Kilo704 vs lil C.A.L.I
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No ducking out

Minimum posts to vote: 25

Check in by: 12-12-04 at 08:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Kilo704 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 08:44 PM.

lil C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 08:53 PM.

do u really think with ur lyrics u merk merk me
u from north cock it back yeah right u pussy
ill merk this ho with no trouble at all
ill shoot u in your knees so dat you gotta crawl
tryin to rap and u think u cool tryin to diss me
my rhymes are 'into deep' have u swimin in da sea 1
bitch ass faggot is runnin his gums
u crazy thinkin u can merk me ill put u in asylums
the dictator will merk u kilo have u applyin for a waitor
my barz are so hot makin u look for raps in tha equator
u thinkin u are dope cuz throw punchlines with a brick
yeah right you should just go sit your ass on a dick
ill have u shut the fuck up when u get beat
ill buck u in your feet so i can watch tha queer fly
u aint gonna merk shit cuz your lyrics are to dry
bitch your rhymes are to short like danny davito
your punches r missing like u swingin on 'willow'
ill leave u beggin for more
ill have u not wantin anymore
u act like u tough enough to merk empire
ill have u spun like a falken tire

I'm outta his range.....him? cometition? he outta his brains/
ready 2 rumble in tha jungle like i'm judge Mills Lane/
thinkin he game..leave him wit nothin but a peeled~back~cap/
get~bitch~slapped and clapped at in no~time~flat/
my 9 heavily~lead~packed 2 make sho his head~get~wacked/
killed him more than 1 time like celebrity~death~match/
u~sweat~fat cuz u constantly dick ride empire/
and i heard dat u do photo shoots 4 goodyear tireya fat Mike Meyers/
everything u wanna do bitch i been there done that/
13 years old and got tracks spinnin like dunlaps/
u aint neva done laps .....not even in P.E./
as 4 ME; stay greas-E;flows breaz-E;nicks & KEYS/
tree's no SEEDS;u cant SEE;fuck wit ME;u gon BLEED/
u gon PLEAD;peeps gon GREIVE;talks on PEACE/won't PROCEED/
Black,Drew,EAST;here wit ME/
fuck yo CREW;fuck yo SHOES;jimmy CHOO;just like U/
cuz u been CHEWED;its on U/
drop yo VERSE; shit gets WORSE;bomb yo HEARSE;
as 4 yo seed: killed at BIRTH/
when yall DIE; no one CRIES/
no tears SHED;da fam break BREAD;split yo wig......remove yo HEAD nigga/
HEAVY HITTAZ we heavy shittaz on lil niggaz/
think u betta than me?bitch, how u figure?/
get ya niggaz da hittaz bigga a sigga 2 ya wigga change ya way of thinkin now wont it nigga?/
ya ass already scared 2 pull tha trigga/
yeah bitch rememba? dis unlimited u aint believe me/
look wut yo mouf got u in. aint no way u gon beat me/
i'd stop now but fuck naw i was bred a rebel/
i aint givin nobody shit til they on my level/
my spoked word so subliminal,so prolifical in size/
da shit fuck u up emotional mental & physical wise/
i told u bitch get ya guys...dis a soulja ready 4 war/
my money right...mind right u aint seen nothin like dis b4/
probly get kicked outta rv 4 dis real shit i'm writin/
i dont give a fuck my mind &vocb doin my fightin/
i'm so focused; u so hopeless;its been spoken/
my hocus pocus leave niggaz chokin off shit i wroten/
done spit enough 2 ko dat ass and still goin/
put ya gurl 2 work on tha block da bitch still hoin/
my verbal assult leavin u batterd bitch i'm still flowin/
tha mo i write is mo obvious dat dis is so goin/
down in history it aint no mystery y ya sistaz and ya gurl and ya momma say they missin me; squeezin me kissin me/
its like i'm ya kin folks most wanted/
they say my rap style similar 2 dough when flaunted/
cuz niggas kidnap jack rape & murda u for it/
i'm bout done wit ya lil ass so dont feel taunted/
long as u dont post nothin offa malibu's most wanted/
yeah nigga i went there dissin ya state/
but u aint worried bout it ...
ya ass 2 busy chokin on steak/

whoeva don't like dis shit get fucked by pootie tang and wetha u do or not u can kiss a nigga ass ya dig?1.
call it murked.

uppin this ppl aight!!!! plz honest votes!!! :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Kilo704
 

aiyo haaaaaaaa ripped this at he jus luky i cant vote....

