Makeveli Trained vs Cannabarz
 

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Check in by: 12-09-04 at 10:37 AM

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Makeveli Trained has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 10:39 AM.

Cannabarz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 10:49 AM.

Watch as i expose this nigga as tha site's biggest whore
Givin weddin rings 2 generalz, tha only way he engages n war
Id say ima win this, but thas more played than ya bar lines
N Cannabarz tried 2 throw BIG punches.....
....but failed 2 increase his FONT SIZE
Im seriously tired of this niggas shyt, so im gettin constipated
He thinks throwin hard 'punches' iz bein So-phis-ticated(Fist)
Ill toss his weak lines n tha 'toilet'
......n show em how 2 'Can-a-bar'
Dude lives on tha net, so hes goin nowhere like walkin n tar
Im tha 1 wit tha hot bars so mayb we oughta switch names
Ya previous wins were wit noobs, so mayb u should b 'trained'
I got this bitch shook, he dont think i c em' hidin n tha fog
U winnin this battle iz 'far-fetched' like a 'quarterback's dog'
Y iz he still battlin n FL if hes supposed ta b a vet
He's scared of a challenge cuz he dont wanna lose his net rep
Better believe it when i say that i will shyt on u
I already won this battle, dont start ta think it's a fluke
U may b 20-1, but my record's better, dog im undefeated(lol)
Ur tha wackest dude here, n i dont think it needs 2 b repeated
This dude jus finished gettin regulated by 'Warren G'
Cuz u 'broke easily', i hope u came wit a 'warranty'

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Voted For: Makeveli Trained

um this waz one of the betta battlez i've seen on hear....
nice
flow=tie
meta's=Trained
punches=trained
personals=barz

so my vote goes to trained for harder hitting punches..an
getting way more creative then barz....peep my ish tho'
fellas vrs.ebonics and fredunlimited

aight thanx, uppin

Voted For: Cannabarz

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to M-TRAINED flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, CANNABARZ had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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damn.........^^^^nice sig, bad vote, j/p

uppin...

Voted For: Cannabarz

cAnnabarz took this battle, even though it was a decent effort by both.
The beginning was won by Makaveli, but overall the rest was better on Cannabarz.

yup. 2-1 me. upping..................................

Voted For: Cannabarz

CannaBarz:
Dam This Piece Was Deff Hott, I Like The Vocab In Here Better Then Most Of RV Members Be Hitting Up, Got Straight To The Point With Your Punches And Personals..That Was Well Done, Structure Was Brazen...Well Decent, Rhyme Scheme Was Nice.....Only Thing I Wasnt Feeling Was The Closing Other Then That You Had A Well Decent Flow With Multis...Personaly I'll Give You An 9.5/10

Trained:
Your Verse Was Not Queit Far From His You RHymes Scheme Connect A Little Better And Structure Was Connected Better Only Thing Your Vocabulary Wasnt There But You Did Have Some Decent Vocab Dont Get Me Wrong, Punches Was There Nice Playing Off Him, Personal Was There Also I Like How It Sounded..Over All I'll Give You An 9/10

Close Battle I Say Big Ups To Both Yall

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Voted For: Cannabarz

yea...vote goes to U...

U had betta flow..and punches..it was Weak..but it would be betta to Elevate...u can add some multis...but good up..man

Voted For: Makeveli Trained

Aii This is How i feel

MT
from the first bar i knew that you had this clearly your first punch was betta than cannabarz punche"Z" all together...Your meta's were the only thing i think you lacked out on but your multi's and punchez made up for it....so i give you a
9/10

Cannabarz
Look mayne its not that i didnt like your verse its jus that u didnt come hard enought......you lacked strong punchez and personalz but your multi's and meta's were terrific.....but as i see it you clearly shouldve came alot much harder than you came .......sorry
6/10

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Voted For: Cannabarz

Makaveli Trained:
Watch as i expose this nigga as tha site's biggest whore
Givin weddin rings 2 generalz, tha only way he engages n war
Ok opener, decent wordplay
Id say ima win this, but thas more played than ya bar lines
N Cannabarz tried 2 throw BIG punches.....
....but failed 2 increase his FONT SIZE
Nice personal
Im seriously tired of this niggas shyt, so im gettin constipated
He thinks throwin hard 'punches' iz bein So-phis-ticated(Fist)
Ok wordplay here, good setup but punch wasn't that hard
Ill toss his weak lines n tha 'toilet'
......n show em how 2 'Can-a-bar'
Dude lives on tha net, so hes goin nowhere like walkin n tar
Blah, concept could've been worded a lot better
Im tha 1 wit tha hot bars so mayb we oughta switch names
Ya previous wins were wit noobs, so mayb u should b 'trained'
Weak...
I got this bitch shook, he dont think i c em' hidin n tha fog
U winnin this battle iz 'far-fetched' like a 'quarterback's dog'
Decent punch
Y iz he still battlin n FL if hes supposed ta b a vet
He's scared of a challenge cuz he dont wanna lose his net rep
Weak attempt at personal, could've been worded better
Better believe it when i say that i will shyt on u
I already won this battle, dont start ta think it's a fluke
Self-gorification = wack...
U may b 20-1, but my record's better, dog im undefeated(lol)
Ur tha wackest dude here, n i dont think it needs 2 b repeated
Weak punch
This dude jus finished gettin regulated by 'Warren G'
Cuz u 'broke easily', i hope u came wit a 'warranty'
Setup was wack, punch was aight. Better wording in setup could've improved this bar a lot.

Cannabarz:
I'm The evilest-shrink! ..Your feeblish-winks! will leave you repo'd-and-twinked!..
mightaswell get 20-losses cuz, only way u reachin barz is if ya losses is legal-to-DRINK!!..
Good multis here, nice meta too...good opener
Your not even high or equal! pussy. your just jealous my fashion arrives so evil!!!
and your Hopes are Down! so heres some flowers, u can put it' beside-his-ego!!! ..
Nice...
knives or eagles? ..no-Use.!! . Your flows, duke? Your just A MAGGOT MAN!!! ...
might aswell get married! ..because drivin that get-a-way car is the only way ya Draggin-CANZ!!..
Lol a little self-glory, but not enough for me to complain. nice meta
fucking tupac-wannabe, like HONESTLY ...your fucking snoring yo..
i guess this isnt the only thing coming out of the closet since ya BORING FLOWS! ..
This one didn't hit that hard though...
tore this hoe, he actually thinks that hes stuck-the-best! ..
intell my punchlines rip THUG LIFE right off his fucking-chest! ..
Ok personal, punch didn't hit much though...
Intell nothing but rust is left, It's easy, you'll get a KNOCKED FACE!!! ..
this fags on TU's dick so much, if i punched him,he'd shit out PAC TAPES!!! ...
Ok closer, could've been worded better for a more successful punch

Winner: Cannabarz, for harder punches and better wordplay. Makaveli you got some potential, you just gotta keep elevating and you'll get better. I just think Can took you on this one.
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Voted For: Cannabarz

Cannabarz: Your drop was pretty good. punches were hard hittin...structure needs improving..flow was a little off & on..sorta creative punches there but overall u had a decent drop..nuttin much here tho

Makaveli: ur drop I wasn't feelin as much tho..the punches weren't hard enuff to actually knock Cannabarz off his feet..but the structure on ur piece needs improving..and ur vocab was aight..just elevate a little more here

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