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ambient vs .Indeph.
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8-14 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting don't vote because somebody's name sig or avytar is better..nor voting because the person's online.. Vote for the winner please!!that is all Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-08-04 at 01:42 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
ambient has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 03:43 PM.
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amb is one to stay on top.. & leave deph coughin' dust
deph was on top.. of parralel, & they both fuck 'en' suck one person can speak for many.. here's RV droppin truth take away ur d/r wins.. as sayin's go, u got nothin but lose thing is we're both 14.. so i guess that age isn't everything chuz i drop fresh lines.. while deph drops played.. well, anythin' i'll drop from the top... in dep't'h & prove that height hurts deph thought about leaving rv.. but he was like "life's first" spark ya chin & smack ya n do wat ya mum shoulda.. at birth fortunate for u, ppl gotta vote b4 i k.o u.. well, we gotta laugh first u'll discover yer verse 'in pieces'.. it's religion that ur put to ur 'rest' wen u log on rv, if ur K.O aint served yet, u'll be checkin in for deph Blah!!.. no explanations.. don't get it, simple, don't vote. |
.Indeph. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 04:17 PM.
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Man..Leme Crush this Hefale... Ambient.... friend.. pal..please die a slow death.. how could u swallow a win..rockin a girl with no neck? don't check..AFTER you write..do you need a lesson? I'm confused..is that your bank account..or your record your verse is predicted..I think with every line I am threatened... your verse's cause despression,like a salvation army presents punches from my profile..you did no more then planning I think you could of got a mic..but paid more for tanning here's your specs..unless this pest..does not see me well everyone will agree...how many people thought he was female but I think he failed..tryin to get votes the same way as DML.. -Deph spf..his sig and avy..has a girl on it.. don't get it? go back to front lines.. |
..Man..Leme Crush this Hefale... Ambient.... friend.. pal..please die a slow death.. how could u swallow a win..rockin a girl with no neck? don't check..AFTER you write..do you need a lesson? I'm confused..is that your bank account..or your record your verse is predicted..I think with every line I am threatened... your verse's cause despression,like a salvation army presents punches from my profile..you did no more then planning I think you could of got a mic..but paid more for tanning here's your specs..unless this pest..does not see me well everyone will agree...how many people thought he was female but I think he failed..tryin to get votes the same way as DML.. -Deph spf..his sig and avy..has a girl on it.. don't get it? go back to front lines.. |
Voted For: ambient
Ambient.... friend.. pal..please die a slow death.. how could u swallow a win..rockin a girl with no neck? don't check..AFTER you write..do you need a lesson? I'm confused..is that your bank account..or your record your verse is predicted..I think with every line I am threatened... your verse's cause despression,like a salvation army presents punches from my profile..you did no more then planning I think you could of got a mic..but paid more for tanning here's your specs..unless this pest..does not see me well everyone will agree...how many people thought he was female but I think he failed..tryin to get votes the same way as DML.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES FAM GOOD FLOW....PERSONALS AND PUNCHES CONNECTED....DIDNT SENSE ANY WORDPLAYS (I THINK) I SENSE META'Z GOOD DROP THOUGH FAM...I COULD'VE FELT U COULD CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES FAM... PERSONALS WERE GOOD BUT DA PUNCHES I THOUGHT YOU'VE COULD COME HARDER~! amb is one to stay on top.. & leave deph coughin' dust deph was on top.. of parralel, & they both fuck 'en' suck one person can speak for many.. here's RV droppin truth take away ur d/r wins.. as sayin's go, u got nothin but lose thing is we're both 14.. so i guess that age isn't everything chuz i drop fresh lines.. while deph drops played.. well, anythin' i'll drop from the top... in dep't'h & prove that height hurts deph thought about leaving rv.. but he was like "life's first" spark ya chin & smack ya n do wat ya mum shoulda.. at birth fortunate for u, ppl gotta vote b4 i k.o u.. well, we gotta laugh first u'll discover yer verse 