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Skriptz vs *Troop*
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Crew Dr 3-0= Ko Rep ya Shit ......... Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 12-14-04 at 04:16 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO Unexplained vote.. reopened 1/2/05 win by 3-0 KO 1/6/05 |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 05:33 PM.
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Ya Rhymes Are Tight? Nah Your Wack To A New Degree…Let’s Sharpen Up Ya Finger Joint
But Even If Ya Still Tried To Key A Dope Verse…Ya Flow Would Never Be On Point Troop Battling Skriptz? It’s a Cold Way Down…Just Like Ice-Skating Up Hill Chill, I Think You Okay…But You Could Elevate, Wait You Don’t Have Enough Skill Practically RV’s Your Life Man…Hope Everyone’s Watching This And I’d Love To Talk About Your Skill…But I Don’t Talk Alot Shit* From ‘Murder Capital’, But The Only Thing He’s Seen On This Is Pure Rejection Get Brutally Dissected Faster Than A Horny Guy Getting An Errection You Have No Sense Of A Keyed Verse, That Comes Straight From The Random Scriptures So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick, Cuz This Kid Is Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures ..Out.. *= he was talkin a lot of shit when he got kicked outta A.I. etc… no bullshit votes…un-explained votes will get removed…vote clean |
Ya Rhymes Are Tight? Nah Your Wack To A New Degree…Let’s Sharpen Up Ya Finger Joint But Even If Ya Still Tried To Key A Dope Verse…Ya Flow Would Never Be On Point Troop Battling Skriptz? It’s a Cold Way Down…Just Like Ice-Skating Up Hill Chill, I Think You Okay…But You Could Elevate, Wait You Don’t Have Enough Skill Practically RV’s Your Life Man…Hope Everyone’s Watching This And I’d Love To Talk About Your Skill…But I Don’t Talk Alot Shit* From ‘Murder Capital’, But The Only Thing He’s Seen On This Is Pure Rejection Get Brutally Dissected Faster Than A Horny Guy Getting An Errection You Have No Sense Of A Keyed Verse, That Comes Straight From The Random Scriptures So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick, Cuz This Kid Is Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures ..Out.. *= he was talkin a lot of shit when he got kicked outta A.I. etc… no bullshit votes…un-explained votes will get removed…vote clean |
*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 12:21 PM.
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.....Betta come Harder than that..... "M"en "A"bove "B"itches sent Henchmen with 2 Thongs 2 Stripz Your an Emcee with Lisp tryed Scriptures only Delivered Skriptz Should of Copyrighted Wayne Sig rights cuz Posa's come Fully Skriptz Equipped with Joint & Slingshot & thinks he's "Soulja42o" You have the Ability of 1 Legged Dwarf thats tryna Ducka Shelf If you defeat Tc then u Out of a crew..Stop tryna Fuckya Self Jocked my style.Next is Dyein ya Hair wit"Sperm-in-ya-Bleach" This ya Toughest Fight Since Transvestites @ Virgina-Beach Juggling FlowIntelligents Jock Strap 2 get in M.a.b Sic "Lic"Ture Leave u Bruised No Ability 2 Show ya Face like ya Sig "Pic"Ture His aim name is Souilja420 he copyed wayne in his sig like me Hes from Norfolk..which is next 2 Virgina Beach ...Blah quick Keystyle |
Voted For: *Troop*
The Other Guys Punches Were Kinda Weak... I Did Pick Up On All The Wordplay Though... And Most Of It Was Generic Or Boring... Troop Had Decent Punches And Shit... But What I Liked Most Is His Smooth Running Flow... Overall I Think Troop Took This Easily... .One. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
bumpin this shit
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that fully and 42o line didnt rhyme..headz up
its 42 ' o '...ur not sayin it as 4:20 ...sigh .Out. |
eh doesnt matter they get wha im sayin...bumpin this shit
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This was feedback posted for Skriptz
checkin the polls....nice verses both.......
