MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ vs Big Woody
 

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10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 12-13-04 at 10:50 PM

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Big Woody has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 10:21 PM.

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 10:21 PM.

Yo I’ll wring serve this fool faster than fast food chains
Like you in an all girl class, I’ll leave this kid out-manned
I seen your interest, coming up against me and you’ll get tackled
You wont receive an win on me, you’ll just get an big ass fumble
Your getting rotten, cause of my punches are made of icy water
Yes I’m scientific, with an authentic mind, battling u why do I bother
Yo he cant pursue hot knowledge cause he only got night school
Talk shit in my toilet and catch your ass on fire like an blazing stool
my hotness I got dis nikka feeling softy like cookie dough
Kid you only whish you had real skillz but you an fake like Pinocchio ~!



*water rottins wood*
* he goes to night school*
*if you look at his profile, his interest is football*


ALL PERSONALS BABY

:headbang:

School has been takin up my time

I stopped your heartbeat...now there's no blood circulatin
My rhymes keeps pokin at your brain, aint that frustrating?
You're lyrically unstable...dry off and put down tha power cables
Authentic is a lie, a fictional story featured in Aesop's Fables*
I dont think you comprehend, this is when you try to defend
Kause Ima bout to make your neck-n-knees become best friends
Clocks runnin outta ticks, glocks runnin outta clips
I'll leave ur head spinnin and spriklin dark red drips
Tha shit I spit leaves niggas sunkin like that cruise ship*
Now look at and see who's mouth aint spittin lyrics

*Aesop's Fables is a book of short stories, and the author makes folk tale books too. Look it up
**The Titanic duh

Lets get sum...
...muhfuckin votes
in this bitch!!...

Voted For: Big Woody

v/big woody......close battle but he takes this wit his punchs they were more creative an he had good vocab an multi's.....mista....u had a good opening but u weren't consistent wit the flow of ur diss's....
punchs=woody
multi's=woody
structure=tie
vocab=woody
overall=woody
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Blah Uppin For Some God Damn Votes Holla At Cha Boi Werd

Voted For: Big Woody

aii This Is How i Break it Down

Punchez--BW
Personals--MA
Multi--BW
MEta's--BW
Vocab--BW
Structure--BW

Sorry MA but you jus didnt put yo all in this battle........sorry
Do Me A favor and vote in my battle against hangman Bcuz its alomst over if yall to jus go n there and vote bcuz i got this battle all the way..........but if you feel i lost then thats you .......but jus go n vote honestly
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This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

watchin the pollz

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

[Center]IP:


Yo I’ll wring serve this fool faster than fast food chains
Like you in an all girl class, I’ll leave this kid out-manned
I seen your interest, coming up against me and you’ll get tackled
You wont receive an win on me, you’ll just get an big ass fumble
Your getting rotten, cause of my punches are made of icy water
Yes I’m scientific, with an authentic mind, battling u why do I bother
Yo he cant pursue hot knowledge cause he only got night school
Talk shit in my toilet and catch your ass on fire like an blazing stool
my hotness I got dis nikka feeling softy like cookie dough
Kid you only whish you had real skillz but you an fake like Pinocchio
Weak Battle And It Was Hard Ta Decide....
Iight That Wass Ok Tha Personals Was Thea Tha Metas You Fix Ya Style Some Of Tha Words Didnt Rhyme But You Still Did Ok In This Battle.....7.7/10


I stopped your heartbeat...now there's no blood circulatin
My rhymes keeps pokin at your brain, aint that frustrating?
You're lyrically unstable...dry off and put down tha power cables
Authentic is a lie, a fictional story featured in Aesop's Fables*
I dont think you comprehend, this is when you try to defend
Kause Ima bout to make your neck-n-knees become best friends
Clocks runnin outta ticks, glocks runnin outta clips
I'll leave ur head spinnin and spriklin dark red drips
Tha shit I spit leaves niggas sunkin like that cruise ship*
Now look at and see who's mouth aint spittin lyrics


Pretty Weak Tha Vokab Wass Koo Tho Nice Punches And Personal Ya Strukture Wass Koo But Diss Him Alot More And Have Betta Personals......No Hate 7.4/10

