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RdotGod vs Phantom
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12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 600 Check in by: 12-08-04 at 11:33 PM Must drop verse in 300 minutes after check in. |
Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 10:34 PM.
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RdotGod has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 10:35 PM.
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Yo...
Its like... Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate? I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same... ...from holding mikes hard lemonade Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin' When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste When I say aliases only work... ...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin And I want to here none'ya lip... ...flapping swollen in the wind But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit... Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit |
You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck
Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him When he's just been merked so bad.. ................................he registered in a new name again! Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1! Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him! Boo@you rushing me foo. |
This was feedback posted for RdotGod
Damn... Good battle for 10 minutes or so... Actually, good anyway... Soc, ur first line would have made sence, if handing out slices made sense for a battle... Fav. Line...
Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him When he's just been merked so bad.. ................................he registered in a new name again! Chrit... Funny ass shit... I find it funny how you can own people with such short lines (except for the one line that was the size of a short paragraph) Fav. Line... Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate? I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same... ...from holding mikes hard lemonade Fucking hilarious... Chrit took this battle... Good job to both... |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164142
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I forgot... Peep that... Topical between me and nostra... |
Voted For: Phantom
RDotGod: Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling ^^dope opener good metaphor 8/10 Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate? I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same... ...from holding mikes hard lemonade ^^2nd line stretched but good meta decent punch 6/10 Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin' When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion ^^another good meta solid punch 7/10 Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste When I say aliases only work... ...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE ^^ lol nice bar 8/10 Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin And I want to here none'ya lip... ...flapping swollen in the wind ^^ehh decent not feeling it that much 4/10 But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit... Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit ^^good meta weak punch 6/10 overall : 39/60 (65%) Phantom: You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut ^^decent opener good meta 7/10 Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him When he's just been merked so bad.. ................................he registered in a new name again! ^^lol good personal 7/10 Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1! ^^ehh wasnt feeling this 4/10 Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade ^^dope bar 8/10 Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island ^^hottest bar of the battle 10/10 And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him! ^^good closer solid punch 7/10 overall : 43/60 (72%) vote: phantom overall his punches were more consistent.. and he had a dope personal as did RDotGod and the rhode island line was sick.. chrit u probably would have got my vote if you had a different line than that swollen lip one i wasnt feeling that one but real dope battle return the favor on any battle in my sig plz |
Soc I seen you come nicer than this.
Chrit won pretty easily.. that Rhode Island punchis kinda played by the way. |
Voted For: Phantom
Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling Ok punch here not dope aight nice wording Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate? I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same... ...from holding mikes hard lemonade wack self glory line corny punch streched as fuck Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin' When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion wack no puch again Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste When I say aliases only work... ...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE Worde horrible streched punch had potential but aint live up to it Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin And I want to here none'ya lip... ...flapping swollen in the wind wack as fuck no punch at all aint barely flow But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit... Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit dope punch again worded horrible ok chirt ive heard mega good things about you thats why i came to see this battle and you dissappointed me:(i see rb is still fulla d.rs cuz with this type of wackness is the only way youd be considered one of the best is dickriding this was wack:( a 3/10 You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut good puch here nice flow worded good Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him When he's just been merked so bad.. ................................he registered in a new name again! omg streched like a fat bitch in spandex punch was ok not dope at all Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1! lmfao dope personal good shit nicely dropped Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade haha another dope ass punch here nice Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island no wack and barely rhymed at all And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him! lol good ender here nice diss damn phantom i should k.o you again for rec you starting to think your nice again a few dope ass puches good ass personal most of it flowed well except one line and that dumb ass rhode island shit a 7/10 basically phantom had way stronger punches and better personals here as well as a better structure and flow he had basically better everything.no hate to either just being honest phantom owned chirt. |
This was feedback posted for Phantom
Honestly, I wasn't really feeling either of the verses. I thought Chrit came a little....umm.....just not good. That hard lemonade line was just ass. You used to be pretty creative, but it seems like you've lost a little bit of your luster. Phantom/Soctrates wasn't too much better. His lines at least had a little creativity and wordplay in them, it's just that most of them weren't really hitting that hard. Anyway, I can't vote on this battle because Socrates is in my crew, so I'll just leave this as feed back :thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for Phantom
checccccckkkkinn pollllllssssss forrrrrr myyyy nukka
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This was feedback posted for RdotGod
looking at the polls.. good battle ......................................
