Optikal vs Willmatic
 

Battle Rules:

5 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-12-04 at 09:11 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Willmatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 10:42 PM.

I'm Amm0, I murk wack kids, ya niggas should know the steelo
Op, I'll 'wet' ya 'back' like a fucking stereotypical latino
No words can explain how bad you are, you're just so not
Then ya name...sound like a fakeass transformers robot(name reminds me of Optimus Prime)
If you trying to be above me, I can help cuz heaven's up man
But even then I could still flip ya bitchass like the 7up can(there was a 7up can where it was upside down which=flipped)
I'm so vicious, the pistol...that shit ain't used no more
Instead I put rockets to ya body like the Houston court(Houston Rockets...got the rockets in the center of the court)
And now I'm done kid, only way you could top this shit
Is drop two verses, cuz double negatives equal a positive

OptiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 10:45 PM.

my lines will 'krak ya mind' wit ill punchlines lyrikally 'detach
ya spine'im eatin this cat like 'pacman signz'/1
it's 'confusin'u accept a battle u know ur "lossin' cant
hit wat u cant touch n i drop 'optIkal illsions'/2
yea i talk shit n' da boy from cali anit scared to 'shoot ya'
u 'aint supa'i put slugz in ya stomach an push ur 'back to
the futcha'/3(future)*
im a real emcee while u 'stake out' the 'fake route' u can
name ur first l.p ACNE and ya album still wont 'BREAK-OUT'/4
Kid this aint no 'game' spit fire n'flame' while i fragment ya
'frAME' u couldnt fuk wit me even if u copped a SEX 'CHANGE'
/5

*WHEN U SHOT IN UR STOMACH IT BLOWS YA BAK OUT

uperz............................................. ......

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come on ppepz gimme a break i vote on all ya shit,,

Voted For: Willmatic

Willmatic owned this guy.... Good vocab, and punches.

Voted For: OptiKaL

Yo i gotta go wit optikal on this one
he had better flow. The break out line was sick yo
And u also got the idea of explaining the verse at the end instead of doing in the middle like the other dude

Lmao@flow earning the win in a battle...can we get some real voters?

thats not all he said bitch kwit crying...........

Lmao, learn how to spell kid. Anyways, ya whole verse was wack, and that was the only category you beat me in :)

Uppin this shit, hurry up with some votes...I need 50 characters

hahahahahahahahahhaha u got ripped wit a keystyle^^^upper

cmoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo on

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppp

Do niggas not vote? Shit, only need 50 characters of explanation

This was feedback posted for OptiKaL
 

omg opitikal took me out with that "Break out" line. omg lol but pretty good battle.

this fukin kid vote no one wants ya feedbak main u aint nobody but thanx tho'

Voted For: OptiKaL

optikal u get my vote but your structure almost cost you........

i voted for optikal because.....
1.multis- ....neither one of you had very many....both had a couple....could have went either way....
2 structure- this almost cost optikal the vote.....you really need to work on your structure man....it was kind of hard to read....will your structure was decent...u took this catagory
3. punches- optikal took this one in my opinion...it prolly could have went either way.....but i thought that optiks hit harder
4.. if someone would have used some personals....this battle would have went to them.....you should both work on using more personals....

i chose optikal because i thought his punches hit harder....and his vocab was a slight bit better.......this could have went either way.....good battle.....return the favor with an honest vote in my battle vs terror2005...thanks
4.

No personals?! Kid, I joked on his name, which=nameplay, which=a type of personal. He had better punches?!? The only punch he had two punches, and both concepts were played out. Yet again, can a nigga get a good vote?

upppperz once again...................................

Voted For: OptiKaL

yours was better than his cause you have alotta punches dat connected and he had mininum of em
Good job
Ayo,I liked dat last bar in your verse,dawg

Young...seriously though, I have to sway that one. He only had 2 fucking punches, I had one each bar. Where can I put up a complaint for that vote, cuz that was fake as fuck

u had one each bar my ass n thats why ya gettin ripped kid....
jus be happy i diddnt even feel like trying

That's the lamest excuse Optikal...and are you blind? The only bar that didn't have a punch was the optimus prime line, and that was a personal/nameplay...don't get cocky just because there are terrible voters in this place. You've been murked, hell you couldn't eve step to a time limit YOU set up. Both of us dropped quick shit, it just took you longer to come up with that wack shit. So yea, don't even say anything else, you make no sense.

Uppin again, for some intelligent niggas...hell, FlowIntelligence or whatever ya name is, come vote on this

uppin this ishhhh nukkkkkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

This was feedback posted for OptiKaL
 

Just in here checking the pollz...................

Voted For: OptiKaL

here is how it goes down
flow opti
rhyming opti
hits opti
vocab opti
imagry opti
opener-closer opti
personals-opti
so over all it is opti and hey yo hit up on my link peace.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: OptiKaL

u 'aint supa'i put slugz in ya stomach an push ur 'back to
the futcha'/3(future)*
^^ That won it right there

WillMatic:
Your Verse Was decent.. Good Punches flow and wordplay you just got one upped on this occassion.. keep ya head up and keep elevating you nice..

Optikal:
Ooo eeee, wordplay punches and everything was off the chain on this battle.. my favorite line was quoted above..


Repay the favor with a vote in my battle verses legend in my sig thanks..