This was feedback posted for lil C.A.L.I
 

........wack battle, just checkin polls..... ummm.... kilo ya verse was WAY to long... just cause it says unlimited lines dosent mean ya gotta do like a million lines dawg.... any way just postin feed

heeeeeeelllllll yeah HEAVY HITTAZ ON THA RISE MY NIGGA

^^ dis nigga need not post if he gon hate. i mean if i can flow dat long den how dat make it wack? how many niggaz u know dat can keep flowin dat long?

in dat 1st line cometition was possed 2 b competition.

upiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn thisssssssssssssss people!!! :thumbup:

u aint gotta say dat but once and they gon get da message dumbass

Voted For: lil C.A.L.I

lil Cali took this one with better cultural references, punches, vocab, as well as others. Good effort on both parts though. It just seems like this one 1up'd the other one.

wtf? damn i aint know cali had 2 pm niggaz 4 votes. eitha that or give 'em head. anyway all he did was paste a verse he posted in open mic

den he gon be brave enough 2 try and shit on me in anotha open mic. read my shit den read his and den realize wut a dumbass u iz 4 votin 4 dat faggot mothafucka
some otha lil bullshit

Voted For: Kilo704

Kilo:
FLow...Decent....I Saw Alot Of Word Play In There Al Though Both Structures Was Not To Decent You Verse Had Mre Personal Punches.....Vocabulary Keep It Up Some Good Shit Son...Over All Your Flow Came Hard Nuff To Defeat Lil Cali....7/10

Lil C.A.L.I:
Dam Kid You Elivating Werrddd Empire Helping You??? ANy Way Your Vocab Was Also Decent Personals In There Was Decent You Structure And WordPlay Need To Come Up Your Structure Was Fucked Hommie Over All Flow Wasnt Hard Nuff......6.5/10

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damn y wont yall mothafuckaz vote or atleast give feedback. yall some tricks mayne.shit. uppin.

This was feedback posted for Kilo704
 

that was pretty dope...... too bad i cant vote..... "malibu's most wanted" lmfao at that.... good punch/personal

^^^^ ahhh u should report scarface on that vote.. inadequate feedback

This was feedback posted for lil C.A.L.I
 

checking polls..... you need to elevate man!

byy the way lil C.A.L.I are you empires lil brother for real?

Voted For: lil C.A.L.I

i vote for you because you had way better flow and way better punches and structure kiloyou need to elavate and u need to up all of your shit so my advice not to hate but u need to write your raps and keep doin dat until u elavate or get help froma vet but anyways cali i liked yours better cuz your getting elavated and your multis and everything else was way better then kilos was so u guys keep it up u guys are getting there keep elavateing!!:thumbup: plus your lines were long as fuck

yeah......elevatin a open mic? dats wut u call a battle now? he aint got shit on me and neitha do u.

This was feedback posted for Kilo704
 

checkin pollzzzz...////////////////////////////////////

This was feedback posted for lil C.A.L.I
 

checking da fuckin polls..........................

aight...this shit has gone too far....
1.scarface's vote was unexplained
2.lil cali's verse was in open mic before the battle was even set up
3.kilo decided to let that shit slide uz he didnt want to win by dq but
4.now lil cali just voted for himself.....glock/lil cali....ip's

*this is bs this shood be an automatic win!!!!!!*

i agree.... this was one of the first things i voted on.... so i didnt really get the voting system much.... but yeah... close this battle plz

This was feedback posted for Kilo704
 

checkin the polls.....................................

Voted For: Kilo704

Wow Uhh....Im Speechlees there was alot of Anger I Was sincing in this battle Wow Um ..............Phewww... but Lil cali you defintly didnt get this battle infact i can put a few RV dollars on this battle that Kilo wins LOL But im not hatin its jus that he came alot harder wit the punchez and thats what i like to see and it seems to me he had alot of anger stored up for you LOL >.........but n e ways thats jus how i feel others may feel diffrent but everyones intitled to their own opinion
feel me?
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I Totally Agree a .........Kilo mayne dats like lettin Lil cali jus shit in yo cereal or somethin mayne you betta hit strobe up in let him know whats goin on i totally agree wit My Mayne eastcoast ova dere mayne Thats tottal %100 Dissrespect Mayne you betta handle dat

Voted For: Kilo704

battle was wack.
both of you need to elevatem and then try and battle.
sighs.. flow - kilo.
punches - kilo
laughter/hithard- none.

Voted For: lil C.A.L.I

lil C.A.L.I. - decent drop from u..could've done better tho..punches were aight..decent structure, and a decent
vocab on there too...but overall work on those punches, structure & the flow too

Kilo - weak drop from yuo..none of ur punches hardly made sense...& a decent structure from you..overall elevate more too...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168299

^RTF lil C

Voted For: lil C.A.L.I

flow cali
opener-closure tie
personal cali
imagry cali
punches cali
lyrics cali

so overall cali and look up my bats and vote on dem some have been quite for 3 days peace.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Kilo704

okat this was a onesided battle.....
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lil C.A.L.I:your verse was horrible.....no punches....no personals....bad strcutre....no flow...bad vocab.....overall you need to elevate with the punches,structure,flow,personals.....and a fucking new style....overall:4/10
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Kilo704:your verse wasn't all that good either...you had okay punches...okay personals....your flow was off.....and your structure killed you....overall you won cuz your atempt in punches were far more efective then cail's..overall:6/10

Voted For: Kilo704

.................Rahh you won lil Cali sucks rahh!