Cannabarz vs ambient
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-09-04 at 03:33 PM

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Cannabarz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 03:34 PM.

ambient has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 03:42 PM.

how long does this guy have to drop? hes taking so long.

lmao... i've got a life outside the net too u know.

I'll drop when im ready.

then why did u answer my callout? im sure if u had the life outside of the net then you wouldn't of answered my callout intell u was good in ready. now i gotta wait on ya ass and keep this open.

Voted For: Cannabarz

Cannabarz:
Your drops-suck, so STOP, fuck .. you blessed? your not even POT LUCK..
if u talked to the man upstairs, he'd drop you down the flight of steps u WALKED UP!!..
Good opener, good wordplay in both lines
so knock, what?! me fag?, you'll leaved-tagged, your not even honest-guy ..
I mean, you can go downhill skiing on the fuccing slope that I WON THIS BY!!..
Lol good bar here
exhaust ya tries, your true-gay, sure you'll lose, hey .. it's the rules-play !! ..
they didn't let you into council cause your nice, it's cuz 14's a CUTE AGE!!! ..
2nd line was stretched by a sylable or two, but other than that decent bar
I'm raw-DUDE! .. .............but ambient rides chrit, so should I applaud-too? ..
I mean, if The Council is playing follow the leader, just QUIT! you all-lose! ..
Lol damn...damn.
follow laws-rules! ...you might get under, but even the phlight just wonders..
when it comes to round tables, amb gets no say like a LIGHT CONDUCTOR!..
Good personal play off TC's round table
who likes your structure? your garbage! jeez...theirs no hope for your text .. !! ..
you couldn't digest this win/wind, if EMS gave CPR to a hole in your neck !!!...
Decent, not that hard but previous bars make up for it
your known as the best? haha. ..thats ya record, now deduct the last exponents!!..
hes been paying for dickriders, hes more indepth/in debt than his LAST OPPONENT!..
Another good personal here
blast ya bones, and .. take-ya-pride, face-it-guy! ..whenever you write is wrong!..
so ima lay you out to dry............, on the same line ya fucking LIFE IS ON!!! ..
Lol more good wordplay here, lines are improving
I'm lightning-strong! your not even in health-ill! jus because you FELT SKILLED!!
so im pretty glad you still quote your lines, cuz trust me. NOONE ELSE WILL!!!
Good closer, punch connected

ambient:
i'm one to look on the bright side.. n leave can half full
fact is that ur style is played
.................c'mon, even ur name states u recycle
Weak opener
mutha' fucka', im trashin' 'n' baggin' u and throwin' u out
guy only set this to unlimited... chuz he couldn't even count
Another sub-par bar
u think that i was stallin' with this battle...... hardly
jus' givin' u some time here
........................ before u lose 'n' leave, just like RB
Made up for previous bar with a good personal
damn these RB rejects... makin it here?? son u wasted ya wish
chuz u do know that it's a newby thing
............................................to put net records in sigs
Weak closer, punch could've been worded better.

Winner: Cannabarz, for an overall better verse. Good wordplay, hard punches, adn good transitions between bars. Both of you had good structure though, and ambi I've seen you drop better so no hate.

Return the favor with an honest vote to a link in my sig...

can... ur wack... watsup with all them fake ass personals?

arn' u the one to talk? ..fag, u blatantly used a line thatz been play'd out since my times in 2002. jeez, i would applaud the first dude on the site that can win a battle against me without usin a played concept on the can line, ..

..lol @ you. no HOMO. please.

upping. 1-0 ..

Voted For: Cannabarz

Hmm...both came pretty damn good, even though ambient's was quick...Cannabarz took this, cause he obviously had more time to do this...multies, punches everythin was pretty damn ill...ambient, I have seen much better from you...it's unfortunate that you had a lack of time.

Could you please hit up at least one of these battles? Thanks.

Topical: hipnoticz

Punchline: logic 4 dubz

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz

w/e u fag... fact is i keyed that up in 10 mins and actually managed to come up with real personals...
... while all of urs were fake as fuck.

Voted For: Cannabarz

ambient played weak punches here flow was off disses aint hit structure was off and some shit aint rhyme this was horrible 2/10
cannabarz lol dope fucking punches i dont even know you but i been reading you shit and your punches are dope this was no exception sliding down the slopes that i won by you all lose haha dope flow structure good dope vocab ender was fucking dope as fuck too a 9/10
cannabarz wins with far superiority on all levels

nuff said ^ .. i ain't even need to talk. your 14. your still learning how to make a personal, i'm surpassed your fuccin level in anyway possible, and if you don't think so, we can have another battle for banishment. pussy. ..3-0 me.

