MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ vs stg
 

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10-LINES
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-12-04 at 04:50 PM

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stg has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 04:22 PM.

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 04:24 PM.

ok u lil bitch ya rymes is kinna tight / but ill blow em out the water like napolean's dynamite/ i keep a 9 in the glovie,macten in da trunck/ 818 we get it crackin,fuck getin it crunk/ it aint n e were ta hide when i let the macs spray/ u in the e r the next mornin,and burried the next day/ and ima be byn the church ta see ya caskit drop/ ligh up the funiral and have yo pasture drop/ wut kinna name is tha homie?"mr authentique"/ when im finsh wit u they'll call ya mrs pathetic/

stg? what an creative name, but i'll use your life to make an bloody art
let me start, putting bloody marks, like your name in red .......color font
like an chewed pen cap, your punches get chewed up with mulitple dentures
leave multiple pimples, watch 5,000 porno tapes, ya rhymes still get censored
Like an puppet with no blood, this kid stg cant get no cold, cant embrace siknesss
I’ll rip you easily like an wet paper towel, with an hard rock going through it
Go to FAQ and ask them why you lost against me, they’ll respond that u wack
Like I’m praising to you, you lungs will get smash together, get SOUL CLAPPED
WHAT? You cant breathe, let me rip out your lungs throw them in the air
Lets see if you can catch your breath. Now I got you breathing in DESPAIR


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Voted For: stg

dog dat was hella are you a newbie imma battle ya
ass lata shit i'll be waitin.....good shit though

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Nice verse...elevation is good for everybody. That stg bitch is wack...you got this one easy. Anybody who votes against you is DR.

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

V/mista_auth3ntiq......this was a one sided battle mista had better punchs wit creativity an good vocab wit Structure....stg u had sum good punchs but they didn't hit consistent also ur structure u need to fix....
punchs=mista
multi's=mista
vocab=mista
structure=mista
overall=mista
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

this was a pretty one sided battle......

mista....you should use more multis, definitely not your strong point.....ummm your punches didnt hit too hard but still hit harder than stg's.......structure was decent...wordplay was blah....and the "rip out your lungs" line is seriously played out.....i used a line like that , that was pretty much the same.....but i used it prolly 2 or 3 months ago.....

stg.....u should elevate....no multis, structure was fucked, no wordplay, no real punches.........you will be alright but u just need to elevate....

i voted for mista because he had better punches, structure.........return favor in my battle vs. terror2005

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

mista definitly won.............better everything.....stg had bad punches and terrible structure...mista's wasnt that bad but did need improving on the opener....also couldve used more multies..mista wins because of stg's terrible structure, and bad punches...weak verse from stg.....

v/mista_auth3ntiq

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

checkin pollz...work on structure fam...goddamnit lol

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

flow=mista
opener and closer=mista
metas=mista
wordplay=mista

mista won the other guy rap like a newbie wanna be thug lol

best lones

WHAT? You cant breathe, let me rip out your lungs throw them in the air
Lets see if you can catch your breath. Now I got you breathing in DESPAIR

wut kinna name is tha homie?"mr authentique"/ when im finsh wit u they'll call ya mrs pathetic/
^and that was shitty

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[ur]http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159765[/url]

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

One-Sided here, MiSta took this one in
punches, flow, structure, persona's, and vocab...overall
had a decent drop.

stg..elevate more, cause i'd rather eat garbage than read one
of your drop's again...so elevate more, fix your structure work
on your punches, and all that shit...