† Gødž Ångël † vs Phenom
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Recycling
No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-08-04 at 04:43 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 05:42 PM.

â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 06:04 PM.

Hit Em Up..!!!

Imma Do 12 Linez....Match Em

'Shock His Throws' Im Light Him Up And Blast His Past As I 'Clock His Glow'//
'Knock Him Slow' As I 'Rock His Flow And Finish God's Angel Like The End Of A 'Tupac Show'/!!(1)(Warmin Up)
Your 'Tears Will Be Vowed' Bust Shots At You Cus Thats The Round Of Applause You 'Hear From The Crowd'//(Ouch).
'Spear Through Yur Sound' Cus Godz Angel's Forcast Is Clear Skies As He 'Disappear With The Clouds'//(2)(Whoa)
'Stir Yur Raps' Put Him To Eterna Rest As I 'Defer His Naps'//
'Slur Yur Traps' Break Open Yur Chest And Collapse Your Body As I Make You 'Shoulders Clap'//(3)(DAMN!!)
'Wreck His Cells' Erode Yur Shots To Me Like I 'Infect Yur Shells'//
'Reject Yur Excels' Hes Livin With The Flames And Demons Like Gods 'Defected Angels'//(4)
'Crumb Yur Sky' Leave Broken Fingers In This Thread Like Yur 'Thumbs Reply'//
'Numb This Guy' Cus He Relates To Defect Lotions As He Always 'Cums Dry'//(5)AHHH SHIT!!!!)
'Erased And Ignored' He Loves Grabbin Woodies Like He 'Embraces Boards'//
'Disgrace Your Roar' Cus His Winnings Come Smaller Than A 'Third-Place Reward'//(6)

Line..1-Clocks Tell Time..Time = The Past
Line..2-Tupac Is Known As An Angel End Of A Show = The Finish
Line..3-Rounds=Shots Round Of Applause = Him Hearin The Crowd
Line..4-If Hes An Angel He Lives Up There And On Clear Skies There Are Almost No Clouds
Line..5-Self
Line..6-If Your Chest Is Gone It Will Look Like Your Shoulders Were Gonna Clap
Line..7-Self
Line..8-The Devil Was A Bad/Defected Angel So He Lives In Hell Now
Line..9-Self
Line..10-Lotions Suppose To Keep Your Skin Moist But If Its Defected Then It Keeps It Dry
Line..11-Self
Line..12-3rd Place Rewards Are Always Small


G/L

You came "In all", But you left all torn apart now down to "Phenom",
Punches won't affect my style if they were all Drugged with Venom,
So, your new here right?, Thats not a real good thing, Dont ya' think?
You will be lucky If I only put you over top of your bathroom sink.
This Battle reminds me of a gokart modor that I once had Pessesed,
Now it is all broken down, dead, and Opened up, Just like your Chest.
You have the right to shut yo punk ass mouth up bitch, says the Jury,
If you are gonna spitt a real bar, Then your punk ass just better hurry,
I will close this case with a Speech I once heard, My dad wrote this,
"never battle a bitch who steps up with courage, and spitts no diss.

Hmm.... Not real good.... I could have don better.... I like the opening in mine... lol.... Some good shit....

Peace out~

Good Verse..... Pretty good battle... Lets get some votes on this shyt.....

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Voted For: Phenom

ok i think this is one sided battle godz your verse was aight but phenom shit on you if you ask me... gdz your punches were aight but the y couldav bin alot better

phenom... i liked your verse i dot know why you put all them lines and bold letters in lol you dont need to advertise your shit

i liked your multies and your punches were funny

return the favour vote on one of my battles links in the sig.. pz.

This was feedback posted for † Gødž Ångël †
 

T godz won this easily, simply cuz he spit a verse....fuck what was that jibberish Phenom was spittin I don't know...
"CRUM YOUR SKY" WTF is that I dont know....anyway

Vote - TGOD

Hit my battle up with fred unlimited would ya?

^^^ you need to actually post the vote...

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Voted For: Phenom

easy here vote goes 2 phenom hahahahaha
'Shock His Throws' Im Light Him Up And Blast His Past As I 'Clock His Glow'//
'Knock Him Slow' As I 'Rock His Flow And Finish God's Angel Like The End Of A 'Tupac Show'/!!(1)(Warmin Up)
Your 'Tears Will Be Vowed' Bust Shots At You Cus Thats The Round Of Applause You 'Hear From The Crowd'//(Ouch).
'Spear Through Yur Sound' Cus Godz Angel's Forcast Is Clear Skies As He 'Disappear With The Clouds'//(2)(Whoa)
^^^^well actually not funny but good use of multies but rhmed 2 basic......overall good shit homie.....a 8/10 y ogods angel dawg u need 2 ELEVATE homie..really do.....man wtf is up wit ur opener ma n,.....elveate................dawg yo phenom good structure and punches good lines and phat structure and flow..homie return the favour aiight .....................i mean return the favour for the battles below........

Voted For: Phenom

OMG Phenom GODLY verse lol.....you won in all categories accept for structure.....nice try Brad.....
v/Phenom
no favors needed returned.....that was an awesome verse lol

Voted For: Phenom

I take phenom on this he just came harder then you home boy no beef or hate just keep elevating, his lyrics where good his rhyming scheme was excellent his opener-his closure was better. he had more multis and more vocab in this battle then you and over all he just came harder so keep elevating tho home boye.

phenom you get a 9.8/10 on this one ;) peace

This was feedback posted for † Gødž Ångël †
 

mayn you gotta come harder Gods Angel. But nice verse to both of ya.

This was feedback posted for † Gødž Ångël †
 

That ain't me.......................................

Phenom..... wanna-be - lets battle audio :):):):):)

Voted For: Phenom

Phenom: You was decent here. Pretty decent opener and closer. Your whole drop came 2gether in this piece though. Decent vocab, hardly even mistakes, get rid of the underline words, unless its a link. Flow was good, and some punches were aight, but not all good though 6/10

Godz Angel: Your drop was aight too. Punches were hardly hitting though, and the vocab was decent with you there. Your flow was good, but those punches need to be hittin though, elevate a little more though

No hate to Both