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Lawless (Hs) vs The MC
Battle Rules:
6 Lines no feeding No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-12-04 at 05:40 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
The MC has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 05:11 PM.
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Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 05:16 PM.
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this bitch nigga can't match what I do wit the rhyme/
I'll lay bows to this nigga dome like a beauty salon/ MC you ain't reel nigga quit the frontin'/ hoe my guns spit similar to jukes by Mike Vick you gon be missin sumtin'/ I got steel that a light ya grill/ this faggot couldn't get 'a hit' if he had Mike Tyson's skills/ nigga I faced way illa folk/ when you couldn't 'be hot' if you was in a sauna wit a chinchilla coat/ yea you quick wit the crossover but the mak hurt they handles/ and this so called MC couldn't 'blow' if it was his birthday candles/ i'm tryin to figure out is it war the man spittin'/ keep talkin' shit and end up 'shot' like a Ford Transmission/ nigga |
Fucka,you can't be serious,you about to get hit-man,
The only way u'll be fly,is if i put u next to a fucken fan, Lawless?, well it doesn't count if you break rules online, You don't make cents,like bums with "i want beer" signs, I don't need multis to solve this simple minus equation, Your like the food at white castle,cept no ones craven, |
u went way over the line limit.i said lines not bars.u should lose automatically
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oh shit my bad... can you match it?
I got like 3 otha battles and I swear I didn't see that shit... can you match it... if not i'll cut it.. |
cut it off cuz i dont feel like making more rhymes at the moment,im not in the rapping mood.
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nigga I faced way illa folk/
when you couldn't 'be hot' if you was in a sauna wit a chinchilla coat/ yea you quick wit the crossover but the mak hurt they handles/ and this so called MC couldn't 'blow' if it was his birthday candles/ i'm tryin to figure out is it war the man spittin'/ keep talkin' shit and end up 'shot' like a Ford Transmission/ nigga |
Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
Lawless took this one easily... Definately better personals, wordplay, flow, and versatility. It just seemed more complex with better rhymes as well. |
yea... I should have taken it easy on em'
thanks for the vote... I think i'ma retire from newbie battles I wanna be able to spit more and have competition although I'm new to this site... I'm yet to be beaten n e where but w/e good try kidd... |
we need some feedback on this battle... let's do this ppl
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Voted For: The MC
The MC nice punches, they were hard and landed decent flow, nice structure, and okay vocab didnt see no wp, but overall decent drop..... Lawless (Hs) decent punches, flow was chopped, structure was blah vocab was the only thing good from you, elevate more then u'll start winnin battles... |
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lmao im a newbie? i wasnt even tryin nigga,,,,,this isnt my first user name. my overall net record is somewhere around 40 wins and like 15 losses. so dont call ME the newbie |
w/e nigga..... I'm not newbie either so the flows are mutual iight.... n e ways ain't lookin' for beef i'm lookin' for battles....
my bad for puttin that n e wayz cause I boast way too much I expect to take a loss on this site it has potential..... but besides that... let's jus get feedback |
word up and good luck on the rest of the voting
uppin!!!! |
uppin for some votes people.... this battle is hot and it is currently tied
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checkin the pollz..........................................
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
IIGHT U GOT THIS BY A LONGSHOT THE MC'S VERSE WAS HORRIBLE URS WASNT THAT GOOD THO BUT U HAD HIM BY THA PUNCHES NO PERSONALS OR VOCAB THA MC HAD BETTA STRUCTURE BOTH OF YALL SHOULD ELIVATE ~1~ |
come on people let's get some votes on this battle
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
Aii This Is Hot The King Breaks It down The breakdown Punchez...Law Personals...law Meta's..MC Vocab..MC Structure...Law Multi's...Law So there You Have it folks i hope i helped in a good way ...........now RTF in my Battle against Hang-man Please Thank you you are so kind |
uppin for votes people don't go unheard in this shit iight....
peace |
we need votes people.. please respond to this folk..
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we uppin votes please send your reply to this ppl
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we r uppin for votes ppl come lay a response iight
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we need some votes people come add your opinionz..
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we need some feedback on this battle folks... help me out here...
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we are uppin' on this battle people come vote.....
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
no doubt he gets my vote in these cats, hits law flow law but keep elevating on dat rhyming law opener-closure kaw personals law imaginary law so over all law and hey law do not forget to be having peeps hit up on our bats peace. |
we are uppin for votes people.... come respond....
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we gon need some votes folks... post your opinionz
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we need some more votes people...post your opinion
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Voted For: The MC
THE MC GOT THIS ONE IN MY POINT OF VIEW... THE MC---I LIKKED URE FLOW AND STRUCTRE...YOUR PUNCHES HIT HARD AND FAST...WORDPLAY WAS GOOD...METAS WERE ALLRIGHT FEW AND FAR BETWEEN BUT THE ONES YOU HAD WERE PREETY GOOD... BEST LINE---I LIKED THE WHOLE VERSE EQUALLY I THOUGHT IT WAS DOPE...7/10 LAWLESS(HS)-WERE VERSE WAS AIGHT...BUT URE FIRST BAR DIDNT EVEN RHYME...STRUCTRE WAS KINDA OFF LINES A LITTLE STRETCHED OUT...METAS WERE ACTUALLY PREETY GOOD...RHYMES WERE KINDA BASIC BUT I LIKED IT...U HAD SOME EMOTION I URE VERSE BUT I HAD TO GO WITH THE MC CAUSE HIS HE HAD A BETTER FLOW AND PUNCHES HIT HARDER... BEST LINE---yea you quick wit the crossover but the mak hurt they handles/ and this so called MC couldn't 'blow' if it was his birthday candles/(PREETY CREATIVE)5/10 PEACE... |
Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
Haha...once again, my man Lawless comes thru with them untouchable punches of his...Real good shit fam...You took this battle easily in every single category...Return the fav and hit up the link in my sig on my battle vs. Lil D...1 |
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