'in pieces'.. it's religion that ur put to ur 'rest' wen u log on rv, if ur K.O aint served yet, u'll be checkin in for deph ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA FAM THIS WAS GOOD.... NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES THE 1ST BAR ABOUT PARREL AND INDEPH GOT ME ROLLING FAM LOL........WERD I'D SENSE WORDPLAYS.... OVERALL= THIS WAS AN OK BATTLE I THOUGHT BOTH INDEPH AND AMBIENT COULD'VE COME HARDER WITH THEM PUNCHES......BUT ANYWAY INDEPH TOOK FLOW OK WITH THEM PUNCHES GOOD WITH THEM PERSONALS AND META'Z WAS GOOD AMBIENT GOOD AT PUNCHES GOOD AT PERSONALS GOOD AT WORDPLAYS MY VOTE I HAVE TO SAY..........AMBIENT HIS PUNCHES JUST CAME ALOT HARDER LISTEN INDEPH- YOU HAD SOME STRONG LINES... OF PERSONALS AND META'Z... BUT THE PUNCHES I'VE FELT U COULD'VE COME HARD THAN THAT...GOOD VERSE THOUGH BUT DA PUNCHES WERE KINDA WEAK... V-AMBIENT FOR HARDER PUNCHES |
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Voted For: .Indeph.
Indeph... your vreese was solid.... nice flow nice punches and your personals was good.... your streucture was okay but i dont understand why you center your verses like that only time i have seen someone do that is in topical and poetry but that your thing... your two best bars was Ambient.... friend.. pal..please die a slow death.. how could u swallow a win..rockin a girl with no neck? everyone will agree...how many people thought he was female but I think he failed..tryin to get votes the same way as DML.. Only adivice i could give to you is to keep your shit simple but complex and make your shit rhyme more... throw some multis and more metas in there Ambient... your verse was good aswell but i really just wasnt feeling your personal... that link was pretty lame and your opener was gay as fuck and played... sex punches went out a long time ago.... your closer was okay but not really that good and to me your opener and closer combined its 45% of my shit v/indeph |
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Voted For: ambient
Im Gonna Have To Say Amb Got This... Flow-Amb (Deph Was Off At Parts)... Punches- Deph Structure- Amb Personal Enjoyment- Amb... Something About Dephs I Just WASNT Feeling... I Couldnt Get Into It Really... .One. |
thanks for the vote......................uppin'.................. ....
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fucking vote on this shit!!...............................don't sleep.
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fucking vote on this shit!!...............................don't sleep.
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fucking vote on this shit!!...............................don't sleep.
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how many times i gotta up this before somebody will vote?!?
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This was feedback posted for ambient
DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN hot battle
this shit was off the fuckin hook |
Voted For: ambient
amb took this.... nice battle but amb had far beta punches, liked the first bar, gud personal, indeph i always think of u as more of a topical head but u did alrite here dawg but amb jus gettin beta n beta n was too strong for ya here.....both had gud flow n structure.... fav line of battle - 'u'll discover yer verse 'in pieces'.. it's religion that ur put to ur 'rest' wen u log on rv, if ur K.O aint served yet, u'll be checkin in for deph' dope peace |
Man...this battle was fuckin wack.
Vote on this shit, i want it closed. |
Voted For: ambient
Ambient...nice drop from you here -better than ur other verses- ...ur punches were pretty much hard-hittin and they connected here...the flow was good...structure was in place and not stretched everywhere...and decent persona's but overall u had a good drop here though Indeph...decent drop from you here...ur punches were decent & sorta hard hittin here...ur flow was good w/ your structure...decent persona from you also..but overall yo punches couldve been more harder to take this one though... No hate to both though RTF Ambient http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172258 |
I will vote on your battle ^^
Uppin this bitch again...vote you lazy bastards. |
Voted For: ambient
this was a wack battle but i think that ambient won this. cuz there wasnt tha tmany punches in indephs' verse, n the ones that were in there weren't that hot. but ambients joint wasnt killin neither but i was feelin his flow more and attempts at wordplay so i give him the vote holla at me wit honest votes http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171803 |
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