Terror2005 vs SpecialMayonaise
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Riding

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 12-15-04 at 09:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Terror2005 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 09:41 PM.

Yo son im tellin da truth in dis battle your dealin wit a "deadly target"//
U wouldnt be on fire even if u was covered wit gas had a match and sparked it//

I really dont think ur goin to win dis one cuz winnin is my instinct//
ur style is bout as fake as the "backstreet boys" and "N'Sync"//

i could merk u in words or in da street cuz im 2 ruthless//
my lyrics will hit u in ur mouth and leave u toothless//

yo im already the real rap king in my devision//
me seeing u win dis would jus be a vision//

how come everytime u see me ur ass scambles//
yall should know by now voting against me is a big gambles//

yo im goin to tell u dis 100-3 is my record desire//
u aint goin to beat me cuz ur lyrics r bout as weak as a flat tire//

me gettin a record contract in dis rap game is my passion//
ill look into ur future and all i see is ur career doin is crashin//

i know we might be enimies in dis site i call it "Arch Nemesis"//
u could take out me or my crew even if u was da "Bourne Sumpremacists"//

my rhyming style is da best ever cuzz its supreme//
have u feelin bulletz even before i pull da Infared beam//

I connected wit punchlines like a modem from verison//
dawg u couldnt be over top of me even if u was my horizon//

SpecialMayonaise has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 08:02 PM.

aiight check it..

If you wanna see some terror, take a quick peep at his verse
Cuz i back up my beef like a meat truck stuck in reverse
Buck and i burst, im the nastiest when i spray in a bout
this bitch terror will be scared when im laying him out
i rip tracks, split cats, talk shit and ill spit back
make my verse hit you so hard you end up gettin whiplash
so if you wanna come dope you better be sniffin some lines
im honest, amaze and astonish when im ripping ya rhymes

Uppin votes people dont sleep honest votes only dont vote on records vote on verses and explain da shit 2.......~1~

Uppin votes people dont sleep honest votes only dont vote on records vote on verses and explain da shit 2.......~1~

Uppin votes people dont sleep honest votes only dont vote on records vote on verses and explain da shit 2.......~1~

Voted For: SpecialMayonaise

upping this shit for some votes :thumbup: hoecakes

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oh shit my bad ill get that vote removed lol ........

yo lets uppin dis bitch lets get some more votes honest votes only...........~1~

yo lets uppin dis bitch lets get some more votes honest votes only...........~1~

yo lets uppin dis bitch lets get some more votes honest votes only...........~1~

uppin dis bitch lets get some more honest votes......~1~

uppin dis bitch lets get some more honest votes......~1~

Voted For: SpecialMayonaise

Special M took this one..
punches were hard hittin, structure was aight
vocab wasd decent, and the structure was ok
overall S.M. had a decent drop

Terror..ur punches lacked..structure was stretched
and the flow to it lost me..overall..elevate more tho
then maybe u'll start winnin battles..

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yo uppin dis shit lets get some votes come on RV dont sleep......~1~ favor will be returned

Voted For: SpecialMayonaise

LOL...both of you are wack as fuck.....terror...just quit please...to save us all the wackness....SP....i see alittle elevating coming your way if you work at it....well my vote goes to SP...for better atempting punches.,,..and better personals....v/SP

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uppin dis bitch lets get some votes in people honest votes only.......~1~

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

Voted For: Terror2005

If you wanna see some terror, take a quick peep at his verse
Cuz i back up my beef like a meat truck stuck in reverse
^^^special, dope wordplay but not a punch.

terror, real basic stuff but more actual punches not as many self gloryfing lines like sayin what you can do or like "im layin you out"

Yo son im tellin da truth in dis battle your dealin wit a "deadly target"//
U wouldnt be on fire even if u was covered wit gas had a match and sparked it//

I really dont think ur goin to win dis one cuz winnin is my instinct//
ur style is bout as fake as the "backstreet boys" and "N'Sync"//
^^^more of the right idea, think of sumin to call him or sumin he's lackin, and put it into wordplay form. not bad.
vote-this cat for doin more of what your sopposed to in battles

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

This was feedback posted for Terror2005
 

checkin pollz............

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

Voted For: Terror2005

Vote: terror 2005

dis shit shud b a K.O

openr: terror
closer: terror
vocab: terror
structure: special mayo
lyrics: terror
originality: terror
punches: terror
personals: neitha - maybe mayo
wordplay: terror

terror - 8.5/10
mayo - 6/10

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Voted For: Terror2005


Terror Got This
Wow Terror This Was Some Decent Shit Hommie, You Vocabulary Was Here, Punches Was Hitting, Not To Mention Personals, You RHyme Scheme Was Decent, WordPlay In Here Was Tight, Some Mulit's Not Much Meta's But Aye This Was A Good Verse Hommie......9/10

Special
Damn Homes You Need Some Elivation, Rhyme Scheme Wasn't Here, Punches Wasn't Even Touching Terror, Personals Wasn't Even Good, Word Play There Was None, Need To Throw In SOme Multi's Here And Get Some Meta's.....6/10

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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

for all these gay ass votes fuck you lmao i didnt even try and if any of you knew my alias you wqould be bowing down cuz i have beat you or could beat fuck all you noobs lmao im 56-4 minus no shows faggots lmao ya'll noobs is crazy

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

Voted For: Terror2005

flow terror
opener-closure terror
imagry terror
vocab terror
personals terror
hits terror
lyrics terror
rhyming terror

hit up my links peace.

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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP

Voted For: SpecialMayonaise

this might sound crazy but im givin this battle to SM. this is a perfect example of quality over quantity. SM's verse flowed great no dr or nothin. but he won the battle jut bcuz of flow n ssome nice multies. Kamikaze's shit was real basic n long n didnt accomplish much so im givin the battle to SM.
holla at me wit a honest vote
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