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Necro Pyronix 12-10-04 05:48 AM

Necro Pyronix vs (x) CeEd
 
Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No Dick ryding.

Minimum posts to vote: 65

Check in by: 12-10-04 at 06:18 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

System 12-10-04 05:48 AM

Necro Pyronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 05:48 AM.

System 12-10-04 05:52 AM

(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 05:52 AM.

Necro Pyronix 12-10-04 06:00 AM

This New Zealend Fuck, Think's He Can Exeed All Expectation's?
Of What Kid? Receiving Grade-A Wackness Result's In That Operation?
I Spit Molten Magma Bar's, That Digest & Shrivel Ya Half-Assed Word's.
With a Rec Like That Woulda Xpect The L's From Vet's....
But In Battle Stat's They Were All From Herb's!
What Kinda Cat Spell's His Name Like That, Or Was You Baffled from Birth?*
New Zealend Sheep-Shagger's, Don't Have Kangaroo's? Well I'll Have Ya Reeling Ta Perth!**


Explanation's: *Look At How He Spelt His Name.......
** Australia Is Next To New Zealend..and Perth Is One of the main city's in aus....

(X)eed 12-10-04 06:03 AM

Im out to shock, out to rock out to put you on the hot spot,
You can play TWISTER and i'll still put you into tighter knots,
Kids playin himself wit a name like Necro Pyronix,its ironic, but i'll have an insight to your mind like you were microscopic
in reality i would send u a free visit to the Orthodontics,
kid before this battle started you already lost it.........

(X)eed 12-10-04 06:05 AM

ok................................................ ............uppin

Necro Pyronix 12-10-04 09:22 AM

................................Upping for votez.............

(X)eed 12-11-04 01:35 AM

hey yo..............uppin 4 votesssssssssssssssssss

(X)eed 12-11-04 06:08 AM

yo yo uppin 4 votess.....................honest votes will b returned

Necro Pyronix 12-11-04 11:43 AM

.........................................upping for votes.............

(X)eed 12-12-04 05:14 AM

yo uppin 4 votes..................................

(X)eed 12-15-04 03:17 AM

cmon peepz uppin this shit,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

(X)eed 12-15-04 08:50 PM

man fuk all this vote 4 any1 here aiight honest votes SHALL b returnd

(X)eed 12-16-04 05:26 AM

yo uppin this shit
................... wif votes aiight

(X)eed 12-16-04 11:38 PM

yo uppin this shit.....................................

(X)eed 12-26-04 05:11 AM

yo bum fukaz uppin 4 votes.................................

(X)eed 12-26-04 08:48 PM

yo uppin 4 votes...................................

Sik Wit It 12-26-04 10:43 PM

Voted For: Necro Pyronix

Necro: decent punches..nice flow..structure was a lil off & on..and the vocab was decent..overall u had a decent drop..nuttin good here but it was aight..

(x) ceed: wack drop...elevate more..cuz i'd rather eat garbage than read 1 of ur battles again...ur structure was the only good thing in ur drop..

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

(X)eed 12-27-04 05:24 AM

fair enough............................................ uppin this

Kyleon 12-29-04 09:10 PM

Voted For: Necro Pyronix

i give this to Necro...He had betta flow and punches...But terrible structure...Vocab was a tie in my perspective..Personals came good in dis battle but i think it was a tie...Multis N Metas in dis battle were lackin so it was a tie.....

Structure-Ceed
Flow-Necro
Punches-Necro
Vocab-Tie
Personals-tie
Multis N Metas-Tie

V/Necro

(X)eed 12-29-04 09:13 PM

yo uppin this shit.............................................. .........

Acuity 12-30-04 05:21 AM

Voted For: (x) CeEd

Vote: xceed

Necro Ptronix - meh.....ok drop...tried to come wit the mad personal angle but none of ur punches were gd enough to make the personals wothit.....ttry and come with more creative lines for your punches and a consistent structure.

Xceed
Im out to shock, out to rock out to put you on the hot spot,
You can play TWISTER and i'll still put you into tighter knots,
nice originality, decnt punch -8/10
Kids playin himself wit a name like Necro Pyronix,its ironic, but i'll have an insight to your mind like you were microscopic
ok filler, not really a punch -6/10
in reality i would send u a free visit to the Orthodontics,
kid before this battle started you already lost it.........
nice closing line, set up wasn't relevant, but an ok bar-7/10

(X)eed 12-30-04 05:08 PM

aiight uppin this shit................................thnx peepz

(X)eed 12-31-04 10:46 PM

yo uppin this shit/////////////////////////////////////////

(X)eed 01-01-05 03:48 AM

uppin this homies............................................ ........

(X)eed 01-02-05 09:42 PM

yo homies uppin this shit ........................................

