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Emcee Burner vs Chaos
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 12-15-04 at 12:47 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 01:33 PM.
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Emcee Burner has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 05:39 PM.
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Boy Chaos, he has corrupted no citys in this land of high costs,
I'm the only light gone out in the array of his only "Bad" Loss. If he asked for mercy, I'd beg him to step back and pleade, If he became delerious, He couldn't Unite, or make me bleed. For my first trick I will show this mess up how to get messed up, This will be a good defeat, Have your people get dressed up. I feel eight lines raises the intensity of my verse to be diverse, You're the only one who sticks out, You messed up the worst. If you dont get my verse..... Then dont vote. |
Yo,emcee burner
I'll Rip your Fucking Mouth Out-And Stick Ya Teeth On Ya Own Dick..... You Burning Emcees-Is Like Garanteed Being Accepted Into The Crips!!..... Your Shit Man- I'll Shit All Over You And Ya Future!..... Your Avy-Explains What Ya Gonna Do In The Furture..... This Nigga-Is Not Even Old Enough To Get A Job As A Elf!!.... Because His Vocab-Skills Are Even Below Empire!!!......Only Cuz He's 12!!!!...... "Here To Burn Emcees"Is What His Sig Claims....... But He Change His Name To Devistation-Cuz He Found Out We Were Above His Grade..... Go Home and Watch Some-Power Rangers-And End Ya Falling Fam..... Cuz Ya Too Young To Play-The-Game Like 5th Graders Skiping To 9th Grade!!!..... (his name is emcee burner) (hes ten) (Garanteed is a "Crip"<lol) |
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... Uhh... I am 12....... Lil' mistake .. oh well.... Nice verse I like it...... Lets see who wins this... Uppin for votes. |
^lol..yeah...but that was a quick key...and my ass hole dad was yelling at me...lol...
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[b]uppin for come votes..............[b]
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Voted For: Chaos
uhm..ha..this is a bad battle... but my vote goes to chaos for even attempting punches... lmao@emcee burner saying if you dont get my verse then dont vote..nigga there wasnt shit in ya verse to understand...seems to me like you were just Trying to make your verse flow rather than putting some hard hitting punches in there.....Chaos' punches werent hard hitting but they were there which is the reason i voted for him Vote chaos |
^please bitch stfu...uppin for more votes....
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uppin for more vote up in this bitch.....[/color]
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Voted For: Chaos
My vote goes to Chaos: liked how you played the whole age thing, had some weaker stuff in there but overall was it a nice drop...vocab was decent, wordplay good, was def. feeling your flow... Devistation : i liked some of your lines but wasn't always feeling your flow. Vocab was nice though, wordplay was good...but some shit in there didn't make too much sense really... |
^thanks...uppin for more votes.....
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Voted For: Chaos
Chaos: I'll Rip your Fucking Mouth Out-And Stick Ya Teeth On Ya Own Dick... You Burning Emcees-Is Like Garanteed Being Accepted Into The Crips!!... Weak opener, seemed directed more at Garanteed than Emcee Burner Your Shit Man- I'll Shit All Over You And Ya Future!... Your Avy-Explains What Ya Gonna Do In The Furture... Ok attempt at a personal, just not worded very strongly This Nigga-Is Not Even Old Enough To Get A Job As A Elf!!... Because His Vocab-Skills Are Even Below Empire!!!...Only Cuz He's 12!!!!... Punch didn't hit, another attempt at a personal "Here To Burn Emcees"Is What His Sig Claims... But He Change His Name To Devistation-Cuz He Found Out We Were Above His Grade... Go Home and Watch Some-Power Rangers-And End Ya Falling Fam... Cuz Ya Too Young To Play-The-Game Like 5th Graders Skiping To 9th Grade!!!... Attempt to switch up rhyme style falls short. Punch wasn't hard at all, bad closer Emcee Burner: Boy Chaos, he has corrupted no citys in this land of high costs, I'm the only light gone out in the array of his only "Bad" Loss. Attempted wordplay in second line, punch didn't hit though If he asked for mercy, I'd beg him to step back and pleade, If he became delerious, He couldn't Unite, or make me bleed. Weak, didn't connect For my first trick I will show this mess up how to get messed up, This will be a good defeat, Have your people get dressed up. Not really even a punch I feel eight lines raises the intensity of my verse to be diverse, You're the only one who sticks out, You messed up the worst. Weak closer... Winner: Chaos, for more consistent punches, harder punches also. Although this wasn't a very interesting battle, Emcee Burner you're new so you just gotta elevate, but Chaos, I've seen better from you before... Return the vote here |
uppin for more votes...............
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uppin for more votes....damn!....
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uppin for more fucking votes here.....
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OMFG......Uppin for more fucking votes please....
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Voted For: Chaos
This Nigga-Is Not Even Old Enough To Get A Job As A Elf!!.... Because His Vocab-Skills Are Even Below Empire!!!......Only Cuz He's 12!!!!...... ^^^^ That Line Wass Mad Funny But Ya Punches Hit Like Hell Ya Flow Wass Easy Ta Read Good Personals And Tha Last Line Koed Him So Mih Vote Goes Ta Chaos....Return Tha Vote In 1 Of Mih Battles |
Voted For: Chaos
Devistation i wasent really feelin that shit good stucture n shit but you need work on yoru punchlines and wordplay if you had that you would be lethal you flowed very well but i just wasent feelin that to much use a lil more vocabulary to make people think if its actually i punch...sometimes it trickes them if they dont know what the words means into a punch...lol no hate.. Choas pretty good verse overall...i like yours punchlines and wordplay mixed with some tight stucture and vocabulary on most lines anyway...but yea overall i feel you got this trigga...just a more of a vet style...also not to forget them witty metaphores..they were tight...no hate pz VOTE...Choas |
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