WICKEDCLOWN vs sdizzle
 

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WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 01:59 AM.

sdizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 02:00 AM.

ur personals, or punches.. shit i cant decide which hit worse
cuz its obvious he'll lose this battle... yea if he doesn't quit first
your future looks blurred, fuzzy, dim.. theres no clarity
and we've all had enough profit.. so we gave to charity
its funny, i listened to this newb try to tell me hes the shit
its not like the kid aint low ridin, but hes got C.a.L.i on his dick
u could add up every win u have, it wouldn't match my total
but he gets clowned so much, he has nightmares of bozo
beating me u must be loco, this is the time when u start walkin
& rapverse doesn't need to call u ugly....ur face does the talkin

ay.........uppin this shit.....................................oh and dizz.... suck a dick faggot

This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN
 

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Voted For: sdizzle

Hmm...I hate to say it but i think sdizzle got this one...just because he did have harder hitting punches. Both flows were pretty good...Wicked, you just need to work and making more creative punches...no hate.

Return the favor honestly please.

Topical: hipnoticz

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz

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Voted For: sdizzle

Dizzle, ya fucked up when you began this silly little beef
all of RV knows ya rhymes reek worse than ya mommas queef
kinda weak... i mean how much thought did this really take?- dissin mommas is 85' status
faggot gettin DR votes in the Text tourney and callin me wack
you talkin shit when its plain to see that YOUR verbal skills lack
ok, but wheres the punch?
the luster that it takes to be a well rounded EMcee in this life
ugly fucker, no wonder you hate, cause ya life is filled with strife
again... where's the punch?
no one on RV respects you cause we all know ya wack to the bone
postin pics of ya self actin like a thug and expect not to get owned
decent personal, but again how much thought did this actually take?
constantly by the entire site, faggot im sick of you and ya nerdy ass plite
makin racial slurrs what gives u the right? no matta, ya dead and outta site
filler mcfillerness
yea so all in all you had one half decent verse, I truly hope ur opponent is better than you cuz Ima be pissed if I have to sit through another one of those

ur personals, or punches.. shit i cant decide which hit worse
cuz its obvious he'll lose this battle... yea if he doesn't quit first
uh oh... yea this was pretty weak too
your future looks blurred, fuzzy, dim.. theres no clarity
and we've all had enough profit.. so we gave to charity
Im hopin this kids alias is profit or else this bar was pointless... so I'll assume that its his alias for ur benefit
its funny, i listened to this newb try to tell me hes the shit
its not like the kid aint low ridin, but hes got C.a.L.i on his dick
decent personal, kinda humurous
u could add up every win u have, it wouldn't match my total
but he gets clowned so much, he has nightmares of bozo
finally a bar worth chuckling to... this was funny I liked this
beating me u must be loco, this is the time when u start walkin
& rapverse doesn't need to call u ugly....ur face does the talkin
ahh, yea decent punch again, seems like ur verse started a little slow but u picked up the pace at the end... I'd say you won on the strength of ur last two bars- both verses all in all were kinda basic, but you actually through some punches. vote dizzle.... please return the fav... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163936

ya notice the trend of audio heads commin down to vote on this shit?....? makes ya wonder whos on whos dick dont it

If the audio forum wasn't filled with battles involving kids in my crew I wouldn't bother... but gotta get votes from somewhere... dont get swelled.

uh oh wicked complaining again... he might quit this battle like the tournament

Boy returned favors are sure nice these days...(In other words, take a fuckin' hint haha.)

wtf thats fucking gay as hell

upping for my win

upping u ho................es///////////////////////////////

Voted For: sdizzle

no one on RV respects you cause we all know ya wack to the bone
postin pics of ya self actin like a thug and expect not to get owned

vs.

its funny, i listened to this newb try to tell me hes the shit
its not like the kid aint low ridin, but hes got C.a.L.i on his dick
u could add up every win u have, it wouldn't match my total
but he gets clowned so much, he has nightmares of bozo

Thats 2-1. sdizzle next time youmention rv in a verse i am going to vote against you, i hate that. WC did iight but only threw one punch that was even close to being good. sdizzle wasnt even trying and he still owned WC cuz he had better worded personals and good concepts although this wasnt a very good battle. =/

V-dizzle

nice job soc, way to hate vote.... u talked shit to me in the "underrated" thread earlyer then u vote aganst me in 2 battles in less than 10mins apart from eachother.... hatevotin mother fucker

I'm voting on all the battles idiot, not just yours, look around, I don't hate on peoples skill, you CLEARLY lost but go ahead and bitch about it if you must but that is a bitch move.

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

opENING: WICKED .....SDIZZLe urs was played
Ending: tied
Personals: wicked
Lyrics: wicked
Flow: tied
Structure: tied
Punches: wicked
Originality: wicked
Multis: neitha

Overall
WICKED - 8/10
sdizzle 7.5/10

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Voted For: sdizzle

Mmm, Well You Both Suck...
But Dizzle Was Better Then Clown...
Clowns Ish Was Corny, Talking About Queefs And Shit???...
Thats Not Hard That Just Gay...
Dizzle Just Had Better Punches, Flow, Structure...
Just An Overall Win...
.One.

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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

WC TOOK THIS BY FAR HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES STRUCTURE AND AN ALL OUT VERSE SDIZZLE FUCKIN WACK CONGRTAS HOMMIE ~1~

lmao....^^^^^^^^^^ WACK VOTE.......................GODDAMNIT EXPLAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUUUUUCK!

