Personify vs † Gødž Ångël †
 

Battle Rules:

Personify vs. â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

4-8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Alias Votes (any crew member)
No Hopeful votes. (people tryin out for your crew)
good luck.

px

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-14-04 at 09:23 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

aight its gonna take me a while to post my verse. i got a ton of shit to do before xmas. but i will post. px

â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 05:07 PM.

Persony this little animal, Feed him some visibility to be shown.
You have to post your ideas on a site just for them to be known,
I go to 50th bridge to get cherrished by my little minion officers,
You get stepped on and sometimes fly like little grass hoppers,
I am like a reading teacher, but remain skipping over you lines,
Kids appraise me for not testing your skills for you cant rhyme.
I have to have a microscope to see the structure of your point,
If you want to join my crew, your fam needs to depart just to join.

I like mah verse.... Dont know how its gon do.... but oh well.. Good luck dawg....

Peace~

Uppin for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sry bout that....^^ Lol......

Dude ...... post your verse ASAP... ok?...
Peace~

Personify has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 05:24 PM.

I guess at these times good help really is hard to find. (Exp 6)

Exp 1- In Zeke's and WC's battle against EF he said they were better.
Exp 2- petter: to pet, or someone who pets an animal, pussy=cat, mad word play :thumbup:
Exp 3- His sn for AIM is Lilrapperboy9292
Exp 4- Asked where to find gangsta avatars
Exp 5- his old name wuz logistic (means symbolic logic)
Exp 6- he got KOd by Legend, his own member.

Vote Honest Or Not At All

px

^^sry bout the confusin structure. when u see a ( stop readin as a line.

This was feedback posted for Personify
 

good drop Godz Angel. good luck

uppin^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

this was pretty weak battle but i like GA's verse better. It was flowin alot better and had some attempts at weak punches just work on the creativity. Personify's verse was too cluttered and didnt really flow all that well. U need more hard hitting punches or multies at least.
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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

You gotta explain your votes more..........

Uppin~

Voted For: Personify

Godz Angel: This wasn't good as what I thought it would be, had nice flow though.

Persony this little animal, Feed him some visibility to be shown.
You have to post your ideas on a site just for them to be known,
I go to 50th bridge to get cherrished by my little minion officers,
You get stepped on and sometimes fly like little grass hoppers,
I am like a reading teacher, but remain skipping over you lines,
Kids appraise me for not testing your skills for you cant rhyme.
I have to have a microscope to see the structure of your point,
If you want to join my crew, your fam needs to depart just to join.

Personify's verse:Nice punches and personals. I see that someone has been doing their research.

Vote: Personify


why waste are time with this battle youve already admitted we're better (Exp 1)
respond to botty threads cuz only pussy you seen, all done is petter (Exp 2)
Ima provide discretion because this professions for men, let this be a lesson (Exp 3)
Stop askin questions and admit I am superior while I piss out my urine. (Exp 4)
Verbally i'll rip your spine like books at a public school,
"Reform" your cranium with verbal rhymes like D-1-2
Cant understand word syllables so ill make “logistic� signs (Exp 5)
I guess at these times good help really is hard to find. (Exp 6)

thanx for the honest vote. vote will be returned. uppin for more votes^^^^^^

Upping for votes................

C'mon.. Dont sleep on this.....

Peace~

uppin for more votes. dont sleep on this crew battle......

aight this is no longer a crew battle since Godz Angel is handin over VR, just a normal battle. be sure to vote, it will be returned! px

ok well now its just me vs. GA cuz 5 Prophetz is done. uppin.............

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

im not gonna give a big explanation....

angel ya verse was better all around,
flow
punches
diss and was more creative.....

hands down u got this win but i will explain if need it.....

Voted For: Personify

Personify

I Think You Lacked Multi's and meta's But Your verse was jus a lil above basic ....Infact i liked the way you made your punchez ***although Not Very strong** Noticeable. Um You really didnt lack alot of thingz its jus that they were weak sort of >>>>No offense<<<< Its jus that i know ive seen you do betta ....ya feel me?
^^But you get my vote

God Angel
Im Not tryna hate but im jus gonna tell you how i feel.,.....,,.ya verse was very basic it lacked alot and when i say alot i mean alot of strong keypionts I dont know if you jus feel off ya game or what but you were very basic in this verse. *^*^*^*This is jus an Honest Vote^*^**^ Thats jus how i feel.....Sorry but i give my vote to PX

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finally some honest votes. will return both. come on people keep votin. all votes will be returned, honestly. px

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

Personify:
first of all dont explain shit like that when you go so madly rank on it it makes your stucture look so fuckin messed...try and use a better style like godz angel did...but w/e still tho your punches were weak...i wasent feeling them one bit anyway...not to muhc of a use with the similies n metaphores...so theres nothing to great but a tiny bit of vocabulary...No Hate

Godz Angel:
i liked your stucture alot it was perfectly on straight liked that and then you flowed so damn good...with a perfect style of wordplay..for a 12 year old:thumbup: but anyway you still had good punches to win tho...but anyway good use of the metaphores and multis...good vocabulary...good work homie...No Hate to both

VOTE: Godz Angel

return the favour here:
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Thanx for the vote.

Uppin~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

haha parallel, if i hadnt explained it no one would have understood it and thus the battle would have been fucked. but ya thanx for the honest vote. px

fuck you personify hate voting you dick head..im gonna report you...faggot..

wut the hell, i broke it down para, u got beat, get over it. i didnt hate, i gave u an honest vote. unlike some people on this site i dont hold grudges. dumbass. i broke it down, u can check for yourself. so quit bitchin, cuz i wuznt the only one who felt like u lost, 5 other people did. so i did notin wrong, i posted my feelin and 4 other people agreed wit me. whiny little bitch. px

^^^ya i kno i said 5 then 4, but a lot of votes got Dqed so ya. px

This was feedback posted for Personify
 

checkin the polls......................................

blah wut good is that? least tell us who u think won the battle. uppin....

close this up people. come on VOTE, not that hard. votes will be returned.....

Any votes here? This has been up way too long, close this up!

Voted For: Personify

Personals - Personify killz it... that was his strongpoint...
Punches - Personify
Multis - none
Entertainment - Personify
Structure - Godz Angel (try to avoid that Exp shit Pers... lol)
Metas - tie, both were nice...

V/Personify