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Alien 12-11-04 11:26 PM

Symm3trik vs Socrates
 
Battle Rules:

16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

sorry but I just can't drop tonight, but if you're as overated as everyone else says, that shouldn't be a problem, and believe me, I won't duck, take my word for it.


Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 12-12-04 at 11:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 12-11-04 11:30 PM

Symm3trik has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 11:30 PM.

Logic The Goonie 12-11-04 11:31 PM

Well ok i'll accept but don't take three fuckin days to drop ya heard?

System 12-11-04 11:32 PM

Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 11:32 PM.

Alien 12-12-04 09:11 PM

see you're in Crhyme Sindicatenow ...but we hardly C.S.
enygma said yes to you...only so Tha Q could see fags
I'd even call this a filler man...but we all know he knows
each time we talk bout Soc...it's considered a freepost
phantom, socrates, wordscape, damn man I can't count
only thing soc's growing...is his growing list of accounts
here watch me give a recount of socrate's life in one line:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates By PM
If you think I suck come see me in Elevated Frontlines
show's he can't live socially...even his pick-up lines are dry
so when I just asked him how's life.....

.....wait, bad question.....

SOCRATES HAS NO LIFE!!! :nono:
so dispite his type, my rhymes will still leave this kid killed
cause flowing diarrea is his one and only "displayed" skill
the way I see things...the kid's soo heading for the crates
so bad I'm even now choking......the shit out of Socrates!
damn...even with 10000 socrates I'll still leave em merked
I now see u have lots in common with sperms...
...ONLY ONE IN TWENTY MILLION WORK!!!!!! :gfy:

Logic The Goonie 12-12-04 09:57 PM

Come on kid, fuck with the best and you're bound to fall
You claim i'm overrated, but shit, you aren't rated at all
I'm killin this bitch, and I don't really plan on stoppin
Cuz with the punches I throw atom,you know im bombin
There's something you're wrong in, you cant fight 'nuff
Passage of life? Please, life musta just past you right up
And the punch is slight cuz, but don't think that its wrong
16 lines? damn i've NEVER seen an asian come this long
You peepin this song, and the asain jokes leave you a loss
Shit I could lyrically blind you talkin bout dental floss!
See im the boss, so once i'm droppin you're just done
Of course YOU don't want crew votes, you aint got one
See now you're my son, you can even hear my voice blarin
Shit you only got a 3 in ya name.....
......................cuz thats the line everyone stops carin
And im done wih this fool, cuz really its just a loser
Kid's in taiwan can't make the cut......
................................... they just make my computer

VOTE NIGGA!

L.E 12-12-04 10:10 PM

Voted For: Socrates

Honestly this was a pretty close battle...both had dope punches and personals...flow was good from both, Socrates had multies...close, but Socrates comes wit harder punches and personals. No hate.

Return the favor honestly please...

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz

Thanks.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Logic The Goonie 12-13-04 12:11 AM

Aye Sym, I still wanna know who you are homie, that was a good verse, thanks for the votes, uppin.

¤ÐÅž¤ 12-13-04 05:47 AM

Voted For: Socrates

this was 1 sided.........soc had a much better verse..
you kno its true..!......that is all.......

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Alien 12-13-04 08:20 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
Aye Sym, I still wanna know who you are homie, that was a good verse, thanks for the votes, uppin.

me? you want the truth, I'm just another kid on RV. The reason I know your alias is because I read threads, in this case is the one about alias. You were like, "I'm proud of my alias: wordscape, superstrobe, etc...someone step up."
I'm not active, haven't been in a long time. I just watch people talk about stuff. You might've seen me around as my freeposting alias Crossroads. That's all really.

^^^(If you don't want to read all that, long story short, I'm nobody known, I elevated on RM and I wont tell you who I am there)

Logic The Goonie 12-13-04 06:34 PM

Ah fuck man, tell em who the hell who are on RM.