pz |
Voted For: Skriptz
Opener: Skriptz Ending: was well close cos both ended tight - Skrpitz Multis: meh, neitha really Persobals: Troop, came wit mad personals Punches: SKriptz - jus took it wit da closer Wordplay: Troop Originality: tied Flow: Skriptz Structure: troop - simple but easy to work with n follow Overall Skriptz - 9/10 Troop - 8/10 Peace return favours Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
bumpin this shit
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Voted For: Skriptz
skriptz took this.....ive seen troop do a lot better but this unfortunately wasnt one of his good battles....skriptz verse wuz good but troops was only okay....skriptz had better vocab, punches, flow, wordplay, opener, AND closer...he basically had everything....both contestants had good openers...troop didnt have very strong punches....skriptz plainly took the vocab category....i personally didnt think that troop verse didnt flow that well....was hoping for a closer battle....skriptz took it hands down.... v/skriptz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lol//u dont kno real shit when u see it i see u dumb ni99a
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Uppin this shit for explained REAL votes
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Voted For: *Troop*
lol i got to give this battle to troop.... brilliant structure and flow here.... but i think you take it with your humur "M"en "A"bove "B"itches sent Henchmen with 2 Thongs 2 Stripz Your an Emcee with Lisp tryed Scriptures only Delivered Skriptz This ya Toughest Fight Since Transvestites @ Virgina-Beach ^^^lol!! so some good and funny lines there by troop scrips... wasnt a bad verse.... i think you need to work on your flow and structure.... more personals i think and your punches just dont come hard enough So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick, Cuz This Kid Is Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures ...... lol...... but your lines are a bit stretched so that sort of kills the flow... Vote Troop Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: *Troop*
This was quite a good battle ain't seen one in a while but i do think i know who got this... Skriptz your verse was hella stretched but it flowed well enough...but work on that...punches were good the ice up the hill woulda been better flipped but it was aight some good personals but didn't feel this as a punch though From ‘Murder Capital’, But The Only Thing He’s Seen On This Is Pure Rejection Get Brutally Dissected Faster Than A Horny Guy Getting An Errection Wasn't hard (no pun) to me but the rest was aight but things you should work on definitely is the structure that was jus crazy... *Troop* a decent verse too punches were harder hittin and personals were good...i thought the MAB bit to begin wit was dope and the closer too was also effective flow and structure was perfect was real intact some wordplay and multies thrown in to so all round i think you got this... V/*Troop*...RTF on my sig plz |
This was feedback posted for Skriptz
checkin' the polls......................................
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*
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stop removin votes...
EastCoats shit was explained |
u removed one of my explained votes
and strobe wants VOTES that explain WHY they voted not bashing the person who lost....theres a diff jus cuz its a long vote dont mean its sayin shit |
^no kid..
abstrakt's vote was hardly xplaind.. mine was... |
^ mine wuz explained..............i wuz just saying hat troop cooda won diss shit but didnt, i wasnt bashing you...i was sain wut the winner did good and wut the loser did bad......read tha rulez, thats how u explain a vote....butu since it's already dq'd fuck it.
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Ne way uppin 2 get this shit ova wit
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*
...*Troop* my rtf?...(GSS battle?)................
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bumpin this shit for the grand finale
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Voted For: *Troop*
Skriptz: Ya Rhymes Are Tight? Nah Your Wack To A New Degree…Let’s Sharpen Up Ya Finger Joint But Even If Ya Still Tried To Key A Dope Verse…Ya Flow Would Never Be On Point Opener was weak, understood it but punch didn't really hit Troop Battling Skriptz? It’s a Cold Way Down…Just Like Ice-Skating Up Hill Chill, I Think You Okay…But You Could Elevate, Wait You Don’t Have Enough Skill Weak... Practically RV’s Your Life Man…Hope Everyone’s Watching This And I’d Love To Talk About Your Skill…But I Don’t Talk Alot Shit* sub-par attempt at a personal, not hard at all From ‘Murder Capital’, But The Only Thing He’s Seen On This Is Pure Rejection Get Brutally Dissected Faster Than A Horny Guy Getting An Errection Weak. Why would horny guys get dissected? You Have No Sense Of A Keyed Verse, That Comes Straight From The Random Scriptures So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick, Cuz This Kid Is Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures Decent vocab usage in closer, but wasn't very hard Troop: "M"en "A"bove "B"itches sent Henchmen with 2 Thongs 2 Stripz Your an Emcee with Lisp tryed Scriptures only Delivered Skriptz Decent opener, good play off his name, saw a few multis here too Should of Copyrighted Wayne Sig rights cuz Posa's come Fully Skriptz Equipped with Joint & Slingshot & thinks he's "Soulja42o" Weak personal You have the Ability of 1 Legged Dwarf thats tryna Ducka Shelf If you defeat Tc then u Out of a crew..Stop tryna Fuckya Self 2nd line had an aight personal, setup was played, yet funny imagery Jocked my style.Next is Dyein ya Hair wit"Sperm-in-ya-Bleach" This ya Toughest Fight Since Transvestites @ Virgina-Beach Decent... Juggling FlowIntelligents Jock Strap 2 get in M.a.b Sic "Lic"Ture Leave u Bruised No Ability 2 Show ya Face like ya Sig "Pic"Ture Weak closer Winner: Troop, for harder punches, and an overall better verse. This really wasn't that good of a battle though, neither of you came really hard, but no hate. Return the vote to a link in my sig, do it honestly:thumbup: |
This was feedback posted for *Troop*
just checking polls cause both of ya'll is like fam
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Voted For: *Troop*
damn i had to voe on this one troop; the wordplay was fuckin craz. this shit was off the hook. got me like...dayum..the punches were decent.probably 7.5/10 some hit some had potential to hit but didint..ur vocab was nice.from now on uze this structure im tellin u itz fiya....mayn overall nice drop 8.4/10 skriptz; structure was good. but ur styll not that good yet. u;ll get bette eventually. ur flow was choppy. punches didnt hbit.. good vocab. umm no real personals. this was decent but nothing compared to his overall;6.3/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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