This was feedback posted for ambient
 

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Voted For: ambient

i'm one to look on the bright side.. n leave can half full
fact is that ur style is played
.................c'mon, even ur name states u recycle
damn these RB rejects... makin it here?? son u wasted ya wish
chuz u do know that it's a newby thing
............................................to put net records in sigs

vs.

blast ya bones, and .. take-ya-pride, face-it-guy! ..whenever you write is wrong!..
so ima lay you out to dry............, on the same line ya fucking LIFE IS ON!!!
I'm lightning-strong! your not even in health-ill! jus because you FELT SKILLED!!
so im pretty glad you still quote your lines, cuz trust me. NOONE ELSE WILL!!!

It's 4 vs 4 but can wrote like 2 times more so ambient gets the win. amb really syrprised me here with good punches and personals that connected nicely. can used a bunch of whack wordplay bullshit that wont work here, the punches were either weak as fuck or just plain whack through most of his verse but he really picked it up near the end. can you gotta turn away from trying to get good flow and stop cap. your wordplay or w/e.

V-Ambient

This was feedback posted for ambient
 

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Voted For: Cannabarz

Blaaaah, That Was A Fucking Slaughter...
Canna Tore Him A New One...
Punches: Canna
Flow: Canna
Wordplay: Canna
Fuck Im Not Even Gonna Break It Down...
This Shit Was So One Sided Cuz Amb Underestimated The Fuck Out Of His Oponent...
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just wanna see who won

Voted For: ambient

CannaBarz:
ok you had a good emotion but some iight punches with a decent hit of wordplay in them and a few good metaphores in there but they werent to witty..
try working on your punches n shit...the vocabulary was pretty good and your stucture was good with a pretty decent flow to your verse...but just keep it up...you pretty good


Ambient:
nice stucture to your verse and had some pretty dope punchlinea and mixed with real nice witty metaphores in them...
pretty tight verse overal..i liked your verse the best just had a more of a funnier rb rv thing to it...lol

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Voted For: Cannabarz

cannabarz:

Your drops-suck, so STOP, fuck .. you blessed? your not even POT LUCK..
if u talked to the man upstairs, he'd drop you down the flight of steps u WALKED UP!!..
^^lmao dope opener good flow and multies 9/10
so knock, what?! me fag?, you'll leaved-tagged, your not even honest-guy ..
I mean, you can go downhill skiing on the fuccing slope that I WON THIS BY!!..
^^ehh decent set up dope punch 7/10
exhaust ya tries, your true-gay, sure you'll lose, hey .. it's the rules-play !! ..
they didn't let you into council cause your nice, it's cuz 14's a CUTE AGE!!! ..
^^lmfao wow 10/10
I'm raw-DUDE! .. .............but ambient rides chrit, so should I applaud-too? ..
I mean, if The Council is playing follow the leader, just QUIT! you all-lose! ..
^^dope 8/10
follow laws-rules! ...you might get under, but even the phlight just wonders..
when it comes to round tables, amb gets no say like a LIGHT CONDUCTOR!..
^^decent 6/10
who likes your structure? your garbage! jeez...theirs no hope for your text .. !! ..
you couldn't digest this win/wind, if EMS gave CPR to a hole in your neck !!!...
^^ooooooh dam dopest fucking bar in thie battle 11/10
your known as the best? haha. ..thats ya record, now deduct the last exponents!!..
hes been paying for dickriders, hes more indepth/in debt than his LAST OPPONENT!..
^^good bar 7/10
blast ya bones, and .. take-ya-pride, face-it-guy! ..whenever you write is wrong!..
so ima lay you out to dry............, on the same line ya fucking LIFE IS ON!!! ..
^^dope 8/10
I'm lightning-strong! your not even in health-ill! jus because you FELT SKILLED!!
so im pretty glad you still quote your lines, cuz trust me. NOONE ELSE WILL!!! ..
^^dope closer 10/10

overall : 76/90 (84%)

ambient:

i'm one to look on the bright side.. n leave can half full
fact is that ur style is played
.................c'mon, even ur name states u recycle
^^dope personal hot opener 9/10
mutha' fucka', im trashin' 'n' baggin' u and throwin' u out
guy only set this to unlimited... chuz he couldn't even count
^^ehh decent 6/10
u think that i was stallin' with this battle...... hardly
jus' givin' u some time here
........................ before u lose 'n' leave, just like RB
^^ good personal wack punch 7/10
damn these RB rejects... makin it here?? son u wasted ya wish
chuz u do know that it's a newby thing
............................................to put net records in sigs
^^played concept 5/10

overall : 27/40 (68%)

vote: cannabarz he took this battle hands down

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