livin-legend vs YoungSoulja
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-17-04 at 05:45 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

livin-legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 05:46 PM.

yo my rhymes is quick and lethal off the mental, yo my rhymes is so influental producers wanna sign me cause they see tha potential they like how i write wit the pad and da pencil. youll become #1 on da hit list every stop and stare like damn did he really spit dis ill put you in s box like a pack of ritz bitz. like how da flow go i stack i dont blow do beside that ya whole crew is a no show. I rap gravy and clap 80's you look retarded like t macs baby. i would kill a man and take the grands let these shots spin you around like ceiling fans they know livin-legend the man walk to school wit da book bag and da book of raps in my hand. ask around about who i be try me i leave you wit no left eye like tlc (no disrespect rip) the ability to rip an mc is so sick dont think u invisible cause you will get hit. You talk about guns just stop it bet 1 grand dat u cant even cock it let alone pop it. Look at the signature im above greatness the flow is nice alot of people gone hate this ..... Good Night

YoungSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-04 06:23 PM.

nigga,imma tell it to you straight
next time PM me or call me out so
i can leave you twisted right

you must not know dat im comin
and risin to da top quick/dis plate tectonics
and dis yo submission

uh, you take em off da top,i take em
and dont think it/to tell da truth i aint really
tryin hell, you go ahead and be gay and N sync

lol,a livin legend,nigga you aint even won
one battle/and i did cock and blast dat gun
remember,but you like to run

lets have some fun,you say dat dae wanna
sign ya/if dis is true how come you still
wound up

wind up and end up gettin lined
up/next!,wit da ghat to chest and ya
blood stops pumpin,and ya turn yella,uh,ya true colla

im sayin thanks fo da beef cuz im feelin
kinda hungray/got mah noodles boil
and you iz goin' unda soil

i cant loose to you a chump wit no
style/like banks im to fly but wont
hesistate to turn you like a piston,under a pile

yo can we get some votes.......uuuuppppiiiinnnnn
damn c'mon why yall sleepin on me

damn,we still aint got no votes c'mon RV
dis is ridiculous........uuupppppppiiiinnnn for
votes

yyyyyyyyyoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
vote please

Voted For: livin-legend

*Yawns* Another Weak Battle.Yung Your Shit Didnt Even Rhyme.

Flow-Livin
Vocab-Livin
Punches-Livin
Metas-None
Multis-Livin
Humor-None
Structure-None
Creativity-None
Vote-Livin
Reason-Taking Nothing From You Son, But Try To Pick Better Comp Next Time.And Please Do Come Harder Cause Your Verse Was Weak.

You Could Give Me A Bit Of Respect And Vote On One Of My Battles.[vs] ol dirty mexican or [vs] Jax.

aiight dog and mah shit did rhyme
question is can you read

yo lets get some votes plz.....................! mutha ******

Voted For: livin-legend

votin for livin legend but the battle seemed weak. Legend had better punches and multis but his structure was way off i think. No personals really by either of you but i still give it to Legend. Step it up yall

uppin for some more votes....!........! more votes plz....!!

Voted For: livin-legend

this was an easy dicission. Really! i couldn't even make sense of young soulja's verse! both ya'll work on bettah disses.
return tha favor

damn fam we still doin dat battle,lol
.................................................. ......
well holla

Voted For: livin-legend

wow this battle was koooo.....dope abttle...overall Fatal.....got this easily.....

Voted For: livin-legend

Normal Punches-L.L, nice punches. Some creative ish in there, but some not. Y.S, not that great punches. Unoriginal and not that strong.

Personal Punches-L.L, you had em, they were good ones. Y.S, try some more personals.

Metaphors- L.L, less of them, but better. Y.S, nigga,imma tell it to you straight
next time PM me or call me out so
i can leave you twisted right? Damn.

Multiple Rhymes-Neither

Structure-L.L, better structure, but not by much, Keep working on it man. Life, lotta stretched lines and ish.

Flow-Decent flow, punches kept it going. L.L, decent flow, fell off sometimes.

Word Play-Nice wordplay, Y.S was good, but try to avoid other MC's names. Y.S, not a lot of wordplay. Work on having more wordplay and wittier at that.

Living Legend, not bad man. Punches were nice, but you need to try some personals.

YunSoulja, ok verse. Try some better punches, word play, and personals.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/Living Legend

One Vote. One Battle. One Win