~Sonofisis~ vs 9th degree
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 12-11-04 at 04:41 PM

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~Sonofisis~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 04:16 PM.

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 04:18 PM.

9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes
Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines!
You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You
Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews
In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad
Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass
So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes
Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope"
This is too much of an Easy Job
Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God
Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck
I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch

My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies
I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades
So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head
Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed
That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow
Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row
If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed
But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp
Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown
Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down
You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested
But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested

If you don't get the wordplay and punches, don't vote.

Voted For: 9th Degree

Sonic:
9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes
Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines!
set-up was wack, ok punch but played and self glory
You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You
Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews
lol funny, but a fake personel
In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad
Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass
blah decent
So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes
Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope"
lol, ok this was good
This is too much of an Easy Job
Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God
lol ok not bad
Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck
I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch
lol again nice punch

9th Degree:
My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies
I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades
lol, dope fucking set-up, followed with the finish
So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head
Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed
ummm, I didn't like this one blah
That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow
Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row
lol this was good, great set-up again
If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed
But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp
lol, pretty ok, good personel
Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown
Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down
straight fire man, shit
You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested
But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested
lmfao again, damn great finish

This was a dope battle on both parts, but it was a landslide for 9, he came with hot original lines, and his set-ups contained good punches to, sonic, you did good, prolly a lil rusty or something, but you came weak in this, played lines and fake personels, 9 just took you on this one

Voted For: 9th Degree

this was a pretty good battle but i think 9th edged it out a little bit more. his punches were just hittin harder n he had a better flow. Sonofisis had some personal stuff in there and good structure but not enuff hot punches to come away with tthe win tho
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I appreciate that you guys atleast think that i did coo, i ain't battled in ages... check out my audio stuff tho.. i'm tryna work on my music..

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Uppin' this for some more votes y'all.............

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies
I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades
So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head
Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed
That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow
Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row
If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed
But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp
Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown
Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down
You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested
But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested
^^^^^^^^ WHOA~1 NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW THE PERSONALS WERE NICE..BUT THE PUNCHES JUST KILLED IT IN YOUR VERSE NICE FAM




9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes
Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines!
You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You
Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews
In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad
Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass
So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes
Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope"
This is too much of an Easy Job
Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God
Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck
I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch
^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT NICE PERSONALS AND NICE PUNCHES AND THE FLOW WAS KINDA CHOPPED UP IN SOME PLACES BUT IT WAS AN GOOD VERSE


OVERALL= GOOD BATTLE BOTH OF YOU HAD PERSONALS GREAT DECENT PUNCHES, FLOW

SONOFIS- MAYNE U HAD AN GREAT VERSE NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS... THE FLOW WAS AIGHT BUT GOOD PUNCHES CAME OUT IN YOUR VERSE

DEGREE- YOU HAD AN GOOD VERSE, NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW FAM... THE PERSONALS WERE NICE AS FUCK HOMIE...GOOD PUNCHES WITH IT TOO


ALRIGHT SONOFIS U HAD GOOD PUNCHES BUT I FELT 9TH DGREE CAME HARDER WITH PUNCHES AND PERSONALS... I WONT ADMIT UR GOOD...BUT 9TH DEGREE WON BY PUNCHES AND PERSONALS......

THIS JUST AN FEEDBACK

YO I'LL APPRECIATE IF YOU PUT DOWN AN VOTE IN MY RECENT BATTLES

This was feedback posted for ~Sonofisis~
 

checkin polls.............................................

Yeah, uppin' this again for some more votes y'all.

Voted For: 9th Degree



9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes
Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines!

Might have hit harder if u had a link showing proof...5/10

You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You
Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews

weak.....setup wa sirrelvant..an punch was worded bad...4/10

In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad
Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass

Setup seemed promising..but punch was weak...an do bad & ass rhyme?.........4/10

So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes
Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope"

punch was creative..but setup wa sjus blah...7/10

This is too much of an Easy Job
Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God

WHAT!!!!?.....that was terrible dawg..no hate but...you've dropped way better...3/10

Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck
I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch

Closer was decent...if u had made it more of a diss instead of just a brag line coulda been a ten but jus a....6/10

Overall: 29/60



My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies
I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades

Setup was blah but punch was good......6/10

So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head
Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed

Setup had a ill unique meta but punch brought it down...5/10

That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow
Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row

I get it but wasn't dat hard...5/10

If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed
But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp

ROLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!nice personal....8/10

Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown
Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down

NO!!!!...that was not working at all man....4/10

You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested
But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested

Setup was weak but punch was creatvie an funny...good simile......7/10

Overall: 35/60

Ok, thanks for honest votes...uppin' this for more

Uppin' for more votes y'all, I gotta get an open battle spot...

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Voted For: 9th Degree

9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes
Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines!
Nice Opener
You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You
Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews
Nice Punchline
In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad
Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass
Ok
So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes
Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope"
……Ok
This is too much of an Easy Job
Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God
Wtf? No…
Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck
I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch
Ok…

Next……


My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies
I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades
Nice Opener
So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head
Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed
Nice
That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow
Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row
Ok……
If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed
But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp
Decent
Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown
Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down
Ok…decent hea
You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested
But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested
Decent Closer

Overall I felt that 9th Degree took this one tho…
punches were hard hittin & they connected & nice wordplay too

Word, uppin' for more honest votes on this piece, holla!

Voted For: 9th Degree

9th degree:

My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies
I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades
Self glorified, 2nd line has ok tho
So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head
Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed
Both hit hard...dopeness
That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow
Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row
haha, funny shit
If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed
But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp
LOL
Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown
Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down
Creative shit
You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested
But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested
OOOOHHHH, insane closer

Overall score = 9/10

~Sonofisis~:

9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes
Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines!
lol, strong opener
You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You
Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews
Not the hardest punch but kinda funny
In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad
Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass
weak, wack...
So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes
Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope"
Nice
This is too much of an Easy Job
Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God
Wack/no flow
Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck
I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch
Good Closer

Overall Score = 7.5/10

In closing, I feel 9th degree came out today to win. He had me laughin my ass off with some clever and witty punches that hit hard. Hounestly if he loses this I will be outraged. However, I feel Sonofisis did a great job - just Ive read your stuff before and this aint your greatest work. Good job with the funny/creative punches that you did have but I think you gotta watch line lenghts to keep a fluid sounding verse. Also, try using some personals against your opponents, I think I only saw one in your whole verse that caught my eye. Personals are whut us vets like to see because we know whats going on around this site and it hits hard. Props to both as always tho, good battle - but theres gotta be a winner, well done 9th degree! Payce...

Yo, could you guys please drop an hounest/explained vote on my battle as I just did for you...I didnt spend my time critiquing your battle for nothing, thanks. Late.