Artik Phrost vs RED BEAM
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

G-LUCK

PSA VS V.T :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-13-04 at 04:41 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 05:15 PM.

he needs to accept this shit....oh, and VT is wack

Artik Phrost has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 12:36 PM.

wen did I agree to this shit??....imma FEMALE, by the fuckin way, herb

its a krew battle trickkk

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VT vs PSA

i dont give a fuck if u a girl...i aint takin this soft
they call me PYRO bitch...cause i melt tha phrost
don’t fool urself…bitch u softer than tissue
…I’ll hit u with da missle and yo crew wont miss you

Artik Phrost is weak…just take ur seat
I’ll put WHITE in yo blood and take yo heart OFFBEAT
And its that time of tha month…go get ya pads
Cause im hittin u wit hard punches, u cant miss tha jabs

U could eat a case of jalapeños, and u still won’t spit hot
My rhymes bang deep…u can feel em in yo G-Spot
Prepare to fall out tha pot, Red Beam staying on top
Im a hard guy to catch, like tha blacks with tha cops

PSA runnin this shit…just stay on tha curb
Cross yo boundaries is deadly, and im speakin of more than just words
My crew say attack, so im coming wit dozens
A few to yo melon piece….have yo brain str8 buzzin

no shit shirlock....im not even in VT anymore.....so whats realli the point?...but, ill battle anways

man...if u aint in there, whats tha point, but w/e...this can gimme another win

drop u PUNK ROCK BEEZY....

*Artik Phrost walks up to the pulpit...opens "Da Book of Rhymes" and begins to read a passage*
"...OFE...Chapter 2...Verse2...Da Truth stated:
.."
*Looks at PSA*......SO FUCKEN TRUE!!

yo,
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....Pyro?..Red Beam?..Whoever you are...ITS OVER!
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yo,
VT or not, you'll never see me slayed! Ya punches prolly played!!.
So Artik Phrost don't need to stop commercials just to get rid of P-S-A!!..//1
Phrost make ya guts churn!..Jab ya face 'til ya iris ruptures'!!..
No logical depth?!..Guess, punches hit 'Red on the surface' lyke 'whites wit sun burn'!!..//2
Carressed wit loss!..Lyke 'lousy dry cleaners', Ya 'pressed and tossed'!!..
'Brain split'!..So next time you consider AP to battle, 'You'll have second thoughts'!!..//3
We don't hear a thing you say!..Ya whole fucken team is gay!!..
And ya 'career is onli piss', Because 'everybody goes for a Pee on PSAs'!!..//4 (ut oh..commercial..POTTY BREAK!)
Feel strife!..Bullets 'engage with ya bio'!..Leave you wit a 'hitched life'!!..
His tight?!..Fuck that!..'Rapverse doesn't feel RB', why you think they switched sites?!!!../5 (T.fucken.KO!!)
^^are you Red Beam or Pyro?...or do we have a case of Aliases?^^

*...PSA....Public Service Announcement....Commercial...*

..(.W.H.O.R.E.D.)..

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.*sits back and awaits tha wack punches....."de phrost"..." 'artik' not being hot*....OBVIOUSLY!!...

dumb ass...its not a alias, all i did was ask strobe to change my name...i never changes accounts, u dumb broad...good drop i guess....uppn this

"Pyro will up this wackass battle"

Voted For: Artik Phrost

phrost str8 ripped you......damn that was pretty good AP....last bar was fire........and u were comin pretty good on ya punches......RB needs to work on ya punches lil bit....thats what gave you da lost

return tha HONEST favor...I HATE GETTIN SLEPT ON........http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164636

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i usually return all votes...but that wasnt explained jackass...try again...*NEXT*

uppn............this........battle..........people .......

Voted For: RED BEAM

First of all... Artik, what kinda drop was that?
i mean..ur structure was flyin all over the damn
place..ur punches were pretty decent, vocab was
aight from you..but overall u had a weak drop..work
on your punches here...Obviously Pyro took this one.
had nice multi's..and punches...decent structure..and
had a nice flow to it...[/size]

aiyo...we need some more votes on this shit...for real, uppin this

Voted For: Artik Phrost

artik phrost got this hands down...

way harder punches that was more original
Feel strife!..Bullets 'engage with ya bio'!..Leave you wit a 'hitched life'!!..
His tight?!..Fuck that!..'Rapverse doesn't feel RB', why you think they switched sites?!!!../5 (T.fucken.KO!!)
^^are you Red Beam or Pyro?...or do we have a case of Aliases?^^
that was a nice hit plus personal......

FLOW ARTIK PHROST GOT IT HANDS DOWN...

