Moment of Maturity
 

....All jokes all Beefs aside damnit...

real talk 4 a second

I wanna kno everybodys HONEST opinon

how really good am i
Personally i think im OK...alot of elevateing 2 do
alot of Battles left 2 do...Vet...No im not a vet
far from it.....I havent even been here this long

Soc...Yes my Hated rival Socrates put me up on sumtin 2 day
he told me i dont kno wha a Punch is ...but i have Potential
Propz 2 that ni99a 4 that....Told me str8 up...so ima step back
look at some of the Rv greats...try 2 get a feel 4 Punches
I kno my concepts and shit are good..Jus my Punches dont
come across 2 certain people...

But i got a grudge on my Shoulder Now....cuz im constantly Called
Overated....I promise u i wont Disappoint in the Rv Text Tourney

But jus leave some opinions on how u feel i could Improve..
wha im doin good so far...and how i can get better

The truth Hurts.........Nuff Said

you suck............. :thumbup:

lol...u cant talk 2 em like that Method..or me u fuck ...lol

but seriously can i get a breakdown on opinions

I kno im Dope..shit how do i get better and improve
on wha im doing good allready

Your avatar is not nice......

my avatar is very nice.......... :thumbup:
touh my moniter

Ya gone turn my shit into a Chat instead of helpin me huh?

troop you coo in my oppinion..only vocab needs ajustment...
too much of it..but that just might be me..

but much respect to this thread for real..I wanan know if I'm good too..

but good thread..some GTA san andreas shit now....respect+

Cut down on my Vocab....point taken

i think your aight good vocab and shit but i also think your a fag and i called you out on 3 diffrent audio disses and still you fail to respond

Still i fail 2 have a Mic.......

dont get cocky.. thats one way of improving :thumbup:

Stop tryna make ya verses look good, like its going on date nigga.

Realize...the font doesnt make your punches better.
And
Replace some of that vocab, and them comparisons with a some wit. Nobody wants to read a boring verse.

All I got to say for now.

yupp i need the same thing troop... my punches are lacking..

Word ..

I make my font look good b/c it makes it look more interesting to read. (;)) Feel me ?
Anyway,yeh Troop you aiight. You elevated from when we battles (cuz you know i should of slaughtered yo ass ....

So yeh sometimes the meta and shit you use are out dated and been used and flipped before,but thats with everybody.

Your punches is sick,you got a style where u think outside the box and thats what make rappers original and unique ...

Dats about it ... keep doin ya thang.
And holla at me wheneva u wanna hit up Round: 2


... Fasho

You are a vet... On this site... No one on this site is a vet in rap tho... No one...

Troop you have some good stuff, elevating yeah you could use some, maybe rise above the lines involving disabled people lol (I haven't seen too much of your stuff lately to know if you're past that, so don't hold it against me). I admit I still need quite a bit of elevating too, I just don't really get many replies to my callouts lol. But I'm curious...what did you think of my verse when we battled?

yea u beat me fair and square....im one 2 man up 2 my losses

My punches are kinda out the box..i dont think like everyone else

yea ima pull out some vocab..i think i was more focused on that 2 much
ima keep my font size the same tho...i like small text

Thanx ya ....uppin 4 more thoughts

Everyone gets my punches...


Their just whack:thumbup:

i have punches...jus need sum new shit

aight look troop, I aint the best, but I know my shit, first off, don't do anything about the vocab, it's fine, just try not to focus on it as much, I like the meta's, you great at that shit, but you wanna add a lil more wordplay in there, mix it a bit nah mean? also you gotta throw the met's in with a punch or personel, ya can't just say "This encounter is disastorous like tight rope walkers in casts" ya know, look up some personels on the guy, on his name, and switch up lines so it's like so

Bar 1. Use meta's and throw in a punch
Bar 2. Use wordplay throw in a presonel
Bar 3. Use meta's throw in a personel
Bar 4. Use wordplay throw in a punch

Or you can just be like fuck wordplay, stick wit the meta's only, as long as you mix in harder punches and personels.

I feel u thanxxx....Can i get some more

audio, i cant call no body good till i hear audio, sorry Troop, thats jus ma opinion

troop..... your record doesnt reflect your skill...
i peeped some of your battles.... you could be better... there are a lot of people on this site better than you.... but true you are very good.... but you could be better

O dont worry the Voice is comin real soon

iight, to make yourself better put it like this...


Okay, first off fake personal, second off, this isnt a punch even if it was true it is just saying "Oh socrates is a kid, cuz he goes to bed early", a punch needs to ATTACK your opponent like....

See you're attacking me going to bed early, and at the same time saying i am sleeping with my mom, rather than trying to get voters to do math in there head about time zones and call it complex....

Now, a super dope punch would be....

he's attacking his claim to be number one by saying that "yes you are number one, but not shit" i dunno how to explain tis much more but its ill

Also...


Now thats just fuckin ill, wordplay, flow, metaphors, its got it all

Now something a lil more your style....


Now notice this and your style and quite similar, but the major difference dope ass set ups, wording, and creativity, you cant go off something anyone can think of. Doing so is not creativity, its just whack. So try and get and get everything in your verse. :thumbup:

Im not much of an elevator but I tried dammit. You wont start getting better for a while but just be pateient and keep working:thumbup:

*takes breath*

dont play these silly games.


you know yourself if your good or not.
seems like you just want other people to notice what your doin.

Kinda like fat people in a mirror. They still want people to say they're skinny.

Damn, someone came back with a very different attitude towards things. :rolleyes:

Soc, how do you find these random ass, dope battles?

Carson...i jus wanna kno how 2 get better man...damn...thanx Soc

Because it's actually battles from my alias' :hump:
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np Troop...

READ.
What everyone else did.

Yea Yea Yea.....

Well, he's kinda isolated and considering that noone wants to get banned for spamming. :rolleyes:

And wtf is up with you coming back as an asshole?

hmmmm there is a point

coming back? Phantom....

Ive always been an asshole.

Not like this. You used to say people suck but now you just seem to be on your period and nobody has tossed you a tampon yet. =/

when did records reflect skill?

Yea it never reflected skill

troop man, good thread, it shows so much from you, you have skill, and the truth is, we all need improving, all beef aside, recs dont mean shit, people have there off days...1