^^^^^^^^ Wc Sorry Bout Tha Explanation But Wc Had Betta Structure,punches And Some Wordplay Have Some Strong Vocab N A Lil Betta Personals Ya Lyrics Wass Hot No Doubt Tha Opening/closing Wass Iight Come Harder Everi Verse


Sd Wat Tha Hell Yo That Shit Sucked All Ova Tha Opening/closing Wass Terrible No Personals That I Seen Lyrics Sucked N Tha 1st 2 Lines And Ended Up Tha Same Way At Tha End Elivate A Whole Lot More Make Ya Punches Mean Somethin Ya Did Have Originality It Was Originally Wack Damn Hommie That Shit Sucked Im Not Criticizn U But Juss Elivate A Whole Lot More........................................~1~

Voted For: sdizzle

WICKEDCLOWN: 1st bar was very played...............well anything that says "mommas queef" is clearly not the best bar ever. 2nd bar wasn't really a punch in my opinion. 3rd bar was whack....4th bar was very played.....dissing his picture isn't really funny anymore.....after its been used in a shitttt load of battles. final bar was......decent but not all that effective namean? overall: 4/10

sdizzle: 1st bar was whack....yep. 2nd was an okay bar not the greatest but still okay. 3rd bar was alright actually sort of effective in a way. 4th bar was pretty funny nice personal. and the final bar was very odd....clowns aren't always ugly hehe ummmm overall: 6/10

vote: sdizzle

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

Well lookin over this battle i see a lot of tension *sounding like psychic lol* but there is a lotta hate here between the two and it was reflected well in this text battle...my analysis...

WickedClown...usual fire i'd expect from you personals out each human hole possible very angry style that works for ya definitely i was feelin this piece by ya flow was on point & structure was decent enough some small worked punches they're finally startin to come together keep on them but you had a good verse.

Sdizzle...Opener was good but kinda played i've seen bars end with punches like that all too often now...the profit bar was good....some aight personals the bozo bit was funny closer was good too...flow and structure again was good between the two of you there really wasn't much in it but ima have to make a vote and i'll go wit...

V/WickedClown...coz his verse emulated more on the beef you two generated and personals were decent enough to claim the win...but still i suggest working on punches in the future...RTF in my sig

This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN
 

hmmmm you know this sdizzle fucking nerd gots some talent. lol. Shit I'll battle you. I ain't gonna vote because it was kinda hard. You both were good. But WickedClown's punches hit harder. Good job man. Until we meet again fam. sdizzle battle me. :D.... Or are you too pussy.

Voted For: sdizzle

sdizzle :

ur personals, or punches.. shit i cant decide which hit worse
cuz its obvious he'll lose this battle... yea if he doesn't quit first
^^lmao dope personal.. quit first like the tourney i liked that dope bar 9/10
your future looks blurred, fuzzy, dim.. theres no clarity
and we've all had enough profit.. so we gave to charity
^^ehh decent 6/10
its funny, i listened to this newb try to tell me hes the shit
its not like the kid aint low ridin, but hes got C.a.L.i on his dick
^^dope meta decent punch 7/10
u could add up every win u have, it wouldn't match my total
but he gets clowned so much, he has nightmares of bozo
^^ehh decent 5/10
beating me u must be loco, this is the time when u start walkin
& rapverse doesn't need to call u ugly....ur face does the talkin
^^good closer 7/10

overall : 34/50 (68%)

wickedclown:

Dizzle, ya fucked up when you began this silly little beef
all of RV knows ya rhymes reek worse than ya mommas queef
^^wtf good flow wack punch 4/10
faggot gettin DR votes in the Text tourney and callin me wack
you talkin shit when its plain to see that YOUR verbal skills lack
^^ehh decent 5/10
the luster that it takes to be a well rounded EMcee in this life
ugly fucker, no wonder you hate, cause ya life is filled with strife
^^no 3/10
no one on RV respects you cause we all know ya wack to the bone
postin pics of ya self actin like a thug and expect not to get owned
^^decent played personal 5/10
constantly by the entire site, faggot im sick of you and ya nerdy ass plite
makin racial slurrs what gives u the right? no matta, ya dead and outta site
^^wack closer 3/10

overall : 20/50 (40%)

vote: sdizzle

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Voted For: sdizzle

hmmm this was a okay battle, not the best, jst average...

Both of your verses we're kinda weak,

WickedClown:
Your verse was pretty much as good as a newb's verse, your structure was better then a newb's verse but ur punch and flow just sucked,

only good line in ur verse is:
Dizzle, ya fucked up when you began this silly little beef
all of RV knows ya rhymes reek worse than ya mommas queef
this made me laugh a lil.. it was pretty good

worst line is:
the luster that it takes to be a well rounded EMcee in this life
ugly fucker, no wonder you hate, cause ya life is filled with strife

that is basiclly a filler, no punch at all..
you should really put more thought into ur punches man..

Sdizzle:
your verse pretty much was as good as wickedclown's verse. Almost as good as a newb's but structure is better then a newb's..
BestLine:
beating me u must be loco, this is the time when u start walkin
& rapverse doesn't need to call u ugly....ur face does the talkin

this shyt hella made me laugh..good one

wostline:
u could add up every win u have, it wouldn't match my total
but he gets clowned so much, he has nightmares of bozo

don't really know who bozo is but yea, that was just a kinda diss i guess, but also a filler..

Vote: sdizzle
Reason: Sdizzle had more punches which hit harder and jst basiclly had more punches..