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d.j em sce vs xcell
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waiting for oyu to check in..............................just to make sure oyu actually want to battle
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xcell has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 05:57 AM.
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im about to decline becasue oyur taking to long to check in
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d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 06:03 AM.
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aight homie calm down stop trippin
ya ain an mc ya dk get back ya records skippin/ im gonna spin ya like vinyl goin ganist me ya must b senial/ uve gone loco essay stop tryin to delay the invidable ya actin like forplay/ ya a waste of my time a wast of my rhyme/ yo why u moain and pissin i only got on more diss in me if i was brom u still couldnt wipe the floor with me/ |
This kid could flip his record multiply by two and mines would still be better
lol I excel pass the capacity of your comprehension Constantly raising the price for you to pay attention Your miss conceptions get me cumin harder than erection Entering this battle you went the wrong direction Let me guide your ass back to the tutorial section See you never stood a chance like Christopher reeve Tried to roll up on me with a record I could not believe a crease n ur shoe is da biggest impression dat u'll eva~make for heavens sake not even GOd could help dis herb elevate aight i dont think i need to try that hard so here you go my record is 41-9 |
my speelings of so heres the corrections:
aight homie calm down stop trippin ya ain an mc ya a dj get back ya records skippin/ im gonna spin ya like vinyl goin ganist me ya must b senial/ uve gone loco essay stop tryin to delay the invidable ya actin like forplay/ ya a waste of my time a waste of my rhyme/ yo why u moain and pissin i only got on more diss in me if i was a brom u still couldnt wipe the floor with me/ |
good nite its time for me to take my tired ass back to sleep...
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This kid could flip his record multiply by two and mines would still be better
lol I excel pass the capacity of your comprehension Constantly raising the price for you to pay attention Your miss conceptions get me cumin harder than erection Entering this battle you went the wrong direction Let me guide your ass back to the tutorial section See you never stood a chance like Christopher reeve Tried to roll up on me with a record I could not believe a crease n ur shoe is da biggest impression dat u'll eva~make for heavens sake not even GOd could help dis herb elevate aight here you go...and my record is 41-9 |
This kid could flip his record multiply by two and mines would still be better
lol I excel pass the capacity of your comprehension Constantly raising the price for you to pay attention Your miss conceptions get me cumin harder than erection Entering this battle you went the wrong direction Let me guide your ass back to the tutorial section See you never stood a chance like Christopher reeve Tried to roll up on me with a record I could not believe a crease n ur shoe is da biggest impression dat u'll eva~make for heavens sake not even GOd could help dis herb elevate aight here you go |
uppin 4 votes all votes well be returened
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Voted For: d.j em sce
yea dis wuz raw and i really think u ripped dis dude good luck to da rest uv ya battles Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: d.j em sce
yo...ive battled u and u were much better than this. extremely weak battle but i have to give it to him for making sense and having a better, but not good, flow. the only good line inthis whole battle was by him...which is a crease n ur shoe is da biggest impression dat u'll eva~make for heavens sake not even GOd could help dis herb elevate so i give it to dj emsce by a bit |
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Voted For: d.j em sce
opener:dj vocab:dj structure:dj closer: dj punches: dj wordplay: dj this battle wasnt even close...xcell's structure was way off, and so was the flow...no vocab and the punches werent all dat great...dj won this by a mile...he had a better closer, punches...he definitly had better structure and flow...both could improve on their openers...my advice for xcell would be to elevate ALOT b4 he tries to go against a vet like dj...for dat fact b4 he battles anybody....my vote goes to dj emcee v/d.j em sce Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: xcell
Gotta vote for xcell on this one... He had better punches and vocab, while he was a little off on the structure... Please return the favor by voting @ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166119 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin for votes........................................
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This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
1 sided...good shit bro...
...lol neva had a chance... |
uppin for more voters........................................
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uppin... all votes well be returned
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Voted For: xcell
this was a kinda battle but im givin this 1 to xel cause i liked how he dissed his name the basically the whole verse it was full of personals so thats what really got my vote is rhymin was aight flow was good but the personals r the thing that did it 4 me i espacillay liked this line... im gonna spin ya like vinyl goin ganist me ya must b senial |
uppin people dont sleep...
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Voted For: d.j em sce
OK XCELL STRUCTURE HORRIBLE HERE BROOM IS SPELL CRZY WRONG THIS LOOKS LIKE A 10 YEAR OLD RAPS NOPUNCHES DISSES AINT HIT NO FLOW A 1/10 DJ GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTURE HER GOOD VOCAB AS WELL PUNCHES WERE OK AND DISSES TOO WHAT HAPPENED YOU USED TO BE GOOD NOW YOU JUST BLAH ANYWAYS YOUR PUNCHES FAR OUTSHINED YOUR WEAK OPENANT 4/10 |
Voted For: d.j em sce
d.j em sce took this one: more hardhitting punches and personals, structure was better. Liked vocab and wordplay in there, overall solid drop! xcell, improve your vocab to make it more complex and fix your structure cause it wasn't fun to read. Also put some more bold things in there to bring the other cat down...just read other battles and keep on doing ya thing... |
aight im uppin this batle becuz i is being slept
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Voted For: d.j em sce
here is my vote flow dj imagry dj vocab dj personals dj hits dj opener-closure tie multi dj over all it was dj and hey hit up on my links and leave and honest vote. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin for feeed back...or voters.............................
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slept slept slept slept slept.......this is getting slept.........
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Voted For: d.j em sce
shit was 2 easy 4 u fam.....cell ya verse was 2 basic nothin stood out no creativity.......dj ya shit was hott u aint even need personals in dis opener-dj structure-a tie punchlines-dj creativity-dj multis-dj wordplay-nun personals-nun finisher-dj enjoyed-dj...nuff said links r in my sig..return da favor ya'll |
uppin for voters or atleast some sort of feedback.
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uppin for voters our some type of feeddback........................
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uppin for some voters damn man this battle is getting slept
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this is a freepost.......................................... ...........
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Voted For: d.j em sce
you so won this shit man congrats you can actually spell every word that fool didnt make any sense dawg |
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