..Lyrical.. vs Ruffridah187
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 12-10-04 at 10:55 PM

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Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 10:28 PM.

..Lyrical.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 10:35 PM.

This dude thinks he's hard but shit it don't matter
Only 6 lines away now till his dreams shatter
I'm flattered you wanna battle ME but this one sided
You bite rhymes my dicks out come bite it
Get ya buddy his dick's out ride it that's the only way you'll win
Ya rhymes like paper and mine full of whirls n winds
Get the girls and friends so they can see ya get ya ass kicked
Get off crack kid you can't rap n skill is what you lackin

hey good luck this the first battle i've had since August

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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

Aii This Is what i think

Lyrical
You get my vote you had betta wordplay and stuff i was definetly feelin the way it kept that flow n rythm i like that....you need to work on personals a lil more so u can learn how to use them in the rii way mayne u feel me but i was likin ya verse i give it a
6/10

Ruffridah
Ok You Came Kinda weak but not real weak i was expectin you to come wit some precise punches and pesonals bcuz lyricals verse was strong so i thought yall was on da same level but u might've been off your game so ....I think yu need work on multi's and meta's then youll have a good verse but this verse lacked basics and thats why i wasnt feelin it very much
sorry
4/10

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Voted For: Ruffridah187

Ruff got this.... your verse ws b a lot better i think..... i liked your pu8nches.. they hit real hard... I liked em.. you had a few strehed lines.... but its all good.... i liek it... your flow was real good..... you had some sweet mutlis in there too.... Keep it up....

Lyrical.. you didnt do bad either..... your lines were kinda streched too tho.... but yours were streched more than ruffs.... you had some good punhes in there too.. and some decent flow.......... but i amma hafta giev this one to ruff.....

Peace out~

Return tha fava \/ \/ \/

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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

Blah...both definitely need to elevate. Both had decent flow...but both need to work on everythin else. Multies set you apart from newbies...simple as that. Get more creative wit ya punches...but this vote goes to Lyrical for at least knowing what I'm talkin about. He had some decent punches, but work can be done to both. No hate, just elevate.

Return the favor...thanks.

Topical: hipnoticz

Punchline: logic 4 dubz

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz

bull shit! but o well might as well up the shit.......

No bullshit...if you wanna start somethin, then speak...you wack. Face it, and elevate.

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Returned favors are great these days. (In other words take a fuckin' hint haha.)

This was feedback posted for ..Lyrical..
 

This dude thinks he's hard but shit it don't matter
Only 6 lines away now till his dreams shatter
I'm flattered you wanna battle ME but this one sided
You bite rhymes my dicks out come bite it
Get ya buddy his dick's out ride it that's the only way you'll win
Ya rhymes like paper and mine full of whirls n winds
Get the girls and friends so they can see ya get ya ass kicked
Get off crack kid you can't rap n skill is what you lackin
^^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP....PUNCHES WERE PLAYED OUT....ELEVATE ON PUNCHES...AND USE PERSONALS....EITHER WAY.....THIS WAS NOT AN GOOD VERSE




Shut the fuck up with your wack vocab…you lack dope lines
U Milk your flow for what it's worth…like you got lactose rhymes
Split Your Personality Apart…So Your Bars Aren’t From Different Points of View
This Day You'll Rue…Fearing The Mail…Because the Pain I’m Delivering You
Ruff Is Never Ahead…Nor Behind…Her Direction Is Wrong
Another Win Under My Belt…And That’s Where Ruff Belongs
Yep Its True, Ruff Is Addicted 2 Homo Ass…Let Me Help Kick Ya Habit
Ya Only Dropped Ill When I Bit Ya Check In…But Honestly…That’s It
^^^^^^^^^^^ FIX YOUR STRUTURE AND PLS DONT PUT YOUR VERSE IN BOLD FAM....U HAD SOME PUNCHES...GOOD FLOW....


OVERALL= THIS WAS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE RUFFRIDAH CAME PLAYED WITH HER PUNCHES...FLOW WAS A LIL CHOPPED UP BUT THE PUNCHES WERE PLAYED OUT ELEVATE RUFF

LYRICAL HE HAD SOME PUNCHES GOOD FLOW...PUNCHES WERE THE THINGS THAT BEAT RUFF IN THIS BATTLE

SO I HAVE TO GIVE THIS TO RUFF FOR HARDER PUNCHES

PEACE


O DAYUM THIS IS AN FEEDBACK SRRY I CANT VOTE

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Ryan.. I dont wnna vote against you dude... lol..... But I am gonna hafta give it to Lyrical...

Pz.

Voted For: ..Lyrical..



Shut the fuck up with your wack vocab…you lack dope lines
U Milk your flow for what it's worth…like you got lactose rhymes
Damn Thats A Ko Rite Thea....


Split Your Personality Apart…So Your Bars Aren’t From Different Points of View
This Day You'll Rue…Fearing The Mail…Because the Pain I’m Delivering You
Good Punches And Nice Metas..

Ruff Is Never Ahead…Nor Behind…Her Direction Is Wrong
Another Win Under My Belt…And That’s Where Ruff Belongs
Shit Wass Off Tha Meter I Like That..

Yep Its True, Ruff Is Addicted 2 Homo Ass…Let Me Help Kick Ya Habit
Ya Only Dropped Ill When I Bit Ya Check In…But Honestly…That’s It
Fuckin Koed Hommie Mad Wicked Yo He Had Vokab Punches And Personals Damn Yo *Sends Ruff Home Ashamed* HaHa

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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

damn lyrical ripped this shit.. fucking dope ass punches.. real original too... pretty good flow.. decent structure.. good personals... this is one of the best drops i seen from u.. good job B....keep it up..

thankz mayn...uppin.

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

lyrical.......
Shut the fuck up with your wack vocab…you lack dope lines
U Milk your flow for what it's worth…like you got lactose rhymes
lol nice opener....good personal in 1st line...nice wordplay

Split Your Personality Apart…So Your Bars Aren’t From Different Points of View
This Day You'll Rue…Fearing The Mail…Because the Pain I’m Delivering You
decent...hit good.....good punch

Ruff Is Never Ahead…Nor Behind…Her Direction Is Wrong
Another Win Under My Belt…And That’s Where Ruff Belongs
ok...prolly your worst bar....but still hit good

Yep Its True, Ruff Is Addicted 2 Homo Ass…Let Me Help Kick Ya Habit
Ya Only Dropped Ill When I Bit Ya Check In…But Honestly…That’s It
lol nice closer....made me laugh....


ruffridah.......................
This dude thinks he's hard but shit it don't matter
Only 6 lines away now till his dreams shatter
hmm too simple...hit ok....but not that great of an opener

I'm flattered you wanna battle ME but this one sided
You bite rhymes my dicks out come bite it
not feelin this....

Get ya buddy his dick's out ride it that's the only way you'll win
Ya rhymes like paper and mine full of whirls n winds
decent...didnt like the first line

Get the girls and friends so they can see ya get ya ass kicked
Get off crack kid you can't rap n skill is what you lackin
not a good closer...it really didnt hit well.....too simple


basically i voted for lyrical because his verse was just on another level.....punches hit harder...more personals...the verse was just better....need i explain more?

rtf lyrical...links in sig...thanks