....Gone.... 01-03-05 06:38 PM

Voted For: Necro Pyronix

Im out to shock, out to rock out to put you on the hot spot,
You can play TWISTER and i'll still put you into tighter knots,
Kids playin himself wit a name like Necro Pyronix,its ironic, but i'll have an insight to your mind like you were microscopic
in reality i would send u a free visit to the Orthodontics,
kid before this battle started you already lost it.........
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ alrighty you had some punches, they "eh" okay. flow was a lil chopped up. Elevate on soem punches a lil more and your struture ok.


This New Zealend Fuck, Think's He Can Exeed All Expectation's?
Of What Kid? Receiving Grade-A Wackness Result's In That Operation?
I Spit Molten Magma Bar's, That Digest & Shrivel Ya Half-Assed Word's.
With a Rec Like That Woulda Xpect The L's From Vet's....
But In Battle Stat's They Were All From Herb's!
What Kinda Cat Spell's His Name Like That, Or Was You Baffled from Birth?*
New Zealend Sheep-Shagger's, Don't Have Kangaroo's? Well I'll Have Ya Reeling Ta Perth!**
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ okay, nice punches and good personals too. The flow of it was good. The personals of it was good. Punches hit hard.




overall=This goes hands down to necro, no beef, but necro had some harder punches and plus some personals. Which (x) didnt have any personals. You had punches but the punches was weak, need elevating. Use personals in your verse. I felted necro punches came harder, than (x)....

peace

4fil 01-03-05 08:40 PM

Voted For: Necro Pyronix

Im out to shock, out to rock out to put you on the hot spot,
You can play TWISTER and i'll still put you into tighter knots,
1st line...^^^ self glorify... weak... second line.... weak
Kids playin himself wit a name like Necro Pyronix,its ironic
its ironic, but i'll have an insight to your mind like you were microscopic
NO^^^ line was crap... some words out of context
in reality i would send u a free visit to the Orthodontics,
kid before this battle started you already lost it.........
^^^the most played and reused line ever on RV.
Ok... crap verse from (x) CeEd.... no personals...
most words were out of context.. no structure...
You attempted wrodplay but it was all useless

This New Zealend Fuck, Think's He Can Exeed All Expectation's?
Of What Kid? Receiving Grade-A Wackness Result's In That Operation?
^^^nice intro.... dont be racist
I Spit Molten Magma Bar's, That Digest & Shrivel Ya Half-Assed Word's.
With a Rec Like That Woulda Xpect The L's From Vet's....
But In Battle Stat's They Were All From Herb's!
^^^mmm... an aight punch
What Kinda Cat Spell's His Name Like That, Or Was You Baffled from Birth?*
New Zealend Sheep-Shagger's, Don't Have Kangaroo's? Well I'll Have Ya Reeling Ta Perth
^^^^mmm... good personal... pretty nice closer
Try not to self glorify... but overall a good verse

Vote necro pyronix

(X)eed 01-03-05 09:53 PM

thnx 4 dah honesty uppin this>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Tha Unknown (Uk) 01-04-05 05:47 PM

Voted For: (x) CeEd

I'm voting for CeEd cuz I like his short eat him up an I'm done style.keep droppin

intensify effect 01-04-05 07:12 PM

Voted For: (x) CeEd

exceed just won this battle what happen mang.....



Im out to shock, out to rock out to put you on the hot spot,
You can play TWISTER and i'll still put you into tighter knots,
^^^ u need to re0word that 1st bar just re0word it but i felt what u was saying and it was a decent multis flow was oook and punches was slightly better for the simple fact in this battle u tossed a punch the other guy aint just disses....

Kids playin himself wit a name like Necro Pyronix,its ironic, but i'll have an insight to your mind like you were microscopic
that was a punch that did it.....

return da vote in one of my battles.............

4fil 01-04-05 07:15 PM

haha lol..... checking polls

(X)eed 01-04-05 07:31 PM

uppin this shit^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

(X)eed 01-05-05 01:24 AM

uppun this homies............................................

(X)eed 01-05-05 05:48 AM

uppin this shit.......................................

(X)eed 01-05-05 04:52 PM

uppin this kats votes will b returnd...................................

Force. 01-05-05 07:25 PM

Voted For: Necro Pyronix

i think i voted on this already but uh..

v/ necro pyronix..

he threw harder pucnches and good new zealend personals.. x ceed talked about how he was gunna win, and you need to throw punches and personals.. whats with the stretched line and orthadontics? didnt flow and was wack.

v/ necro

4fil 01-05-05 09:06 PM

uppin for mr (x) CeEd.

(X)eed 01-05-05 09:42 PM

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(X)eed 01-06-05 05:09 AM

uppin this shit....................................


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