Lil C vs Makeveli Trained
 

Battle Rules:

8 lines
u kno tha rules, no dumb shyt
due by midnight

"kno how ta set it up" lol, at him thinkin im a noob

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-09-04 at 11:59 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Makeveli Trained has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 10:30 AM.

Im diminishin this herb quik like blacks n all white pics
Hell prolly no-show, cuz right now he 2 full ta bite lyrics
Lincoln Park's fake counterpart, ur shyt will flop
Alwayz broke…
……neva had diamonds, he wuz chewin a ring pop
Ya spits thru, like poor glue, a win? Ya cant seal it
Ya only spittin novacain cuz nobody can feel it
He came wit 1 wak shyt, then fell off like Da Band
Drop em' quik wit 1 hard punch, like Artest did tha fans

Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 12:20 PM.

im no herb say "ma’am" when u speak to misses son/
"Makeveli " -- c'mon be real that name is played like the game that u ripped it from//

let me end all "Makeveli’s" here, Oh yeah the word means grudge in case u aint kno/
lets be serious ,on mics u like a periods + tampons, son u just cant flow//

who the hell implanted rap'n in ya brain, ya whole aura just makes me ask-- how u can want mo money but still be so clueless like stacy dash*/
hmmmm lets see....the only way you'd be "dope" is if u was "crack" which makes "ass"//

take the 1st and last letters off ya name and that just what im gonna do**/
u need to change ya name to air force 1 cause i just laced u up and put my foot in u like my shoe//

*-stacey dash was in the movie mo money and in the show clueless
**-Makeveli- tupacs crew(lol plz!!!)

uppin 4 votes...n how many fuckin times do i have to tell u ALL fuckers dat im a female....Lil C(Catherine)damn bitches!!!

Voted For: Lil C

V/Lil C.......he had this battle bagged he had better punchs multi's an vocab wit creativity......trained u need to elavate u had no punchs really or vocab.....
punchs=c
multis=c
flow=c
vocab=c
overall=c
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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no doubt...thanx J.R.................uppin n plz like i said I am FEMCEE

WTF AT THA FALSE PERSONALS, i dont do audio, so wut does me not bein able ta flow on a mic have ta do w/ nething, lmao
ummmm........ive had this name 4 years now even bak when 2pac wuz still around so therefore its not played.........

but newayz, uppn

lmao at lil c gettin vocab or flow w/ tha stretched ass lines

lol u just pissed cause u bitch ass cant rap lol.....uppin

uppin.......................come on ppl start votin

Voted For: Lil C

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to M.T flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, lil C had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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This was feedback posted for Makeveli Trained
 

Just Checking Just Checking Just Checking .........

Dr'z All Of You.....................................

This was feedback posted for Makeveli Trained
 

checking score......
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fukin dickriders.......go home

uppin 4 some real fukin votes

uppinzzzzzzzzz...come on rv, dont sleep

Rv.............................................spf f

Voted For: Lil C

My vote go to lil C cuz he had better punches and better flow and word play.....

Makeveli ur verse was over all wack didnt even make any sence some lines i didnt know wut da fuck u was talkin bout

My vote is fo Lil C

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wtf, if u didnt kno wut i wuz talkin about then dont fukin vote herb

Voted For: Lil C

Lil' C took this one. Definately had bettre vocab and punches... Definately was more well-written than the other, and it just seemed like a good battle. However the lady wins, because it had more versatility than makaveli's

This was feedback posted for Lil C
 

juss checkin polls, he's tryin out nice drop

like tha stacy dash line

thanx 4 da vote scarface will return favor.............uppin

Voted For: Lil C

punches-lil c
mets-none
pers-lil c
flow-lil c
stuckture-MT

easy win here 4 lil c came much hard buther stuckture was damn fucked up work on that fam MT came wack was wack all the way though was a alright stuckture but 1 line was fucked

v/ lil c

uppin 4 votes........damn yall stop sleepin............

Voted For: Lil C

vote goes 2 lil c ..good verse and drop you had good flow and good punches........................... yo who the hell implanted rap'n in ya brain, ya whole aura just makes me ask-- how u can want mo money but still be so clueless like stacy dash*/
hmmmm lets see....the only way you'd be "dope" is if u was "crack" which makes "ass"//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ best line hahahahah good shit.................good shit................................ yo holla bak wit avote 4 the below battle aiight return the favour ......................

Voted For: Lil C

yo verse was aigh need to fix you structure your punches were ook i think you could of did betta doe makeveli yours was ok punches was hittin doe