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Voted For: Phantom
Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling 4/10 Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate? I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same... ...from holding mikes hard lemonade 3/10 Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin' When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion 6/10 Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste When I say aliases only work... ...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE 3/10 Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin And I want to here none'ya lip... ...flapping swollen in the wind 3/10 But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit... Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit 2/10 Punches were weak wordplay was non existent ya structure was aight similies werent there metas were ok You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut 6/10 Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him When he's just been merked so bad.. ................................he registered in a new name again! 7/10 Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1! 6/10 Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade 4/10 Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with 5/10 So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him! u lost it a lil bit..I suggest u put forth effort next time 5/10 Punches were ok wordplay was aight structure was good metas were good similies were good the last 4 bars were Garbage but u started off nice I dont kno where doin Chrit but u lost this one hands down came down 2 harder punches.wordplay and meta's |
Voted For: RdotGod
punches all around harder... Phant tried but you using my style + wack punches = not close to as dope as when I use it... besides Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate? I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same... ...from holding mikes hard lemonade Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin' When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion these ate your verse... literally. Vote: Ryan... |
I will say the closer was nice... but that's about it from Phantom...
^that didn't post I don't know why... |
This was feedback posted for RdotGod
Fuck voting, in these political times we all need to have a political mind
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YOUR A FUCKING FAGGOT THATS A OBVIOUS DICK RIDER VOTE IM TIRED OF YOU FAGGOTS FROM RV FUCKING DICK RIDING AND HATE VOTING I WILL NOW BLACKLIST YOUR FAGGOT ASS :nono: |
Voted For: RdotGod
vote:chrit... decent battle... good punches from both.. i like chrit's style a little better.. his verse just read better.. good job by phantom too.. but i think chrit edged it with some good punches.. neither of u really tried here.. just gotta go with who i think got this .. no hate.. |
Voted For: Phantom
A'ight this wasa fuckin close battle...I expected better from Chrit, but his opener wasn't that great...there was some nice punches, like the first place one, but it wasn't consistent enough. Phantom came nice...he had personals, good flow, the works. Close battle though...no hate. Return the favor please... Topical: hipnoticz Punchline: logic 4 dubz Battle: 9th Degree Topical: Metaskriptz Thanks. |
Empire, he didn't d/r, I lost. =/
Uppin........ |
Boy, returned votes are sure nice these days......
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This was feedback posted for RdotGod
tight battle, checkin the polls....................
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Voted For: RdotGod
You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut WTF?? that sounds corny... not good punch Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him When he's just been merked so bad.. ................................he registered in a new name again! Fake personal..not good Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1! this was ok Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade Thats was a good punch Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island dumb.. good concept worded badly And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him! Thats a DOpe PUNCH.. overall.. you did pretty much ok...you seemed to not do your best... Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling NIce Opener Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate? I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same... ...from holding mikes hard lemonade ROFL.... that s was iight Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin' When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion Strong one here... Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste When I say aliases only work... ...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE Kinda played concpet Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin And I want to here none'ya lip... ...flapping swollen in the wind WTF>.. this was dumb.... But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit... Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit NICE CLOSER Overall... RDOT Has way creative and good punches.. his whole verse was creative as fuck.. nicce and you had good flow... Phantom 78.8/100 RDOTGOD 82.5/100 Vote: RDOTGOD... |
This was feedback posted for RdotGod
I could really give a shit less, but i feel like checking the polls..
Holla at cha boobies. |
Voted For: Phantom
Even Though I Almost Had To Vote For Chrit Just For That Insane Finisher... Phan Just Had The Overall In My Opinion... Chrit Would Be Alittle Weak Then Come Back With A Crazy Hard Punch... While Phan Had Consistantly Nice Punches... Plus I Couldnt Stand Chrits Structure, Its Was So Awkward To Read... Pretty Nice Battle, But Like I Said Phan Was Just More Consistant... .One. |
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