Sticky Bandit vs Terror2005
 

Battle Rules:

6- 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-06-04 at 09:40 PM

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Terror2005 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 09:11 PM.

Sticky Bandit has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 09:14 PM.

u couldnt beat me if i was "wackestrapper" and u was "onemanband"//
bitch da most money u will ever have is in ur "rappers" hand//

I throw shots at emcees like targets from long ranges//
You thought you could 'switch' ya style up by listening to 'changes'//

take blades to ya gums, so you can have bloody flosses//
only thing that "sticks" to this "bandit" is continuous losses//

u need to go home and get hooked on phonics cuz ur illiterate//
if u really think ur bout to win dis battle u might as well jus forget it//


Peace Good luck U will Need it bitch!!!!! ~1~

uppin votes people honest votes only dis was a good battle in my eyez.....uppin quick

uppin dis bitch ppl.......LETS GET SOME DAMN VOTES HONEST ONLY!!!!

This was feedback posted for Sticky Bandit
 

first of all dis was a pretty good one at sticky's side of the battle....Terror came to un organized on what to say and just start out on top and then sank lower and lower....his vocab wasnt even OK you need to practice on dat...your structure was a lil better then sticky's...your flow was aight nothin i havent seen...your punches where weak so you need to elavate on that....Ok now for sticky you came out not to bad like ya opponent...Ya structure was worser then his but ya vocab was way better....ya flow was tearing him up like butchers with meat lol....and da punches you where spittin at him where comin pretty decent....v/ Sticky...both need to elavet sum more especially terror...

uppin dis shit bitches hurry up to motha fuckas NOW we need votes....lol

yo uppin dis shit damn lets get some damn votes not no feedback........honest votes only hur up

yo uppin votes people come on lets close dis battle......it was good hurry up and post ur votes please.......~1~

Voted For: Sticky Bandit

This guy gets the vote for rhyming better. Wack punches both of you, no creativity, no wit, no wordplay, no personals, just totally horrible. First guy also couln't rhyme. But second guy did three lines together, which is kinda wack.

Less wack though.

uppin votes people lets go....lets get this closed hurry up vote or die.....lol Pz

Voted For: Sticky Bandit

this battle sucked overall


Terror2005: way to basic, try using multies and ya structure was off


u couldnt beat me if i was "wackestrapper" and u was "onemanband"//
bitch da most money u will ever have is in ur "rappers" hand//
way to basic, punch was able to hit though

I throw shots at emcees like targets from long ranges//
You thought you could 'switch' ya style up by listening to 'changes'//
better then the first, feeling this but could have been better

take blades to ya gums, so you can have bloody flosses//
only thing that "sticks" to this "bandit" is continuous losses//
first line was blah...second line was ok

u need to go home and get hooked on phonics cuz ur illiterate//
if u really think ur bout to win dis battle u might as well jus forget it//
don't ever end a battle with a line that basically say "oh it's over"

could have been alot better, elevate, no hate


StickyBandit: pretty good shit, fell off towards the end though


Listen...You Couldn't Be Tight If Your Ass Hole Was A Virgin..
Pebto Bismo Couldn't Help Ya Congestion System Nor A Surgeon
liked this, was good and hit kinda hard

It Would Be A Miracle If You Came With Lyrical Scriptures...
But Your Another Big Dreamer As Walt Disney's Pictures.....
i can't even tell u how played rhyming scriptures and pictures is, don't ever use the word lyrical unless ya doing audio, wasn't feeling this

I'm An Advantage Over You Like Regular To Florescent Light Fixtures
I'll Have You Feeling More Steal Then Air Planes With Titanium..
Lyrics Will Hit Ya Dome....Cozzing A Fold In Your Cranium...
u should have had something else to rhyme with fixtures cause it made the rhyme scheme uneven, hit but not that hard


overall i think u feel off at the end but it was still enough to over power terror and to terror don't space ya bars and use the slashes at the end of ya lines like that


vote = Sticky Bandit

Voted For: Terror2005

aww Now this is what I call a Battle and Mayne It was hard to decide but after lookin it over it and really breakin it down i give my vote to Terror2005 .....I was really feelin his verse although both of you were fantastic and it was a great battle I feel that Terror came jus a lil harder wit the punchez
I wish you both goodluck
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Voted For: Sticky Bandit

okay well heres how i see it


Punchez - Sticky - Tha One Man Band Line Wuz Used B4...By Me....So Bitin Off Me Ain't Good Plus Ur Last Bar Iz Forced...

Multiz - Sticky - Obvisously Got More Multiz

Flow - Sticky - Terror Ur Rhymez R So Basic An Ur Flow Iz Childish Rap Iz Way More Then Jus Tha Last Word Rappin Now

Vocab - Sticky - Complex Wordz...Wuz Feelin Tha Wording In This Battle

Personals - Terror - Even Tho U Only Had 1 Sticky Had None So U Got This Category

well...sticky got this any1 who voted against him obvisously dick rode or hate voted....but nice try terror

Voted For: Sticky Bandit

Ok pretty decent battle

Sticky you had a ok opener but it was also play out...Ya flow was pretty good...Ya structure was ok....ya vocab was ok..But ya punchez where wack ecept for the Walt Disney Pictures...Personals...i would say better then ya punchez..

Terror...bad opener need to work on openers...Ya flow was pretty good too...Structure was not bad but not ok i almost didnt wanna read it...Vocab was pretty good...Punchez where way better than his..."only thing that sticks to this bandit is continuous losses" that was tight...and none of yall had good personals...both need to elavate...

V/Sticky Bandit...for havin better,flow,strucure,opener but terror had better punches but thats not enough...keep workin on it..ya both....return the favor...im out peace ~1~

Voted For: Terror2005

Son you was "TIGHT" thats why you get my vote

But Sticky you need to face a newb cause he sure aint 1 i like that line about walt disney pictures NICE

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^ike....i thought u were better then that...u thought terrorz shit wuz tight? damn homie....an i'ma leave it at that

^oopz i didn't mean ike i meant 2 say NY's Finest...i jus read sumthin ike posted an i wuz thinkin about that post

You Illtirate Fuck I'm In Your Crew How Are You Going To Vote

Voted For: Terror2005

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to STICKY BANDIT flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, 2005 had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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Uppin dis bitch!!!!

WOW....UR SUCH AN IDIOT....UR IN HIS CREW DUMBASS....AN U VOTED AGAINST HIM!! wut tha hell iz wrong wit u...ur vote don't count anyway....no crew votez....fuckin herb

woord eruption did tha same thing uppin 4 votez i guess

uppin votes people honest votes

This was feedback posted for Sticky Bandit
 

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Uppin votes people dont sleep honest votes only dont vote on records vote on verses and explain da shit 2.......~1~