† Gødž Ångël † vs karnevil_kid
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-11-04 at 04:08 PM

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â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 04:24 PM.

karnevil_kid has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 04:37 PM.

Your name is Gods angel aka ill emcee//
If your sick of rap dog then just leave the scene//
Your dream is to beat me but this is a battle to the death//
so when you lose tell god that I want to battle him next//
you say you’re an angel but you say your from hell//
are you lost dog? Do you need a map for help?//
am I making you nervous I didn’t mean to scare//
but ive been to hell twice and I aint never seen you there//
fuck the tables lets just turn the chairs in this verse//
cause im sending you home like suicide in a church//

Karnevil kid thinks he knows all about the real evil seed of satin,
He has been choking, but the wole time he thought he was waitin,
Proves what he knows, not what his records doesnt even know,
After I said peace, you asked if war was over and if he could go,
This shit is not fictional, its the truth, the monster uder the bed,
Forgot to cover your intelgence, and he lost track of your head,
The master mind of you terrible rhyme, go down and hit it behind,
So your ahead, of the game yoiu arent in, Now leave, It it now time,
Your job here is done, I already cleaned out the sink and the toilet,
Thats the only thing you can spitt, is cleanin up shit,, dont spoil it.
Im sorry I gave you your first loss, but i thought id do whats right,
This last line is suicide, I will always persue with fear in the night.

Hmm.... I like mah verse...... Good Luck.. Peace~

Hmm.... You didnt have a bad verse..... But ther is tons of people who have said you say your an angel btu you say your from hell and all that shit...... Not sayin you bitin but people gotta watch that.. .. But otehr wise you did pretty good...

Peace..

Lez get some votes on this...

word yo haha my bad...i aint never been on this site b4.....yours was tite too....yo txt heds we need some votes....good looks with the battle though...maybe we can battle again sometime.....good luck ~1

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

aiyo this waz a real close battle ya'll iz on bout the same levels n ish def worth reading but i vote for god for having
tight multi's mixed wit sum personal punchlinez..but diddnt
win by much good drop dunny's peep my battles they gettin
slept on

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

Angel took this one no doubt. Better punches, flow, and vocab all the way. And it just just felt like there was more feeling put into it.

Thanx for the ovtes.... uppin.....

Peace~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Voted For: karnevil_kid

vote/KK

this was a close battle..................................
godz-you had some good structure.....no real punches there.......no real vocab.............pretty much blahh

KK- you had mehh structure.......you had what looked to be a punch..........you had better personals........so you get my vote...........for having a slightly better verse

v/KK

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

gotta go with GA....his punches were hittin harder then KK......KK....u need to work on ur punches dawg....and make ya lines lil bit longer so it looks and sounds better.....everything so quick

GA had some decent punches...maybe wasnt tryin his hardest cuz his opponent.....who knows....but his verse was betta so he gets my vote

GA...since u got more then 150 posts and KK dont....return tha HONEST favor on my battle....hate gettin slept on.....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164636

stay up

This was feedback posted for karnevil_kid
 

omg, i jus have 1 question, y did u compliment em n ya 1st line??? i c wut u were tryin ta do, but it didnt work, n plus that kinda shyt iz played, very noobish style, not very creative at all, punches were either weak, played, or both, n other words elevate...........alot

ummmm........godz angel.....decent multis n i really felt tha flow, altho tha punches were kinda weak, but tha concepts were there tho, i jus dont think ya pulled em off right, decent vocab, but also had kinda a noobish style

vote-Godz Angel

return tha favor plz, links n sig

aight good looks for the votes...ga we should battle again sometime...thanx for the constructive critism everyone....ga congrats on your win...stay up ~1

Uppin for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Upping for votes................

C'mon.. Dont sleep on this.....

Peace~

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-


Godz Angel took this one..
punches were decent, but hitted
structure was in place, and not stretched
and tha vocab & flow was good also...

karn..since ur new to this site..
idk if ur new to rappin but..elevate more
& challenge people who think u can win against
dont face peeps that are high-elevated than you..

RTF Godz Angel
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=166861

This was feedback posted for karnevil_kid
 

checking pollz....................................

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

karnevil_kid

Your name is Gods angel aka ill emcee//
If your sick of rap dog then just leave the scene//
^bit played but still works for me

Your dream is to beat me but this is a battle to the death//
so when you lose tell god that I want to battle him next//
^good one

you say you’re an angel but you say your from hell//
are you lost dog? Do you need a map for help?//
^decent i guess

am I making you nervous I didn’t mean to scare//
but ive been to hell twice and I aint never seen you there//
^nah...

fuck the tables lets just turn the chairs in this verse//
cause im sending you home like suicide in a church//
^uhm, not really feeling your closer

Decent drop but improve your rhymes n vocab to make it lil more complex but you had some stuff in there that (if it was worded bit different or complex) could be hardhitting.


Godz Angel

Karnevil kid thinks he knows all about the real evil seed of satin,
He has been choking, but the wole time he thought he was waitin,
^decent opener

Proves what he knows, not what his records doesnt even know,
After I said peace, you asked if war was over and if he could go,
^not really feeling it

This shit is not fictional, its the truth, the monster uder the bed,
Forgot to cover your intelgence, and he lost track of your head,
^good one...

The master mind of you terrible rhyme, go down and hit it behind,
So your ahead, of the game yoiu arent in, Now leave, It it now time,
^hehe, definately liked this...

Your job here is done, I already cleaned out the sink and the toilet,
Thats the only thing you can spitt, is cleanin up shit,, dont spoil it.
^nice...

Im sorry I gave you your first loss, but i thought id do whats right,
This last line is suicide, I will always persue with fear in the night.
^nope, closer doesn't do trick for me

Vocab was good, could've had some more original stuff in there but that's aight.Had some good hardhitting punches in there so overall good drop!