psyco, You must have an addiction to Skripted Konflictionz A lil bit mad cuz nobody is listening? Consider yourself Jesus, cuz this is your crucifixtion....2 That line had good vocab, and good rhymes. You aint even on the charts, you just passed last..... so now R.V can see how u'r "X' rated" when related to ass..10 That rhyme had good wordplay and flow... Definately a close battle, but my vote goes to intensify effect.. |
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uppin yall playa playa n
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dont start deleting every single vote agenist u dogs i just peep u got 1 vote so far deleted......
but anyways upp'in....... |
ya up up up and away for votes
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upp'in this battle dont sleep ya.......................
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up up up and away for votes
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This was feedback posted for Psyco
yo i was gonna vote on this shit but i think it would be to hard to pick a winners so just checking the polls
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Voted For: intensify effect
Damn Both Of Yall Had Tha Vokab Tha Strukture And Tha Originality Punches 4rm Tha Both Of You But I Got A Kick Out Of This Verse Becuase Of His Wordplay Tha First 2 Lines U Killt That Shit Hommie Everi Thing About This Wass Hot But Mih Vote Goes Ta I.e..... |
Voted For: intensify effect
**GunShots hit Mr.Effect** HAHA..I'm hearin you Bitch, Your more Holy than a spiritual Lift,You should put my verse "between Bread" and "Bite",Its the only way you'll have a "Miracle Whip":: KANYE WENT HUH>>? WEAK START No one likes what you writ, even your Avy is gay cause its michel Jackson,I'm tellin you this...No one feels your "Presents in Threads", even if I gave you a "Wearable Gift":: BETTER Your about as Hot, as Sented-Preciuos-Candles..This dude would not be able to say "IM Hot", if HOT was his Instant-Message-Handle:: OO THAT WAS PREETY GOOD His Real name is CRANDLE...lol...what a 50-reppin-scandal, He has asthma & Bifococals, and the only time he goes toe to toe, is in his Precription-Leather-Sandals::lmfao STRECHED LIKE A MOTHER FUCKER Fucking Nerd **Beat switches to 50cents "Your Not Like ME"** I dont see him or Lable him 'threat', and I'm able to Bet...He'll have atleast one "DiCk RiSe" or "ForHead" Joke, but His Only Connection..is his Cable InterNet:: WEAK AGAIN AND STRECHED He'll need protection..As my Punches intersect, His silly Rep, But he cant defeat my "Minds Theories" even if he battled "BILLY BLANKS NEXT"::OK BUT NOT HARD HITTING Fuck Spit or Swallow!!Both..You Suck with Spits...you could Install Toilets on ceiling, and Peeps still dont would not ^UP^ your Shit:: PREETY GOOD You DumAss Prick....I see your on the right "Track", but you Still getting Fucked up like a Slut-Subway-chick:: Your Like Forensic Detectives with those dusty-prints, your not 50 "GANGTAS DONT BUMP YO SHIT":: STRECHED AND WEAK The only time you got shot was for Antibiotics, The Only time you Hold heat was with OVEN MITS!!!!!!!!:: WEAK AGAIN COULD OF BEEN MORE CREATIVE VS i've peep ya stuff N notice ya Never won a legit battle, all u'r cheaters take apart-in-wins... Cause Psyco stay shook in battles, like park-in-sins....1 DECENT START Psyco, You must have an addiction to Skripted Konflictionz A lil bit mad cuz nobody is listening? Consider yourself Jesus, cuz this is your crucifixtion....2 NICE i'll snatch da mic cuz you don’t need those... I was expecting a challenge but I got a toddler in speedos...3 FUNNY That posted a verse with weak blows... cuz His punches are so dangerously cheesy, you would think they were cheetos....4 HAHA GOOD All the gun talk, been played man, quit actin like you been shot... Braggin about bein surrounded by chrome, onlly cua ya paps own a rim shop...5 ORIGINAL GOOD You been hot, past tense, ya skills remind me of retarts who dumb-out... Got written punches like ya sexuality, it's all still waiting to come out....6 DECENT Ill Pound on ya chest and watch as it swells into breasts... No need for silicone tities..Naturals best..Confusing ya family's crests...7 DECENT I’m mirror hitting Psyco, hes own punches get reflected... N I'll break u'r mind into thousands of pieces, sweep em' up and keep u'r thoughts collected...8 OUCH NICE i wanted something like a night-fight but look at this-hoe-u-send... cuz apparently, you couldn't come off strong with steroids in your deodorant....9 HAHA OO SHIT NICE You aint even on the charts, you just passed last..... so now R.V can see how u'r "X' rated" when related to ass..10 GOOD ENDING PREETY CLOSE YA MADE A GOOD BATTLE BUT I THOUGHT i.e JUST EDGE THIS BATTLE OUT WITH HARDER PUNCHES AND MORE ORIGINAL BARS CLOSE 1 |
what the fuck ever nigga^^^^^any ways
up up up and away for votes lets get ride of the feedback bitches |
upp'in this joint mang...................................
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upp'in to end this...........................................
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Voted For: intensify effect
Jesus...both of yall need to work on your structure, like try to keep it even and all. both of yall had some stretched lines, but I voted for IE for having lines that rhyme. and please dont put numbers in between each bar IE, thats herbish. but breaking shit down: Psyco: I don't know what is this, but I can't read anything, horrible structure with horrible punches, and that shit with the beat change is wack, this is text, ain't no one gonna hear that shit, it's played. IE: you ain't no newb, but you do need some elevation though. punches are decent, but work on your structure a bit, your lines were too stretched, need to work on that. overall I voted for IE with harder hitting punches ps could yall please return the vote in my link, thanks! |
Voted For: intensify effect
I.E: 7/10 overall u had a nice drop. punches were hard hittin & connected...the structure needs improving tho..and the flow was kinda lacking there..nice persona's in there too..but overall u had tookin this one.. Psyco: 5/10 u had a decent drop..some of it i wasn't feelinit tho..punches could've been harder, and ur structure was aight too..but overall u had a decent drop |
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