/V M_A

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Maaan Big Woody wasnt ready at all i dont think...Mista you reppin to da fullest...your punches was off da chain connecting causing damage....Structure was good....this battle was one of the better battles i seen from you...nothin in this verse was off....keep ya self like this one you'll be almost unstopable

^^^^^^^^^^hater Give Me Props Big Woody Lol


Anyway Uppin For Some Damn Votes

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ


Mista
Aiight Nive Verse, Your Structure Was There, Along With your Vocabulary Good Work, Rhyme Scheme Pretty Decent, Punches And Personals Is What Won This Battle You Had Some Decent Shit Here, WOrd Play Was Used Well, Over All This Was A Good Verse......9/10

Woody
Not Far, But Not Close, Your Verse Was Kind Of Weak, Played Punches, Was Un Use Full Your Vocabulary Needs To Be Upped, Get Some Word Play In Your Verse, Personals Would Of Done It But Wasn't Hard Enough, Meta's Was Decent Over All You Need Work On Harder Punches.....7/10

Mista Auth3nTiQ
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Cool Thanks Uppin For Some Damn Votes Holla At Cha Boi.........werd

C'mon People Uppin For Some God Damn Votes Holla At Cha Boi

Stop sleepin on this peeps!!!!

Damn its tha Holidays!! :thumbup:

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

better rhyming scheme more personals used in this battle by him and his punches where harder. But hey keep elevating home I am also peace and hey cute pic witht the baby lol.

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

ok i vote for u cuz u had better flow not way better but just better and better punches and better rhymes scheme ans way better multis and wordplay woody u could of had this but u didnt u had wrong shit and u fucked up but anyways my vote goes to u for better punches and multies

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Damn yo uppin for some votes. c'mon holla at cha boi~!!

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

big woddy:
damn that was tight you came good...nice wordplay and creativity and some tigtht punches....and then you had a good damn stucture and flowed very well...your verse was good but mista came way better just keep working on your shit you could be super dope some day...no hate

Mista:
whoa ok this is your best for stucture and flow you had some tight punchlines and vocabulary here...most of all you had some tight wordplay and creativity in there....to be honest this was actually your best man the best ive ever seen from you for a text battle..no hate to both..pz

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Werdnizzle fo shozizzle, yo uppin for some more votes holla at cha boi

All righty, uppin for some more votes holla at cha boi~!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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just checking poll ,.............decent battle both of ya

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ - Good spit, flow was on and your punches were landing.

Best Line - my hotness I got dis nikka feeling softy like cookie dough
Kid you only whish you had real skillz but you an fake like Pinocchio

Worst Line - Yo I’ll wring serve this fool faster than fast food chains
Like you in an all girl class, I’ll leave this kid out-manned

Big Woody - Good spit some desecnt flow and some hard hitten punches.

Best Line - Clocks runnin outta ticks, glocks runnin outta clips
I'll leave ur head spinnin and spriklin dark red drips
Tha shit I spit leaves niggas sunkin like that cruise ship*

Worst Line - stopped your heartbeat...now there's no blood circulatin
My rhymes keeps pokin at your brain, aint that frustrating?

OVERALL - close battle here, both had a good flow and some pretty good punches. I thought MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ came harder though wit the punches and personals. Big work on the punches next time.

Vote - MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

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Werd, uppin for some votes holla at cha boi........

Voted For: Big Woody

whoever voted for mr. auth has no judge character.

this battle was completely mis-judged...

Big Woody:

your verse was decent, the words were understandable and you had a structure, you seem to lack personal skills, hit him hard with punches, but relate it to em in some way, people do notice that sort of thing. your verse wasnt that good, but it came clean. did your thing and came out on top. elevate & battle with the best.

on the other hand...

mr. authentic:

your first four lines didnt even rhyme, you automatically lose in my book. when you wished me good luck with my battle, you drew attention to yourself, made me check out your battle, seeing if you were any good. well your not wack, you just have a lot of work to do, which is normal, i was so wack when i started, and still have miles to travel. but ive gotten somewhere since i started. now i dont know how you got those few votes so far, but swaying is a cheap way to win, you should want to win because your better, not because you'll return favors or all that bullshit. you didnt win this battle ethically. elevate. and good luck to you.


vote: big woody