stg vs limited edition
 

Battle Rules:

8-12 linesw Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-15-04 at 08:49 PM

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stg has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 08:51 PM.

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 08:51 PM.

life is like a box of chocolates,neva kno wut u gunna get/come around talkin tha shit n you'll b meetin the tech/illness spillen out the mouth so u would think i wus sick/nigga i'll put red dots on ya eyes like u wus takin a pic/this niggas a straight bitch,n hes sorry i picked'em/they should call him x box cuz i own the system/if u think u can c me then u must b insane/have yo ass scare crowed b 4 i blow out ya brains/nigga i got a million gunz like attack of da clones/fill the clip ,load the mack ,then im attackin ya dome/i think youv learned ya lesson bitch so pack up n go home/

...A'yo...

Stg? What does that stand for? Sound's like std...
...only in wack names, this fuckin' herb is bestin' me
Just give up facin' people wit 5 wins you failed your mission...
...I'll scare you outta the game, you in RapVersephobic condition
You in the position of stupidity, herbs don't battle me that's a given...
...'Cause you one of the livin' now, by acceptin this battle ya grave you diggin'
Of time, this was a waste, dawg learn your place quickly...
...you'll have actualy skill after this 'cause the lines you bit from me...

This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
 

OMFG STG you came at my krew leader that wasnt very nice

but'll give u some pointers fam

fix your struture its messing up the flow fam

work on that fam


in this battle limit ripped you with every aspect of freestyling catergory

werd peace

Haha werd...this was too easy I wouldnt be surprised if this was slept on for eternity...

Uppin' for votes...favors will be returned.

Voted For: Limited Edition

STG NO PUNCHE OR DISSES SELF GLORY BAD STRUTURE OFF FLOW OK VOCAB WORK ON ALL THOSE YOU DIDNT DAMAGE YOUR OPPENANT YOU BASICALLY DID A 50 CENT VERSE 2/10
LIMITED LOL AT OPENER GOOD PERSONAL LOL SECOND LINE GOOD PUNCHES HERE AND DISSES NOT GREAT BUT WHEN YOUR OPPENANT HAS NONE YOU DONT NEED TYSON SWINGS GOOD STRUCTURE LIL STRECHED FLOWED GOOD VOCAB DECENT A 5/10

^^Haha...I didn't even try...but thanks uppin' for some more votes.

Voted For: Limited Edition

Aii this how it is

stg
I Can tell you are a newb but man that verse was out of this world bcuz i didnt know if u were dissin him or yourself lol n e way i think that you need to come wit betta punchez and personals and multi' and meta's...................basically everything bcuz you lacked alot of things in this battle sorry mayne

limited edition
your verse wasnt really ALL DAT but compared to your oppenents verse .....phew !!! lol but n e ways you punchez were decent i didnt see any real personals umm.....you need betta work on combining your multi's wit your meta's then youll be str8 but i did like ya verse

^^^^^and thats how i feel^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
And this is what you can do

RTF
this would be the decent and good thing to do if you dont then you are a bitch lol SIKe jus kiddin but plz do return the favor ASAP bcuz i need to get these battles out of the way Thanx.

^^I didn't try in this battle. Yeah I will return the favor...

Voted For: Limited Edition

V/Limited edition....he had better punchs an multi's an structure...stg...u need to elavate ....ur verse had sum punchs but ur structure was off.....
punchs=le
multis=le
vocab=le
structure=le
overall=LE
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

^^J. Freeza...links please...

King Dip...already voted on one of ya battles before, and you didnt return. Call it even. Uppin to close this fuckin wack battle...

Uppin' for some more votes..........................

Voted For: Limited Edition

Stg? What does that stand for? Sound's like std...
...only in wack names, this fuckin' herb is bestin' me
^^nice wordplay and personal
Just give up facin' people wit 5 wins you failed your mission...
...I'll scare you outta the game, you in RapVersephobic condition
^^decent punch couda been harder
You in the position of stupidity, herbs don't battle me that's a given...
...'Cause you one of the livin' now, by acceptin this battle ya grave you diggin'
^^good punch nice multis
Of time, this was a waste, dawg learn your place quickly...
...you'll have actualy skill after this 'cause the lines you bit from me...
^^nice punch had some humor i thought

ok easy win no doubt lol...i woulda voted honestly on 1 of ya other battles but i dont have enough wins yet....bu nice flow...was consistant.......wordplay was good........good punches.........nice personal....ok metas..............good multi usage.......structure was iffy ya had soem stretched lines.....decent vocab



life is like a box of chocolates,neva kno wut u gunna get/come around talkin tha shit n you'll b meetin the tech/illness spillen out the mouth so u would think i wus sick/nigga i'll put red dots on ya eyes like u wus takin a pic/this niggas a straight bitch,n hes sorry i picked'em/they should call him x box cuz i own the system/if u think u can c me then u must b insane/have yo ass scare crowed b 4 i blow out ya brains/nigga i got a million gunz like attack of da clones/fill the clip ,load the mack ,then im attackin ya dome/i think youv learned ya lesson bitch so pack up n go home/

NEVER write like this again..i repeat NEVER write like this again
it throws off ya flow........its horrible structure.......and its not easy to read.....nobody likes it..........so learn that......other than that ya had a decent flow......punches were weak tho.....no personals.......good multi usage.........basic vocab.......dont talk like you own 620437650824375 guns when first of all i bet they not even real...........bttles are about dissin your opponent not talking bout how u got guns and shit like that.....just work on dissin you opponent more direct......and figure some personals in ther and fix how ya write and you'll succed more in battles..........no hate just sayin how it it......
:thumbup:
v/Limited Edition

A'ight thanks...uppin' for the final vote. Favors with links will be returned.

uppin people vote

Voted For: Limited Edition

(2)punches limited
(3)enjoy stg
(1)originality limited
(1)wordplaylimited
(1.5)multies none

(4)limited edition
(3)stg

limited edition wins by one point 4 to 3
Why Did You Lose?
this was a close battle but he tooh it by just a little
Why Did You Win?
nice drop you barley beat him