ALL AROUND a.p JUST CAME WAY HARDER THATS ALL GOOD BATTLE

Voted For: Artik Phrost

there wasnt no real battle here just hard creative punches and wordplaya nd just more wittyer verse danm much props that verse is sick and a nice drop from pyro but man i thought punches wasnt really that close good battle

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Voted For: RED BEAM

Aii This Is How It Is

My explanation
Punchez.....Pyro
Personal.....Artik
Multi's.......Pyro
Metas'.........Pyro
Vocab........artik
Structure......Pyro

So there You Have It
Please Take The Time To RTF In My battle ..I Only have One Battle And I Think It Wouldnt Hurt You To RTF Thanx

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aight^imma hit up one of ur battles when/if u get another one open...thanx for tha honest vote hang-man...imma hit up one of urs too, i said i return all honest votes...so i got u...


uppn this...2-2

uppin again................

*fifty characters*...

Voted For: RED BEAM

i need to go with pyro...
i dont give a fuck if u a girl...i aint takin this soft
they call me PYRO bitch...cause i melt tha phrost
this was like wack but you have dope vocab...ya structure is almost perfect,,,execpted for the last verse...

Artik Phrost :
your verse was almost annoying tyo read...structure sucks...good vocab
We don't hear a thing you say!..
Ya whole fucken team is gay!!..
And ya 'career is onli piss', Because 'everybody goes for a Pee on PSAs'= bad

good lookkn on tha vote....lets get some more in here....

Voted For: Artik Phrost

flow art
rhyming tie
strucutre art
opener-closer art
personals art
hits art
vocab art
imagry art
over all art and hey hit up on my link peace.

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learn how to explain stuff...im not returnin that..
*15 characters*

Voted For: RED BEAM

I THINK THAT PYRO HAD THE BETTER VERSE THEN ARTIK PHROST
PYRO---I THINK U HAD A BETTER ALL AROUND VERSE...PUNCHES HIT REALLY HARD...METAS WERE BEIN USED CORRECTLY...FLOW WAS PREETY GOOD...STRUCTRE WAS TIGHT A VERY GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTRE...WORDPLAY WAS USED VERY WELL...RHYMES WERE VERY GOOD...GOOD JOB 7.5/10
BEST LINES----i dont give a fuck if u a girl...i aint takin this soft
they call me PYRO bitch...cause i melt tha phrost
PSA runnin this shit…just stay on tha curb
Cross yo boundaries is deadly, and im speakin of more than just words
ARTIK----URE FLOW WAS PREETY GOOD...STRUCTRE WAS KINDA OFF...PUNCHES DIDNT HIT AS HARD AS PYROS...METAS WERENT USED VERY WELL BUT STILL IGHT...
WORDPLAY COULD HAVE BEEN USED BETTER BUT IT WAS OKAY... 6/10
BEST LINE----We don't hear a thing you say!..Ya whole fucken team is gay!!..
And ya 'career is onli piss', Because 'everybody goes for a Pee on PSAs'!!..//4 (ut oh..commercial..POTTY BREAK!)
(WHAT WAS WITH THE LTTLE BATHROOM BREAK COMMENT RANDOM BUT FUNNY...
PEACE...

good lookn out on tha votes...they will be return HONESTLY...dont trip...thanx x-cell...uppin this

This was feedback posted for RED BEAM
 

i dont have enough post to vote good battle i think u took dis one

red beam got 1 good vote....i should have them othas dq'd..but naw its kew, i aint trippin.....an quit tellin them to eliminate my votes....face it...youre wack holmes....i beat you str8 up bitch

Voted For: Artik Phrost

Oh god. this is one sided Artik KILLED IT LOL.

Flow - artik
punches - artik
laughter etc - artik
artik - winner, nothign else needs to be said or explained.. if u read Jay Dotz post.. LOL

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shut-up...if u havent noticed i get all unexplained votes DQ'd...even mine...so stop bitchin...ur verse was kinda wack, mine was too, but i still think i merked u


uppin this wack ass battle so we can get it closed..

uppin this....she hella weak, why is it still up...........

j dot will look to up this battle again, because he sees that too manby battles get slept on...i upped this battle more times than its been viewed...*sad*

ap WON THIS battle word uo no need to delet all the votes no hate or noting

Voted For: RED BEAM

i vote for j-dot cuz he had ill, dope flow and ,mad multis....................lmao...........thnis hoe these white dudes be talkin.................

iight i vot 4 j dot cuz he had way better punches and flow, his multis was nice too

I aint understand phrost's verse, wat up wit cha structure

My vote:J dot

^yea...that structure was bad...but thanx for tha vote....

JDOT looks to up this battle one more time....

uppin this battle..........50 characters.................