And if you're Blackberries I hate you :(

Alien 12-14-04 09:44 PM

I'm sorry...I'd like to remain anomynous for a while

uppin for more votes.

anxiety 12-14-04 10:26 PM

Voted For: Socrates

Damn... Hot battle... Symm... You had punches... But thats about it, nice, nothing really stood out. Good idea with the quote... It worked there... But your structure was often way out of whack... And some lines didnt even rhyme at the end...

see you're in Crhyme Sindicatenow ...but we hardly C.S.
enygma said yes to you...only so Tha Q could see fags

Nope... That doesn't rhyme...

Good verse, i give you a 78/100

Soc... Damn... Nice verse... Opener is a little bit played... But after that, you ripped him... Some creative ass lines in there... I take it that Symm is asian... That closer owned him, that was fucking tight...

And im done wih this fool, cuz really its just a loser
Kid's in taiwan can't make the cut......
................................... they just make my computer

Best line IMO...

92/100

V/Soc

anxiety 12-14-04 10:31 PM

I forgot... Peep this OM with me and Flow Intelligent... Bizzy was being racist, so we merked the fuck outta him.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165446

4fil 12-16-04 10:55 PM

This was feedback posted for Symm3trik
 
lol..... battle of the month..... you guys both in my crew so better not vote.... but lol... both verses were funny shit...
damn...even with 10000 socrates I'll still leave em merked
I now see u have lots in common with sperms...
...ONLY ONE IN TWENTY MILLION WORK!!!!!!
^^^^*Ahem...* funny shit
You peepin this song, and the asain jokes leave you a loss
Shit I could lyrically blind you talkin bout dental floss!
^^^hahahahhahahaha lol

Alien 12-17-04 08:41 AM

uppin............................................. .............................

FlowIntelligent. 12-17-04 04:06 PM

Voted For: Symm3trik

symm3trik:

see you're in Crhyme Sindicatenow ...but we hardly C.S.
enygma said yes to you...only so Tha Q could see fags
^^good personal decent opener 6/10
I'd even call this a filler man...but we all know he knows
each time we talk bout Soc...it's considered a freepost
^^lmao dope bar 8/10
phantom, socrates, wordscape, damn man I can't count
only thing soc's growing...is his growing list of accounts
^^dope bar good consistency 7/10
here watch me give a recount of socrate's life in one line:
show's he can't live socially...even his pick-up lines are dry
^^decent bar 5/10
so when I just asked him how's life.....

.....wait, bad question.....

SOCRATES HAS NO LIFE!!!
^^ how about this is the wackest bar ever 1/10
so dispite his type, my rhymes will still leave this kid killed
cause flowing diarrea is his one and only "displayed" skill
^^decent punch good meta 6/10
the way I see things...the kid's soo heading for the crates
so bad I'm even now choking......the shit out of Socrates!
^^weak 4/10
damn...even with 10000 socrates I'll still leave em merked
I now see u have lots in common with sperms...
...ONLY ONE IN TWENTY MILLION WORK!!!!!!
^^dope closer good meta good punch 8/10

overall : 45/80 (56%)

socrates:

Come on kid, fuck with the best and you're bound to fall
You claim i'm overrated, but shit, you aren't rated at all
^^played concept 4/10
I'm killin this bitch, and I don't really plan on stoppin
Cuz with the punches I throw atom,you know im bombin
^^dope meta decent punch 7/10
There's something you're wrong in, you cant fight 'nuff
Passage of life? Please, life musta just past you right up
^^good bar 7/10
And the punch is slight cuz, but don't think that its wrong
16 lines? damn i've NEVER seen an asian come this long
^^dope bar lmao had me rollin 9/10
You peepin this song, and the asain jokes leave you a loss
Shit I could lyrically blind you talkin bout dental floss!
^^ehh decent 5/10
See im the boss, so once i'm droppin you're just done
Of course YOU don't want crew votes, you aint got one
^^lol decent set up good punch 6/10
See now you're my son, you can even hear my voice blarin
Shit you only got a 3 in ya name.....
......................cuz thats the line everyone stops carin
^^weak 4/10
And im done wih this fool, cuz really its just a loser
Kid's in taiwan can't make the cut......
................................... they just make my computer
^^dopest bar of this battle 10/10

overall : 52/80 (65%)

vote: socrates

Vote switched

FlowIntelligent. 12-17-04 04:07 PM

shit lol ill get that vote switched im having some problems today 2nd time i did that

