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Zeke 12-09-04 08:39 PM

Zeke vs Legend
 

Rules:

10-16 Lines
No Crew Voting
No Dick Riders
No Biting
Crew Battle[The Five Prophets Vs Verbal Reformatory]
Good Luck


Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 12-14-04 at 08:39 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 12-09-04 09:00 PM

Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 09:00 PM.

Macca 12-09-04 09:01 PM

thread open I distinguish u hopin for a win
tryin to spit but you chokin dats why text is your friend
the only reason you up is cuz ya head in tha clouds
so cocky I would notice ya "big head" in a crowd
think just cuz you in a crew that is labeled "elite" you hot
Its Nefarious in dis Bitch nigga we got u beat, what u got?
"L" on ya forehead, yeah its a cliché for "losa"
treatin you like a child while my words abuse ya
Imma make you another stereotype like black people on "cops"
devouring you morally like the "cream of tha crop"
Im similar to an elevator, makin my way to the top
and you nuthin but a road sign, its time for u to "stop
by the way, you aint no hustler, all you do is get people cussin
stackin plenty of penny hoes and stay on tha internet fussin
got all tha time in tha world and you try your best to rap too
so ill end this round with an encore and tell your people to clap for you

Zeke 12-09-04 09:03 PM

I'll Spit When I Get Back Dont Rush Me Nigka

System 12-09-04 11:26 PM

Zeke has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 11:26 PM.

Zeke 12-09-04 11:29 PM


It's Plain To See That Legends Die, Fuck..It's A Proven Fact
Nigka I'm "Reforming Your Verbalz" Coz You Straight Whack
This Bitch Say He The New Breed Shit I'm Gon' Make Him See
No Matter How Hard He Trys, Aint No Way In Hell He Can Be* Me
What Kind Of Psycho Shows Pics Of His Sisters Clit You Make Me Sick
Never Knew You Had An Insest Fetish You Fucking Nast Little Prick
Faggot, Ya Rhymes Aint Even Close To "Legendary" Your Weak
Could You Possibly Suck Any More Dick?? You Fucking Net Geek
Verbal Reformitory Never Stood A Chance In This Battle
Nigka Falling Like A Cowboy Shot Of His Horses Saddle
Ya Lyrical Death Draws Near The, The WHite Light Is Clsiong In
Get Ready To Repent And Admit Your Life Of A "Verbal Sin"

*My Screen Name Is DaNewBreed, I've Had It For Ever Ask Any Body..This Nigka Wants To Be Me..Look At His Sig It Say's The New Breed

Zeke 12-09-04 11:33 PM

Upping For Votes Now Ppl Get At This Battle....Werd

Wickedclown 12-09-04 11:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Zeke
 
checkin shit out, good drop fam............................

Hoodz Prophet 12-09-04 11:51 PM

Voted For: Zeke

okay here it go

zeke - decent opener whack well not whack jus not good closer nice punchez an that personalz sickenin i felt that wen i read it nice vocab not that many forced rhymez so thatz a plus multiz not as much as u usually have i've seen better but i like this

Legend - whack opener an closer...no hate nice punchez not as good as zeke but u had no personalz thatz wut basically lost this 4 u along wit tha fact that most of ur linez were forced...forcin linez iz bad wen u do text 4 audio okay but not text cuz sum people don't talk like that so they wouldn't get it...i like tha fact u kept tha cop line goin tho...but not as good i seen better from u 2 but nice try

so therez my explanation my vote = Zeke

Zeke 12-10-04 12:01 AM

Thanks Coz..Still Upping This Shit..........................

Zeke 12-10-04 10:55 AM

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Zeke 12-10-04 02:24 PM

Still Upping Dont Sleep On this Shit Myan............................

Macca 12-10-04 05:53 PM

We Both dope and ya'll nigga'z knows it. So why not vote. Nice Verse Zeke. I'll never take you lightly again. :D

Insight. 12-11-04 12:32 AM

This was feedback posted for Zeke
 
aight im in his crew, but i think Zeke took this.

punches- Zeke
personals- Zeke
multis- Zeke
metas- Legend
word play- Zeke
humor- Zeke
flow- Zeke
structure- Legend... pretty colors

Zeke nice drop man. overall i got notin to suggest

Legend try some personals and multis.

No Hate Just Honest Feedback

Elemental Soul 12-11-04 12:42 AM

Voted For: Zeke

this battle lacked punches and was more about personals which is still good.pretty close battle but i think zeke takes this because he came more creative with it,he used a more complex scheme and he used fury.legend had a couple good personals and he was consistent but it just didnt match the creativy of zekes.close one no hate. but unfortunately i have to make this decision....my vote goes to............

Elemental Soul 12-11-04 12:43 AM

oh yea return the favor in my sig thx....................

Zeke 12-11-04 04:31 PM

Upping For Votes............................................. ...I'll Return The Favor In A Minute

Ltizzle 12-11-04 08:25 PM

Voted For: Zeke

v/ Zeke
well before i explain mah vote i wanna say dat dis was a very close battle, either person couldve easily taken this battle but it comes down to certain things...
Both of your flow was on point, good job for that, you both kinda fell off mid way through your verse but then you picked it back up again so props for that...
Punchlines is where Zeke had you Legend...
you started out nice, but then you kinda jus didnt add any until towards the end, Zeke had punches all the way through the battle which helped him win...
Structure was fine for both and creativity and humor was about the same, it jus all comes down to the punches...

Zeke 12-11-04 09:15 PM

Upping On SOme Votes.........................................

L.E 12-11-04 09:56 PM

Voted For: Zeke

A'ight...this was a pretty one sided battle...I didn't feel any of Legend's punches, probably because I couldn't really recognize anything noticably there...flow was good, structure was good...Zeke came it some nice punches and personals...flow and structure was tight...no hate, Legend just elevate...

Return the favor, if you haven't done so already...

Topical: hipnoticz

Punchline: logic 4 dubz

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz

Thanks.

Zeke 12-12-04 01:23 AM

I've Done It Already...Still Upping

Macca 12-12-04 01:50 AM

Fuk well ya know what they say you win some you lose some. Upping.

Zeke 12-12-04 12:28 PM

Werd, Upping............................................ ............

Godz Angel 12-12-04 12:49 PM

This was feedback posted for Legend
 
Im just checking the poles yo... I wanna see this shyt......

.One.

Godz Angel 12-12-04 12:50 PM

Daym......

Zeke got this....

Dont know in my battle.

And Whats the Poes For Neptune?...

Zeke 12-12-04 10:21 PM

Any THing Just Tell Him Set It Up Coz.....................

FLiP AkA JR 12-12-04 10:29 PM

This was feedback posted for Legend
 
both were tight but i gotta say that legend had this with hard hittin punchlines.

Zeke 12-13-04 04:28 PM

Intiltled To Your Own Opinion Upping This Shit............

Barburyin 12-13-04 05:07 PM

Voted For: Zeke

this was a pretty close battle. both yall had some good shyt but zeke came a lil harder. he had sum hot personals n the flow was pretty hot. i liked this line

Verbal Reformitory Never Stood A Chance In This Battle
Nigka Falling Like A Cowboy Shot Of His Horses Saddle

leg u was pretty good to

the only reason you up is cuz ya head in tha clouds
so cocky I would notice ya "big head" in a crowd
pretty good line but i jus wasnt feelin the flow realli
but all n all both yall did pretty damn good but my vote goes to zeke


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