Cannabarz vs 3x
 

Battle Rules:
8-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-15-04 at 05:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Cannabarz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 05:32 PM.

3x has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 05:39 PM.

i keep a revolver n my hand like yosemite sam/
I'll put a bullet in ya chest and leave a whole in ya man/
we ride on bitch niggas like you all the time/
blow a hole in your skull and now we know whats on ya mind/
stop it, im toppin every thing you plotin/
imma keep spitin sick till my lips get rottin/
you hear the tires screech on the streets when i let go of the slugs/ i'll leave yo ass with a face only a mutha could love/

i droped fast cause igotta go

upping for votes. ! .. ................................

Voted For: Cannabarz

3x came weak... real weak. You from RB..but that don't mean I'm votin 4 ya.

Cannabarz took it. I hate when ppl put the '/' at the end of the line... makes it look stupid. Cannabarz had better punches and flow. Took it easily.

Nice job to both

uppin people vote

This was feedback posted for 3x
 

Wow That First Line 4rm Cassidy Freestyle Iss Koo Tho Im Not Votin Juss Checkin It Out

uppin this yo people vote

come on vote uppin

Voted For: Cannabarz

once again u have ripped anotha one kidd... ill flow.. nice punches devastatin' ersonals... the two things to master in a battle... you clearly got the win...
return the favor on my battle against young soulja

upin this people vote

Voted For: Cannabarz

Cannabarz: decent drop form you..punches were aight..structure was blah..flow was on point..(dont captialize the words)..but overall u had a decent drop

3x: i wasnt feelin ur drop..punches were weak..decen structure from you..vocab was aight..but overall ur punches need improving

RTF Cannabarz

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uppin again people vote

Voted For: Cannabarz

3x, you had very simple rhymes and no punches, and no wordplay. three things you need to win a battle, work on that.
for wordplay start out with comparing things with (like),,, for example- nah ..3x is not here like a DIRT BIKE on NURF TYPES
^^^not all that cool, but see how that works? put a diss and then think of what that think can literally mean and put like in the middle of the two. think of any disses or compliments and then think of somethin that it could mean literally, another example, your verse has more wackness in it than his hand with lotion. or sumin i just freestyled that one. ^^ but see how u call someone wack than or dope or drop hot. anyway read tutorials.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
cannabarz-
not that hot of a drop, but u obviously know more of what your doin then the other cat so you gotta take this battle. my favorate that i understood kinda. was your first bar, if he has a blinking avy. decent personal punch, and i like how you didn't set it up sayin you make him lose life, i dont like selfgloryifing lines.
anyway hit up my battle in my sig wit an honest vote. peace

Voted For: Cannabarz

flow cann
structure cann
opener-closer cann
personels cann
imagry cann
vocab cann
hits cann

but hey keep elevating dog you will get their peace. And oh yea look up my bats peace.

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