For$akeN 12-22-04 08:56 PM

Voted For: Socrates

Uranium
see you're in Crhyme Sindicatenow ...but we hardly C.S.
enygma said yes to you...only so Tha Q could see fags
that was pretty played I don't like it at all and please
quit making references to tha q just because he's a homosexual 3/10

I'd even call this a filler man...but we all know he knows
each time we talk bout Soc...it's considered a freepost
weak once again it wasn't the greatest 0/10
phantom, socrates, wordscape, damn man I can't count
only thing soc's growing...is his growing list of accounts
hated this bar a lot......yes it was a personal but it
just wasn't effective! 4/10

here watch me give a recount of socrate's life in one line:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates By PM
If you think I suck come see me in Elevated Frontlines
never rhyme lines with the same exact word it ruins the
entire thing........4/10

show's he can't live socially...even his pick-up lines are dry
so when I just asked him how's life.....
.....wait, bad question.....
SOCRATES HAS NO LIFE!!!
worst bar in this verse....non-effective, played
wasn't even a actual punch and I disliked it. 0/10

so dispite his type, my rhymes will still leave this kid killed
cause flowing diarrea is his one and only "displayed" skill
it was sort of a personal meh.5/10
the way I see things...the kid's soo heading for the crates
so bad I'm even now choking......the shit out of Socrates!
weak again....0/10
damn...even with 10000 socrates I'll still leave em merked
I now see u have lots in common with sperms...
...ONLY ONE IN TWENTY MILLION WORK!!!!!!
that was a terrible ending 3/10
overall 2.375/10

Socrates
Come on kid, fuck with the best and you're bound to fall
You claim i'm overrated, but shit, you aren't rated at all
well I understood the punch a bit but not that effective
in my opinion ummmm about a 4/10

I'm killin this bitch, and I don't really plan on stoppin
Cuz with the punches I throw atom,you know im bombin
nice wordplay in here pretty original 7.5/10
There's something you're wrong in, you cant fight 'nuff
Passage of life? Please, life musta just past you right up
meh didn't really like this punch at it pretty played 2.5/10
And the punch is slight cuz, but don't think that its wrong
16 lines? damn i've NEVER seen an asian come this long
don't diss asian:nono: or you make me cry beotch!
but it decent 5/10

You peepin this song, and the asain jokes leave you a loss
Shit I could lyrically blind you talkin bout dental floss!
ewwww....hated this bar a lot 0/10
See im the boss, so once i'm droppin you're just done
Of course YOU don't want crew votes, you aint got one
pretty good.....5/10
See now you're my son, you can even hear my voice blarin
Shit you only got a 3 in ya name.....
......................cuz thats the line everyone stops carin
decent ender but not the best in your verse...5/10
And im done wih this fool, cuz really its just a loser
Kid's in taiwan can't make the cut......
................................... they just make my computer
overall: 3.625/10

seen better from.....soc never heard of Symm3trik:huh:
vote: soc

Recluse 12-23-04 04:16 PM

Voted For: Socrates

^wow i'm supprised......both came better than i thought.....
.
.
Soc:
you verse was nice good punches,wordplay and personlas....your strucutre was good and i was feeling ya close nice shit...overall:9/10
.
.
Uranium:
your shit was hot too good punches,and personals...your strucutre was off...and your wordplays were atempted...but not there....good job from both...overall:8/10

Sik Wit It 12-24-04 07:37 PM

Voted For: Socrates

Uranium - nice drop...punches were kinda hard hittin decent structure from you...nice vocab & flow...and decent persona's there..overall u had a decent drop, punches could've been harder tho.. 6/10

Socrates, Plato, Alexander The Great, Ptolemy Ass - punches from you were kinda hard hittin too...decent structure, nice flow, good vocab, overall u had a nice drop too...work on them punches hoe! 7/10

Overall - Socrates took this one, came harder in the punches & flow...Uraninum came weak cuz those punches werent really on the spot but it could've if he had them harder, but Soc took this one


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