Lawless (Hs) vs GoldenCat
 

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Verse Do In 60 Minutes

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Check in by: 12-12-04 at 07:09 PM

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GoldenCat has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 06:40 PM.

Yo His name is Lawless, im guess he has no laws~
Thicker then blood soaked paws fuck him~
Ill break the bitch in two~
Peaces that is Peace is what its gonna say on your gravstone~
Better-Get-Home befor i kill you son~
its all fun and games till i rip you son~
Ill break all this bitchs laws~
Make him look like my bitch all 4 paws~
Pause the game and stop this lame...ASS mother fucker~
He getting to becom a bugger~
You dont wanna feel my gats boi!~
I got a 9mili and a yes im strapt boi~
Run to your hood and lit your ass up~
Maybe then you'll shut your ass up~
Yes its unlimited bars~
And yes ill make you have unlimited scars~

Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 06:48 PM.

I will spit first let's try n get this done tonight so we can get votes iight

I'm LAW the natural born man slayer/
this cat couldn't get 'signed' if he was a fan's paper/

damn... I prmised to let the next dude hang/
but I rather see this bitch freeze up like a scratched PS2 game/

he livin' a scarred little dream/
he couldn't spit fresh if he gargled listerene/

the boy will melt ya be ya father and belt ya/
G cat couldn't drop hot bars if he was a welder/

he can't controll the guns I handle/
the bullets will have him makin' moves similar to Honey Daniels/

the verses I kick will leave you incoherent/
i'll fucc around and ground ya like a dissapointed parent/

his pace is different I know where his fate is sittin'/
can't talk hard cause the only grill he stepped to was to recieve a plate a chicken/

he ain't no compariso to the steam I'm liftin'/
I'll have this BITCH on his knees like he was bein knighted by the queen of britian/

listen and pay attention to the shit I'm bussin'/
this nigga could be 'behind bars' if he was muslim/

no offense to muslims....

i'm out this cat is through

Lets get some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can we please have some feed back in this shit.... I been waitin'

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

LAW
Wordplay:
1this cat couldn't get 'signed' if he was a fan's paper/
2but I rather see this bitch freeze up like a scratched PS2 game/
3he couldn't spit fresh if he gargled listerene/
4G cat couldn't drop hot bars if he was a welder/
5the bullets will have him makin' moves similar to Honey Daniels/
6i'll fucc around and ground ya like a dissapointed parent/
7can't talk hard cause the only grill he stepped to was to recieve a plate a chicken/
8I'll have this BITCH on his knees like he was bein knighted by the queen of britian/

^ Lawless easily had the best wordplay and punches. Look at how many punchlines he used there.

multis, internals, rhymes: lawless easily. he had internals on nearly every line, whereas a few of goldencats line didn't even rhyme, they just repeated the last two or three words at the end of the line, which would sound horrible

lawless takes this on the superior rhymes and wordplay

Btw can you vote on the link in my sig?

I only got 2 votes in the last 8 or 9 days. Battle's getting slept on

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

damn this battle is so onesided lawless took this hands down cause his verse actually was worth taking time to read goldencat's verse was simple lacked anything good as far as puncheds ot anything not tah sound mean but wtf? lawless at least got creative with his wordplay the honey daniels line was aight what was you watchin honey when you was typin... anyways no contest to lawless...

lol.... as a matter of fact YES I happened to be watchin' the film lmao.... anyways thanks for the votes yall
this kidd.. is wack and I had to prove it.... one mo to close this shit up

i knew it hahaha and yes you took this kid....

uh.... put that in a vote so I can get this ova wit' I called this nigga out two days ago for this battle plz... vote so I can get my first win out of 4 battles that are incomplete...

oh my bad kidd... I didn't realize who u was........

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

okay cool battle but dis was kind of wun sided........

opener-law cool punch betta than cat's shit
structure-law
punchlines-law hands down
wordplay-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-law.....um cat ya first 4 lines didn't ryhme lol datz enuff said rite there law u merked him i'll give it 2 u

I'm LAW the natural born man slayer/
this cat couldn't get 'signed' if he was a fan's paper/

damn... I prmised to let the next dude hang/
but I rather see this bitch freeze up like a scratched PS2 game/


my first 2 bars rhymed

how is this battle not done easy vote lawless had this

we need some votes people hit us back wit datso we can finish this battle

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

lawless made more sense lil harder punches....golden.....go harder on the punches and get your flow a lil better and youll be aight

ou does 4-0 close a battle or what....
if it does where do I update my record... or does it do it automatically?

I need some replies for this... we need votes people post your opinion

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

both shits were wack...
hardly saw any punches, structures
were like whoa, and the flows...u lost me
but for comin less wack, (Hs) took this one